Rebirth the Chemical City and Build the Strongest Monster Castle

Why is the protagonist female? It's better to mark it.

Are 999-level dungeons and a one-year skill cooldown serious? There are more than 30 chapters. Does the timeline in the article cover the past two months? The author doesn't plan to release the skills once before it is published.

I feel like the author went off topic a bit. In other words, the direction in which we started was wrong. What readers want to see is the process of farming development and the plot of hoarding rats, which is a bit taken for granted.

I feel that if we take the group portrait route, the current character arcs of these characters are not interesting enough, and they have no memorable charm at all. Wensley's team doesn't show much love and loyalty, it's quite a traditional adventure team. If it weren't for the outburst of kindness from the Rabbit King and the Witch, there would be no follow-up plot to lead people to conquer the dungeon. The city lord is even written in such a way that people want to kill him. He is a complete filth. Although it is hinted that he has hidden secrets, it is still difficult to sympathize with him. The characters in other lines are similar to NPCs, and there are no memorable points... It's better to upgrade the dungeon honestly first, write some interesting content, and then slowly figure out how to create a good character.

Sometimes it feels like the protagonist is quite unborn. There is no basis for it, just seeing how the protagonist is so neurotic sometimes makes me feel unnatural.

Wow, it's actually a new book, Leave a Claw

By the way, has the author decided whether to write a story about changing singles and changing hundreds or changing marriages? For this kind of subject matter, I think changing singles might be better (the two themes of changing and marrying face two completely different audiences, the author should think clearly) Personal opinion, the author can write whatever he wants