Start from the Blacksmith Shop and Become a Refining God

Post one yourself to entertain yourself. Is it true that no one is watching?

The last section of your first chapter is very poisonous! Very discouraged.

The plot is immature and inexplicable, with abrupt twists and turns, a lot of typos, inexplicable behavior and incomprehensible dialogue. Find a job in a factory and stop writing disgusting plots that are disgusting.

As the title states, I want to persuade my own book to be withdrawn. I thought about it and finally thought I'd better say it. I am a newcomer to Chun Chun, and this is the first book I have signed. I don't understand many things, so I put a lot of poison in the book. Fortunately, some of the big guys pointed it out, otherwise I wouldn't have noticed it. I'm really not good at detecting poisonous points. When I read books, I usually rely on the boss's summary to avoid books with too many poisonous points. This also leads to the fact that I have read very few highly toxic books. So, when it comes to detecting poisonous spots, I am relatively slow, which leads to me writing many poisonous plots. Now, I have begun to consciously avoid those plots that may be poisonous points, but I am still in the stage of practicing writing, and I can do a lot of tricks even if I am not careful. Of course, I did consider whether to slightly change some of the previous poisonous plot points, but in the end I gave up (showing hands) because I am lazy (laughs). In fact, there is another reason. This is just a piece of cake. If you change it, won't it just be inlaid with gold? It's better to think about how to use the subsequent plot to turn things around. We already have an idea, but we are still experimenting. We will know if it works or not. Finally, I still have to advise, this book is poisonous, read it with caution! ! ! (ps: If you really can't help but want to give it a try, you can leave your comments so that I can compile a drug avoidance list to ensure that I won't touch it again in the future!)

How can I put it this way? It feels a bit like hitting a hammer here and there. A gold-fingered weapon refiner has been caught up in the calculation from the beginning. He runs here and there. It is understandable. After all, he has been calculated. Then he rewards a gourd to find a ghost to make wine, and then goes to redress the grievances of the ghost? ! You are Lord Qingtian, the Holy Virgin Mary

It is more suitable to use Xiu Xian as the protagonist. Still a few levels of mortal martial arts.

It's okay, especially when I point out errors or inappropriate places, the author will correct them. I feel pretty good. But the character of the protagonist is a bit hard to describe. I don't know whether to call him naive or easy to trust. Also, the part where the protagonist tells Cui Nuxia that her father was assassinated seems a bit awkward.

The article is just like the title. It goes straight to the intensity before it even begins. It also combines the plot so rigidly that it feels like it is about to break off a cliff. No one can live in harmony.