Resurrection of Ghosts: I Have a Book of Immortals

I thought it was a good book to read, but when I returned to reality and met a girl, I started to do drugs and went back to school. I was really speechless and immediately put this book down.

It's very well written when in another world, it's an absolute fairy tale. After returning to reality, the fighting scenes are still well written, which is the author's advantage, but he started to get addicted when he saw the little girl. The protagonist has to go back to school... I guess he wants to take the route of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger...

It was a masterpiece before Chapter 80, but after returning to reality, the writing was a complete mess, and more than 20 chapters were written about how to deal with a pawn and organize a group. He clearly knows that he is a real person, but has the incomplete strength of a real person to take revenge. The enemy will definitely form gangs to seek revenge. The protagonist is despising and arrogant, does not find helpers and is not prepared. He is still a level lower in self-confidence. His IQ drops off a cliff when encountering women. The first heroine is okay, but the second one is really annoying without a little extra help.

The setting direction of this book seems to be a bit similar to that of Weird Life, this one is more focused on Taoist mythology and magic practice. The knowledge base is okay, the writing is not bad, and the storyline is a little slow, but I quite like it 😁

The more I write, the more formal it becomes. We are here to read novels, not to learn knowledge.

Great work, the writing is good, I hope there will be more.

Come on, I will improve and grasp the rhythm of some subsequent plots.

Hello, dear readers, let me have a few words with you. First of all, I realized the problem with the heroine. Maybe it's because I'm really not good at emotional dramas. I will try my best to reduce her presence in the future, and I won't even rule out the possibility of rewriting this character. The second issue is about the intellectual content of Taoism. Although the author is not a disciple of the Three Heavenly Sect in the strict sense, he has done some research on Taoism and Dharma. In subsequent chapters, I wrote about many techniques and rituals of authentic Taoist teachings. The original writing was actually very detailed, almost including hand techniques, footwork, incantations, singing rhymes, etc. The purpose of writing this way is actually to give you a brief introduction to how real Taoist priests and mages cast spells. I also want to take you to understand some of the folk culture of Taoism and Dharma teachings. This is also the fundamental purpose of writing this book. Those rituals are originally extremely complicated, including various rhymes, chants, praises, etc. I have tried my best to shorten them, but if you think it is still procrastinating, then I will shorten it again. I know there are many problems with this book, and I will read everyone's comments. I am also very grateful to everyone for leaving valuable comments. After all, I just abandon the books I don't like and don't bother to comment, so no matter what, I will keep writing. Thank you everyone for your support. Finally, I am still extremely grateful to all the readers who support me Blessings and Infinite Heavenly Lord Compassion and Mercy

This book really can't be read one chapter a day, because you haven't finished fighting an enemy more than ten times, so I can only support it until the enemy is eliminated and then read it in one wave. I guess I'm not the only one who does this. Will this book be exhausted?

I updated a chapter yesterday. Are you planning to enter the palace?

. . . . Is reality so embarrassing?

It's a bit like watching a TV series at 0.75X speed

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

I suddenly came back to see if the author has published a new book. As expected, a new book has entered the palace. I have already said that newcomers should not swing the knife casually. I read a book with 750,000 words before signing the contract. If you don't have the strength to book a book as soon as you come up, you are not overthinking [fn= 37] It's all come through step by step. It's a pity that the subject matter is well chosen but the writing is poor. There is something in your stomach but there is a problem with your expression. You can make some progress after finishing this book, but you are in a hurry to cut it and restart it. The ending is unexpected and sharp.

I've been raising it for half a month, and it's so boring to watch. If it's written this way, it will take three to five years to finish.

I think the plot can be reversed between good guys and bad guys, but don't reverse it again during the battle. There can be foreshadowing in the early stage, but a battle plot describes dozens of chapters. This is definitely a reason for the failure of this book. Also, don't swing the knife easily, let alone enter the palace when you have written a million words, because you will lose more. No author will get a million subscription rewards as soon as he writes a book.