Skip Work and Pick up a Magical Girl

There are more and more Work demons After get off work demons Skipping work demons Are there overtime demons 😃

Let's talk about the most obvious and serious problem. The characters and the plot of this book are seriously separated. The plot is the plot. The characters are characters, and they run their own separate ways without interfering with each other. For example, Xiao Ke's character design, almost 100 chapters in, is almost exactly the same as the initial impression. The plot has obviously been improved. There have been several major events, but this character has barely grown at all This problem even exists with the protagonist. After almost a hundred chapters, the protagonist is still heartbroken and has no vitality. For example, the protagonist teaches a few little animals, why does the protagonist want to be their teacher? According to the initial character design of the protagonist, he has no "necessary" or "unavoidable" reason to help them. Even if his sister becomes a magical girl, he can hide in the dark and protect her secretly, and there is no reason why he has to jump out to deal with his most annoying troubles Objectively speaking, this plot is undoubtedly a failure. It is the plot that drives the characters, and it is the tangible hands that control the characters after the scenery is set up To be honest, the author should really calm down and spend time and brain cells to think about how to let the characters use their own hearts to advance the plot

After the update crashed, I continued to read and followed the crash, and it was already on the shelves at 300,000

I can do anything.

I thought the protagonist was a tomboy who was beaten so hard by a yandere witch that she fell to her knees and turned black and became a star 😡🍐 (very disappointed)

I just clicked in to take a look, but I unexpectedly discovered that your book is quite interesting.

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I think it's well written. I've read a lot of negative reviews, but I can only say that I've read too many books. I also like this kind of abstract and counter-conventional ones. Come on! The big brother who can write books

I don't understand, and is this an orthodox magical girl? Isn't it still the same as a dark life experience and a dark world view?

Why did you change the title of the book? The devil in vest has become the devil in skipping work (

By the way, reservoir managers can eat as many fish as they want 🙂

51 52 It is recommended to skip it, it feels like it ruins the character.

As soon as the event was over and I returned home, I suddenly felt tired. The foreshadowing and conspiracy haven't been revealed yet. It would be nice to go in reverse order and change the perspective. In daily life, 5 girls can only remember 3, and they lack a lot of shaping. After entering the event, the perspectives of the two supporting players looked awkward. In the war, you have to hide your strength and pretend to be bad, but you just can't feel happy. That's it

I haven't seen Xiao Hei for several days and I feel uncomfortable all over.

It turns out that the black man is less than 1.5 Meters 🤭😏😏😏

, There are still some awkward places in the writing, but I personally like the plot, I hope you won't praise it 😎

The rhythm suddenly became weird later on, and it suddenly felt a little fragmented ()

I've read the latest chapter and still don't know what Hei's magic weapon is. The author didn't think about it. This thing doesn't match the Noble Phantasm of the heroic spirit.

Come on, I like it so far (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

So cute ~ write more posts 🥺

In fact, I still hope that the magical girl looks more dark. After all, the prototype looks very anxious and uncomfortable. It is better for Black to just let himself go.

Is the author purely using love to generate electricity now?

Is there any typo in the introduction: Start with (this). Or is this a characteristic of this novel?