The Star Wars System Is a Hundred Years Ahead of Schedule, and I Will Take Humanity to Ascension

Yang Qin

There are obvious deviations in the football match part. The author even said that the relevant part originally contained 50,000 words of content, which was seriously stuffed for personal use. The football match is a forced one, and it is okay to use it as a node to develop the relationship between the characters, but if the game process is described in detail, I am not here to read a football novel. . . When it comes to football matches, you can't put aside your brain and dig your own grave as if you were a sage. You can only shrink your ability and play hard. This is a poor and unnecessary suppression of the viewing experience. So I didn't subscribe to the chapters of the competition at all. I think the competition process should have no impact on the main plot at all.

Isn't that part of the football team just like racing against ants? Low grades are a given. Readers who are very interested in football will not click on your book. Also, linking the system currency to the real currency is a failure. If nothing else, there will definitely be no shortage of gold bars in Tazhai. You can just move some and surround the system mall. As for the crime of unknown sources of large amounts of property, it is even more ridiculous. Just put the gold bars in a space backpack and go abroad. Since you are linked to real currency, there is no need to impose currency restrictions, just use special props and task restrictions.

Come on, author, your work is still valuable.

At first I thought it was using alien technology to help humans ascend, but it turned out that it was evolution after looking at it for a long time.

The writing is not bad, at least the logic is stronger than some articles. It is worth reading, but the content is small. It depends on how the author uses it later. However, the coolness feels a bit bland. You can try to highlight the protagonist's strength from a third perspective or other ways to improve the coolness.

So will the main character look like this?

It feels like this system is not a hundred years in advance, but a placement word game system.

The previous content is a bit fragmented, it is recommended to be more compact 👍👍

Can you stop being so lazy and write more?

Come on and update, don't be a eunuch and focus on persistence, I will give you a full order later😭

After keeping it for a while, I read it all in one go. It was so cool.

If it's just one chapter a day, then I'll read it during the Spring Festival.

I've finished reading it. You can read it, but I have to criticize the author because he writes too slowly.

Don't some passages sound very human?

Unexpectedly good

Come on, well written, non-toxic

Not recommended, the more you write, the worse it gets, the settings conflict, and the ending is unsatisfactory There is absolutely no value in spending money.

Haokan, keep working hard to update

Urban writing in the early stage, not sure what will happen next

The road is long and long, I will search up and down, and encourage each other😁

The writing is okay, but the evolution of the body is a bit contrary to medical logic. At the beginning of the evolution, it is not relatively simple and easy to improve items such as physical strength, agility, but the five senses of the eyes, ears, mouth and nose are first improved to an inhuman level, and even have abilities such as telekinesis and mental power. So is the evolution chip biased towards the spiritual side?