Reborn in 2003, Why Is the Boss Trembling?

Golden Chapter Three, what did you write? The first few chapters are all about the events of the past life. The things that are destined to be reborn are basically mentioned in one stroke. I really admire your brain circuit. In the first chapter, it is OK to simply introduce the rebirth before starting the rebirth. This can attract readers.

Of course both Bai Yueguang and Cinnabar Zhi need to be

It feels a bit like forcing Damao to come and slap him in the face just to show off.

Xin Yueyao's feelings for the protagonist were too abrupt. She was disgusted at the beginning, but as her grades improved, her feelings changed drastically. I felt that there needed to be some other emotional foreshadowing in the middle.

Your writing is a bit dangerous, especially after chapter 80. It's too sensitive and I'm not afraid of color spots, but you seem to have touched a super god. The palm technique of falling from the sky is too scary.