Douluo Peerless: the Blood of Black King Nidhogg!

Author, the heroine must accept Xuanzi, she just likes big men with chicken legs

The plot between you and Ma Xiaotao is inexplicable. It feels like carrying an ancestor on your back. I won't accept her back.

The writing is good, but there are too many trumpet accounts and heroes saving beauties. Once is enough, any more will cause aesthetic fatigue 🙂

I hope there won't be a bitch like Ma Xiaotao

Ma Xiaotao and his teacher are really disgusting

​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ There are moments when the pretense is smooth and excellent. For example, the battle scene with Ma Xiaotao is very well written, especially the scene where the protagonist Wind King's Eyes and Jun Yan burst into flames to create a soaring flame tornado. However, this kind of high-quality pretense is becoming less and less, and it is just embarrassing pretense. Some have been added. For example, when talking to Xu Sanshi, there was a very strange and wonderful exchange in the style of the third young master of the Tang family. The protagonist neither put on a high profile to show off, nor treated him levelly. It was done in an attitude that was neither good nor necessary, and it was also very unnecessary. In terms of getting along with the opposite sex, I got along well with Ning Tian Wu Feng at first, but after joining Shrek, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was like being bowed down by Tang Shenwang. First, it started to become streamlined and formulaic. Second, it became a bit embarrassing. He especially emphasized shaking hands with Nangong. Nangong immediately gasped and then noticed. The blood of the protagonist is attractive and magical, and the relationship with senior sister Han Ruoruo is very abrupt and boring. Especially the character of the senior sister is also formulaic, which gives people the feeling that it is actually the author who likes Han Ruoruo. The first chapter of getting along with Ning Tian was also caught unconsciously🐻. After reaching Shrek, the emotional lines suddenly became numerous, frequent, boring and formulaic. The character of the protagonist is also somewhat fragmented. At the beginning, the protagonist seemed calm and calm, able to make decisions and work alone for many years, and had some arrogance from a genius. However, after defeating Ma Xiaotao, these were reduced and he became overwhelmed and cramped. Another point is that the author used some unfashionable and uninteresting memes, such as Han Ruoruo asking "Who is Jingjing?" And "One dollar and four Wowotou" as the background sound. When these memes are popular, readers will be invited to comment and participate. After the popularity is over, if the memes themselves are interesting, then it is okay, but if they are not funny and not interesting, then it will only make people embarrassed. I hope there will be no such things as "Blue Skinny Mushrooms" in the future. In addition, the advancement of the plot is very blunt. There is no need for the protagonist to tell his senior sister, do you believe in fate, and then make the cheating Huo Yuhao vomit blood? Reporting is enough. There is no need for the protagonist to decide to fight level 80 at level 40 and escape from several titled Douluo after his roommate told the story of his encounter and asked the protagonist for revenge.                                                   It is good to have a proper detailed summary of the first full-grade competition, but I feel that the details of the final battle with Dai Er and the first battle with Han Lili and Feiyu's guest appearance are reversed. The first battle can be omitted, and the last battle can be more detailed. In summary, it is much better than most Douluo fans.

6. For the sake of the eunuch, you even deliberately wrote the entire chapter title "But for the sake of the king". Are you still pondering to this day?

Awesome

Please add Zhang Lexuan, Ice and Snow Emperor, Gu Yuena, Wang Qiuer, Ye Guyi as the heroine

The heroine should be from the senior sister, who is strong, knows how to repay kindness, has high talent, and has upright views. I want it! !

Personally, I feel that since she is of dragon bloodline, Gu Yuena is the best match.

Was the author lowered by the green-faced beast? Why stop here😡

It's good, it's good, but there are too many vests, and I use them to pick up girls 😭

The heroine asks to be added to Gu Yuena, Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor, Zhang Lexuan, Ye Guyi

I want to see Lao Xuan fall hard😍

To be honest, I subscribe to your book basically every day, but you often write some bad jokes that are boring and particularly dramatic. This kind of writing makes the reading experience very poor.

You don't know how to cut iron, right? I firmly support you. The only one who comes to Douluo from the Dragon Clan is your writing.

The heroine of the author must have Qiu'er. If you see it, please reply.

Byd is really just for your sake.

I'm curious, who can tell? Is the author not updating?

It looks nice in the front, but I feel a little confused behind it.

Snow Emperor