Dragon: Greennest Lord

Author, believe it or not, if you delete the introduction and leave the title of the book, more readers will read it than now.

I feel that it would be better for dragon novels to focus less on those big worldviews, multiverses and multi-dimensional aspects, because doing so will only make the protagonist's level of power seem average. If you want to write a dragon novel, you should write about a single aspect like the Black Dragon Codex. Only in this way can you highlight the protagonist's dominating power level as an alien dragon. Once it comes to With multiple dimensions and a large world view, there will always be some powerful demigod mages and other human professionals. This kind of dragon literature is meaningless. It is purely a fake dragon literature wearing dragon skin. Even if the protagonist is changed from a dragon to a human or an elf, there will be no sense of dissonance. It is not a dragon literature.

The author has a suggestion for you. If you are writing about dragons, you should make the dragon vivid and make the reader feel that this is a dragon, not a person wearing dragon skin. Because most of the dragon texts nowadays are not worthy of their name. They are written according to people, and there is no trace of dragons between the lines.

🤔I'm more of a believer. Dragon likes treasures = √ likes to eat rocks, and Jackie Chan likes treasures = dressed as √ likes to eat rocks. It's not so much that the body affects the protagonist's mental structure, but rather that this is a poor guy who has lost even his self-awareness. The most fundamental thing, [consciousness], can be easily destroyed. Tampering, today I am influenced to like treasures, tomorrow I am influenced to prepare for estrus, and I talk about [Dragon Arrogance] from time to time. Isn't this evidence that a poor guy has been devoured by [Dragon Consciousness] in reverse? Ask the protagonist who he is: "I am an arrogant and noble cuckold dragon!"? What is nobility? Only when the parts of the body are classified as [high-end materials] can we call it true nobility. I see this setting as outrageous as if members of the royal family have become pigs being slaughtered in a pigsty. The real dragon is a powerful and intimidating existence that can be felt just by the word "dragon". In other people's minds, it is not a high-level material or a pet. Not to mention other things, the "dragon" in the novel is boasted to the sky. The racial advantage is getting wider and wider in the later stages. Without exception, after the later combat power of the same type expands and collapses, is the distinction between species still meaningful? I felt like I was going crazy at the beginning of this book. After breaking out of my shell, I wandered around everywhere. Wherever I went, I encountered the inheritance of [gods], or the mixed inheritance gift package of evil and righteous forces that was standard for the protagonist in ancient times. He is a normal person with more normal logic, and does not think that something he finds casually can be a good thing. Who will believe this thing without some back-up? Maybe it's the lowest level if you try to borrow a dead body to bring it back to life.

To be honest, the threshold for reading your book is a bit high. I thought the Holy Empire in this introduction was quoted from some novel.

After reading online articles for so many years, few introductions are so messy.

Don't write about false and empty things, such as the power of rules, the power of laws, the great road, etc. It will make you speechless. If the level of power is too high, don't write it. Just write the previous ones well.

To be honest, regardless of whether it is stated in advance that it is a fake dnd, I personally hope that the author of the dragon article can take a good look at the desktop settings of dnd. Most of the secondary designs nowadays are really clichéd and utilitarian, and they are obviously serving templates. It is no exaggeration to say that they are assembly line products. There are always plots that are too bad to watch. Obviously DND has official typical dragon stories and exciting legends on the chronology for reference. I have to stick to the plots of the Internet that appeared many years ago. It is true that I have been in the comfort zone for too long and I don't want to think about it anymore. After a while, when AI ghostwriting technology becomes more mature, themes with a strong template-based nature will be completely dead.

The protagonist's sister is a superfluous character, and the book also plans to make her the prime minister. Isn't this funny? What is the difference between a green dragon and the people under the captain of the transportation team? It can only play a negative role in politics and management of a force. Moreover, as a strange dragon, its growth rate must be far faster than that of an ordinary green dragon. As an ordinary green dragon, which only has enough combat power for hundreds of years, it is useless.

Currently reading Chapter 37, it can be seen that the author has taken great pains to make the products of the world view such as Warhammer, DND and even the Demon Hunter appear at the same time, but Patchwick pays attention to using only one person's parts for the arm. "The Warhammer Beastman worships DND Baator Hell and can summon the Warhammer Dragon Demon from hell with demonic properties like the Abyss Lord of World of Warcraft, and his opponent has a Japanese style The fantasy goblin army dnd the troglodyte army and the Warcraft gnoll troll army have three green dragon brothers and sisters who look like they came from the Black Dragon Codex and changed their colors, as well as the warhammer wood elves with deer-headed spirits from the Witcher world view. This scene is a bit overdone. Not only does it not please the fans of either side, but it allows everyone to see the corresponding points in the parts they like.

As the name suggests, among the current participating forces, you can write down the characters you want in the comment area, and the author will consider adding them to the subsequent plot. The format is, name: Title: Gender: Affiliated force: Strength level: Identity: Age: Race: Height and appearance: Background:

Come on, your writing is okay, don't let it suck.

Put the Clown Emperor on the same level as the other four? Not satisfied, thank you

Gaza is like that, so many young children don't have half their brains, and we didn't even help.

Xifanlongwen plus this long introduction, holy shit

If the inheritance is the four gods, then there is a problem to consider. Do you want to play the role of the Four Gods in corrupting power? For example, if you inherit the power of perseverance now, will it be connected with the protagonist when the scholar reads books, conspiracies are carried out, and things related to the number nine? After all, this is what's really disgusting about the Four Hawkers. Do you think he is some powerful entity? They are the rules of living! And the state is full of malice! The reason why they are not dead is just because living will be worse

After a cursory look, I noticed a small problem. The power inherited at the beginning was J, and then the protagonist grew stronger? The inheritance is full of wisdom, magic, and conspiracy, causing the protagonist's physical strength to become stronger? (This means that under the induction of the current inheritance, the protagonist should become more slender. This is not some kind of subjective corrosion, but an objective effect. When you can use spells to do everything for you, slender limbs are more convenient)

Are there any novels that obtain the "inheritance" of the four (five gods) of the subspace and then travel to a non-Warhammer world? I feel like there are very few.

Does the author have a background in writing historical novels? The taste is too strong. The wording in some places feels like a fan of Water Margin. It is actually not very good in Western fantasy novels and can easily cause drama.

No, why did it end suddenly?

It is not advisable to work behind closed doors. As a kid, I specially opened this comment area to let everyone put forward their opinions. Any author who makes sense is willing to accept it with an open mind.

Strange high cold, strange dragons and magic. This is not quite DND

The author should read Green Dragon's Nest. I think this dragon is the most dragon-like dragon novel, but it's already a eunuch.

After roughly reading about 40 chapters, I am talking about ordinary dragon novels. The protagonist does not seem to understand Warhammer from the perspective of God. From my understanding, the subspace evil god is a collection of thoughts and desires. The development method should be in the form of a secret cult to spread corruption. The behind-the-scenes of group portraits with the protagonist as the core of theocratic power. Propagating existence, collecting beliefs, spreading blessing rituals, and the construction of extraordinary ladders. These things should be the highlights of the Hammer novel so the sense of reading is not very strong.