Chat Group? Those Who Break the Boundaries Among the Stars Will Devour the Heavens!

Very good, a new author who has obviously put a lot of effort into it. The first new book The main world is created based on the world view of the stars, and the plot is combined with the chat group genre of the heavens. The worldview and characters should be very mature, they just need to be expressed in the work. The first three chapters contain a lot of descriptions of the main world's worldview. The author probably wanted to express his own worldview very much, so he added a lot of details. This is common, but for new authors, it's a minus. Old authors have a certain fan base, so fan readers will be more patient in understanding the details of the novel, but new authors obviously do not have this privilege. Moreover, while describing the world view, the author has added a lot of characters unique to the main world, which in the author's opinion can increase the quality of the story. However, most readers do not know the so-called nouns and uncommon words. This placement at the beginning of the novel seriously affects the readers' perception of reading and is very discouraging. At the same time, this novel contains part of the fan plot, but it is not the original plot that readers are familiar with, but the if line of the original work. Although the author has sufficient design for this part of the plot, I think readers of fan novels will prefer the plot that they are familiar with. To summarize the content of the world view in the first three chapters, in simple terms, There are three natural disaster forces in the universe, and the protagonist serves as a pioneer ship (?) In one of them. This civilization is very powerful and all members have ascended (think of them all as immortals), but it is divided into three factions, attacking each other and striving for unification. That's it. Come on, author, I hope I can continue to make more updates without being a eunuch.

Self-titled writing, the order of writing is very personal, the narrative dialogue comes with a lot of personal settings, and the characterization is similar to that of a cat painting a tiger.

I probably understand it. A simple understanding is that cyber cultivating immortals, looking for food, and then there are three forces planning (ignore it if it is not important). The protagonist opens up thousands of rivers, and then is plotted to fall into the world. Then the protagonist travels through time and survives, then encounters insects and is cut off, and then joins the chat group. Other than that, it is all history and there is no need to understand it.

"Life" was born for the first time in the Milky Way. The first to gain self-awareness were the parasite-like "star suckers". They prey on stars, shortening their lifetimes by billions, billions of years, while completely ignoring planet formation. Star God, a pure energy life form born from the first fire of the universe, feeds on the energy of stars, and enjoys it endlessly and is insatiable. Their sucking will cause the star to become short-lived and collapsed, and release excessive amounts of lethal radiation. It is this fatal radiation that makes the life span of the entire Necrontyr race irreversibly miserable and short. Energy clouds that feed on star energy The original Star God was just an energy cloud attached to a star, just like Azathoth in the Cthulhu mythology, blind and stupid, possessing huge energy but not knowing how to use it. After the Necrontyr was defeated in the war with the Old Ones, they began to study how to harness the energy of their stars. During this research, they accidentally discovered the C'tan sucking on the star of their home system. The Necrontyr used the living metal known as the Undead Skin to create a huge body, and attracted the energy cloud to attach to the metal body, from which the first C'tan with a physical body was born, the Nightbringer. The moment the Nightbringer first awakened in his new body, he slaughtered countless Necrontyrs and devoured their life energy. He found that compared to the tasteless but infinite supply of star energy, life energy was delicious but scarce, and the surviving Necrontyr survived after making promises to provide more sacrifices. The Nightbringer harvesting the life energy of the Necrontyr The huge power of the Star God gave the Necrontyr hope of defeating the Ancient Saints. They used the same method to let more Star Gods gain bodies and join their camp. Of course, countless tribesmen were sacrificed in the process, but compared to their short lives, gaining a powerful ally like the Star God was absolutely worth it at the time. The Star Gods gradually developed themselves in the process of devouring the life energy of the Necrontyr. They enjoyed the sacrifices of the Necrontyr and the joy of being offered as gods. They began to transform the Necrontyr with their own will. They first killed all the forces that opposed them among the Necrontyr, and then a star god named the Deceiver proposed to the Necrontyr a deal that could save the Necrontyr from their short-lived fate, that is, at the cost of their souls, their flesh and blood bodies would be transformed into metal bodies. Desperate for immortality, the Necrontyr agreed to the deal. Since then, the Necrontyr as a race disappeared from the galaxy, replaced by the Necrons who swarmed out of the transformation furnace in neat steps, and their souls became the main course at the C'tan god's feast. Necromancer's Ark - originally used to capture and transform opponents of the Star Gods Subsequently, the coalition of Star Gods and Necrons launched an attack on the Ancient Saints. The war swept the entire galaxy, and almost all ancient civilizations were destroyed in this war. Although the coalition forces finally succeeded in destroying the Ancient Saints, the Star Gods' own power also gradually weakened in the process of external conquests and mutual devouring. At this juncture, the Necron who suddenly turned his gun successfully backstabbed, crushing the remaining Star Gods one by one after the Battle of Heaven, and imprisoning the broken fragments in a huge hypercube maze, never to see the light of day. At this point, the era of the C'tan was over, and the Necron became the only final victor in the Battle of Heaven, if this result could be called a victory.

It seems to be written in a high-level way, but it goes round and round, with a lot of meaningless words, and it is not poetry. Looks strenuous

You can say that he is in the second grade, but he is definitely not AI. After all, AI's writing is easy to understand (although I can understand it).

It doesn't look good. What are you writing about? You can't do this with self-titled articles.

The three golden chapters are three obscure chapters. Readers are not recommended to conquer them directly. I recommend that friends start reading from the fourth chapter. I have seen many friends' suggestions in the comment area recently. I can only say that for the first three chapters, I can't copy the mental state when I wrote it. Self-written articles are so exciting. From the fourth chapter, the author's sanity has returned. Personally, I don't like deleting book reviews. When my friends give me opinions, if I think they make sense, I will take action next. If they are unreasonable, I usually ignore them. Unless the insult escalates to a personal attack, only then will I delete it. Of course, if you criticize me in a roundabout way, if I don't understand, congratulations, my friend, you have successfully left your comment. Now I have no choice but to post this post. I have written 70,000 words of actual content. Although the amount of information is small, I should be able to read it. Oh, by the way, I have posted a post on Baidu Tieba. Friends who click on it are welcome to read it. I will continue to work hard. Progressive 😡😡😡 Thinking about it again, the author is a hard-working college student majoring in civil engineering. He has been busy with studies since the beginning of school recently. After today's holiday, tomorrow will be a long vacation. Think about it, I can finally pay off my debt. This debt makes me feel very ashamed. I have no choice. During the new book storage stage, I can only use scrap chapters to top up the balance. Readers and friends, I am very sorry for this.

The writing style is very personal. I write whatever comes to my mind. The words and sentences are confusing, and there are a lot of personal settings and nouns stacked up. It is a self-exciting article that requires attention to the radio waves. I have only played Qunxing for about 200 hours without adding any mods, so I barely understand anything about it. The third golden chapter is also unclear. Is it possible to cut into the theme from the beginning? Is it possible to fully explain all the backgrounds? The private settings will be slowly added and explained. In addition, Bai Sheng's various settings are also very childish, and the nouns are very awkward and secondary. Some of the plots in the chat group are a bit interesting. Anyway, I think it's okay to watch them now.

Is the Sovereign Agreement worthy of comparison with high-dimensional demons? Even the creator can't do it. Fvv was crippled by the robot father, and even the Scourge Ascension was beaten to death by the Star Sea Emperor in the plot. Do you really think that the galaxy is safe?

It is not recommended to read the self-healing article about the second disease

I don't understand football without watching football. I don't understand football at all. I thought it was some kind of Zerg that was destroying the world.

It's a novel that defies heaven. It's amazing if you can stick with it and understand it.

Isn't the author still underage, right?

Dozens of chapters are full of settings. I can't speak out what I saw. What a tongue twister.

The author wrote the first three chapters, 1 I don't know where you are traveling through? Movies, animations or games. 2 I don't know what a bunch of nouns mean. Which calendar is used to tell the time? Where are you floating the ship? Are you in the sea or in the universe? There are still a lot of worldview issues that I don't know what they mean 3 In Chapter 3, please bring me in and read what you wrote. I read a little bit of Chapter 3 and skipped it. If it weren't for the chat group, I really wouldn't want to watch it

I won't go into detail about your various self-made nouns and confusing explanations of the theme, but at least there are no typos. Ten chapters in one chapter are difficult to understand In addition, the description of the story requires a main perspective. Now you are macroscopic, sometimes microscopic, sometimes the protagonist's perspective, and sometimes the historical perspective without any foreshadowing. Are you writing?

Summer vacation is almost here, are you still writing?