Lord of Mysteries: Protect My Brother the Fool

Acceptable means looking forward to the birth of Zhou Mingrui with joy, without even expressing any regrets for the original owner, Klein? How pitiful Melissa is, both of her brothers were taken over by the dove The readers didn't have much feelings for the original owner, and I'm not criticizing you here for the original owner, Klein, but because you didn't handle this matter well and established a very bad image for the protagonist Benson. Benson has been with the original owner Klein for two years, but nothing appears in your writing at all. You said you gave up. But let me ask, don't Zhou Mingrui and Benson have the same feelings for Melissa? Even in the original work, Zhou Mingrui only got along with them for a few months. You write that Benson's feelings for the original owner Klein can be put down as soon as they are put down. How do you want the readers of your book to view Zhou Mingrui and Benson's feelings for his sister Melissa? Are they as dispensable as they are for the original owner, and can they be taken up and let go? You write it like this and it seems that the protagonist's feelings for his sister are fake. This aggravates Melissa's "pity" and also shows the protagonist's hypocrisy. You just finished writing about the protagonist's death without any sadness for the original owner. It was all about the joy of welcoming Zhou Mingrui's arrival. Then you wrote about Benson's cordial interaction with his sister, who is also the "original owner" and "aboriginal". Don't you think it's fake? It's too fragmented, and the protagonist is like a dummy.

I just read four chapters, let me know what you think after reading it As the protagonist of this book, your brother Klein is about to die and has his body taken away from him. Why not prevent him from contacting the "Antigonus Family Notes" in advance? Can this prevent his death? Is Zhou Mingrui still your brother after time traveling? You have been in time for two years, and you have no relationship with your brother at all. You watched him die and successfully helped Zhou Mingrui take away your brother! Is it because he is the protagonist of Uncut Gems? I don't understand and I'm shocked 😲😲😲

I haven't read it, but after reading the introduction, I have a question. Is there no affection at all after two years of getting along? Just watch Klein die and welcome Zhou Mingrui's arrival?

He calmly accepted his younger brother who had lived for two years thinking that he was bound to die, and then he cared for the protagonist in a book. It was quite perverted.

Why would a Heart of Steam team have followers of both the God of War and the Goddess of Night! Is this really reasonable?

When Melissa watches sad movies from now on, she will think they are happy movies. First, the eldest brother is taken away, and then the younger brother is also taken away. Moreover, the older brother loves the current younger brother more than the original younger brother. I don't dare to think about whether Melissa's despair and pain potion will melt in her mouth later.

Then the most miserable thing in the whole book is Melissa. The Moretti family was pierced by souls one after another, and the only original configuration left in the Moretti family was Melissa 😰

After reading the introduction to this book, I didn't want to read it anymore. To know who Zhou Mingrui was resurrected in was not a resurrection, he had to include his younger brother who had lived with him for two years.

The author either uses AI to write the full text and only provides the plot; or he is an illiterate who has never studied Chinese in junior high school. The article is full of bad sentences, the compound sentence patterns in the article are all grammatical errors, and the use of sentence fragments is even worse. But the plot is pretty good, and the descriptions of scenes and actions are relatively mature. These two points are quite worthy of praise.

You have to know that in a world with gods, you can't just change your faith if you want. Klein and his family all believe in the goddess of the night. You just turned around and said you would join the Heart of Machines team? Is it so casual that the Church of Steam and Mechanics still accepts it?

Praise the meat dumplings! Praise the Fool! !

It would still be interesting if the main character of this book and The Fool did not travel more than half a year before and after. Ni Ma spent two years living and eating under the same roof, but they were still related by blood. It seemed awkward at first sight!

Wouldn't it be enough to just set it up two months or two weeks earlier than Zhou Mingrui? There would be two poison points for no reason.

Let's graft the plot you wrote onto the original work and have a look: After Klein became a high-sequence person, he discovered that his sister in the old city was also among the group of old immigrants. He did a divination and discovered that when he scattered these remnants of the past, his original sister would actually cross over into Melissa's body no matter what. What did Zhou Mingrui Klein do at this time? Wait quietly. What are you waiting for? Let the original biological sister time-travel into Melissa's body, and wait full of expectation, and there is no interaction between Zhou Ke and Melissa at all. I can guarantee that if Squid writes this, his fans will explode. Book fans came to question 🦑, and how did 🦑 answer: This was destined to happen, and there was nothing Klein could do to stop it. Moreover, Zhou Mingrui had fulfilled his brother's responsibilities in the past few years when he traveled to Klein, so it was "acceptable". So, the author, do you think this is acceptable?

Old Kohler moved his nose, sniffing the fragrance in the air, looking at the red and white meat slices rolling up and down in the old clay pot, and narrowed his eyes with satisfaction. Then he turned his head and looked at the ham hanging in a hidden place in the house, with an uncontrollable smile in his eyes. The pot of potato and ham soup he stewed didn't even need to add salt! The current ham is much smaller than the one he bought on New Year's Eve, but there's nothing he can do about it. The heavy fog that night made him lose the ability to protect his food. The moment he was shrouded in the unpleasant yellow-green mist, Old Kohler couldn't even breathe. When Old Kohler fell to the ground, his "New Year's gift" was snatched away by those hungry guys whose eyes glowed like wolves. If it weren't for the subsequent heavy rain that awakened his sanity, Old Kohler wouldn't even be able to keep the crumpled cigarette in his pocket that he couldn't bear to smoke! In the heavy rain, old Kohler stood up unsteadily and returned to his shabby little house. It was a new one he rented after getting paid in advance by Detective Moriarty. After all, sleeping on someone else's floor was always uncomfortable. "Cough cough" Old Kohler coughed hard, trying to expel the thick phlegm stuck in his throat. At the same time, he kept moving his hands and rummaged through the rest of his belongings. "Ugh." He spit out the thing stuck in his throat, and his breathing finally became smoother. Old Kohler took out five pennies and hesitated whether to buy some more ham. "Let's go and see tomorrow." Old Kohler murmured, holding the money in his hand. "The money Mr. Detective gave me is enough for me to celebrate twice..." With his thoughts returning, Old Kohler stared at the stewed soup in front of him, and inserted the piece of meat in the middle with a pilgrimage mood. The moment the aroma exploded in his mouth, Old Kohler even trembled all over. Even though the number of slices of ham he could eat every day dropped from five to two, and even though he got an inexplicable serious illness, Old Koehler still felt extremely happy at this time. After hesitating for a while, he took out the cigarette from his pocket that had been drying for a whole night, put the cigarette into the fire under the old pottery pot, lit it, and took a satisfied puff. In the dark room, a low voice sounded, "Thank you, kind Mr. Detective..."

The Knife Devourer The Record Master of the Parallel Universe The Great Fan Writer Praise for the Rice Dumplings!

After becoming a god, Emperor Roselle will have the characteristics of generalist 9~2 and knowledge emperor. Is that okay?

Is the author a girl? I looked at your pen name and avatar, and your style looks very girlish. And what you write is very girlish. Although it is reasonable to say that an elder brother protects his younger brother, it is rare to see someone specifically writing about it this way. It feels more like a girl's brotherly relationship.

Today, Squid has updated a new episode, which is about the daily life of my favorite brother and sister, a family of three. Then I came back to read your book Rou Zong. In fact, when I was reading the original book, I had been looking forward to the reunion of the three brothers and sisters. However, it was not until Klein secretly went to Benson's wedding that I realized that everything had reached an irreversible point. Everyone has their own way to go. The one who stayed where he was, stubborn and unwilling to look back, was just me, the reader. Woo hoo hoo, I want to see the warm daily life of the Moretti family after everything is over. This was the thought that supported me when I wrote the book Chasing Rouzong. Please give me a side story. T_T

Traveled through two years and drank the magic potion

Why was it suddenly finished? I thought there would be 8 more volumes

I dreamed last night that your new book and extras were ready. 😢

I collapsed. There was actually a heroine, Cattleya, who slipped away.

This was originally a celebration of 2 million words prepared for you, but now it has turned out like this... But I have already prepared the money. In my eyes, this is yours, so be it... Thank you Rou Zong for giving me some candies before the end. I kid you not, I really cried

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