The World of Red Mansions

The author must pay attention to updates, and put the body and other things first 😭

Jia Yuanchun, as the royal concubine, is not helpful at all to Pig's Foot. Not only is it not helpful, but it also drags Pig's Foot back.

Hey hey hey, is there anyone? If there is no one, I will ask again later...

There is no cheat code, the description is mediocre, and the plot is not exciting enough. How can I become an emperor and it is difficult to achieve anything 😥

With Qingwen's character as the heroine? Pig's feet (author) shaking M?

I heard that the update has pushed Grandma Liu down. When will she push down Grandma Jia?

What can I say about this book? The tone is too high and the details cannot be kept up, which is a pity. In order to convey some so-called slap in the face or climax plot, some plot descriptions are a bit mindless, that is, the so-called details cannot be kept up. The overall background design is okay. The author has worked hard, but the characters are not vivid enough. The dialogue is just to advance the plot, and the characters have no arc.

There are not many descriptions of Qin Keqing and Jia Yuanchun in the original work. I don't know why most of the fanfics give high hats to them. . .

The writing is quite bland. But this way of writing always makes me want to read on and a poisonous point pops up! Maybe it's because I read too many books. Keep it first and wait and see.

You also said that you should keep a low profile, as soon as you leave the house, you are afraid that others will not know that you want to seize the direct descendants😅

I have always felt that Jia Yuanchun was old and useless. Any serious marriage between people is not to enhance their strength. Marrying a second wife's legitimate daughter is of no use. Apart from the previous favors, the family power is almost nothing. The family is a mess. There is no distinction between legitimate concubines and slaves. He deceives his master, deceives his superiors and deceives his subordinates, works in collusion, has almost no reputation, and has the courage to mix in everywhere. Marrying Jia Yuanchun is equivalent to getting into a lot of trouble. If his status is low, it doesn't matter. The key is to rely on the Jia family to move up. What is the prince's plan? Want to taint himself? Don't be afraid that the pig teammates won't be able to get to the shore in the end. It's just a garden show. You pretend to be cool and slap disgusting people in the face to make the plot easier.

There is one thing, big mistakes are not made, small mistakes are made constantly, and some details are not handled well, such as the wording of names and so on. Overall, there's nothing too wrong with it, just give it a look.

He must have been deeply involved in this aspect, and it's pretty good. I felt refreshed and refreshed after reading it in one breath, and after a while I was able to chew out a little bit of the flavor.

Judging from the descriptions in the first few chapters, it doesn't look like rebirth or time travel or awakening past life memories.

Shennong is here. Identify cereals, you can eat them as if you were swallowing them whole

Poor writing style, no sense of immersion

What does it mean if you don't wear it clearly? No memory?

At first, it was said that the transparent prince had no strength and no backing, and there were other princes peeking in. Shouldn't he be humble at the beginning and let others fight until the plot came? When the new royal official comes, open the front door to greet him. He talks about his ideals and has no worries. (Wouldn't it be better to behave with normal etiquette?)

He was really born, and he ran away after just one cut?

I feel like Jia Baoyu is a supporting character and it's really uncomfortable for the protagonist to hold Baoyu's smelly feet

It is recommended to study the book "Rebellion" to know how to set a threshold of 1 fan to leave messages and screen out novice readers. It's hard to watch Lao Bai, and he complained about his bad grades in books.

Are you Cao Xueqin? You just write? Hum（｀へ´）

Is Qin Keqing considered a close relative? Relative sister Bai

Open a book about athletes and directors. Give Maradona an illegitimate child

In Chapter 17, the protagonist officially appeared after he was made the king of the county. In the previous Chapter 17, the protagonist was like a dead person, even though he married Qin Keqing and Jia Yuanchun without showing up. I really don't like this way of writing. Also, as soon as he was granted the title of king, he thought about fighting Japanese pirates and the Portuguese. I'm not here to see you and fight Japanese pirates and Portuguese people. I'm here to see the Red Mansion. Stop talking nonsense. Don't be too indifferent. The title of your book is about Red Mansions. I came to see Red Mansions, but it doesn't match Red Mansions.

It turns out that the book will be finished on June 18th. It's all for nothing.

It turns out that the author writes about entertainment! Why did you suddenly want to write a history book?

Have any book friends told me that the later paid chapters are still as boring as ever?