Zhutian: the Starting Player Is in the Courtyard

Please tell me why the protagonist doesn't show cooking skills when cooking. Also, the hamburger is hot when it comes out, and why the roasted chicken is cold when it comes out. It needs to be heated.

I haven't read the book yet, but I have a question. This is a real world. Does the heroine have to find the characters who appeared in the original plot? In the huge city of Beijing, does she have to keep an eye on those characters who appeared in the original plot?

No matter how awesome you are, you will still be controlled by Yi Zhonghai and Qin Huairu when you come to the Siheyuan. Haizi and Widow Qin are invincible in the Siheyuan.

Zhu Tianwen has more than two hundred chapters and has not passed Siheyuan.

🤔I've been raising you for so long, and you're still writing about Siheyuan?

It looks good, I can score seven or eight out of 10. There are several shortcomings. One is that the protagonist has not yet solved a reasonable explanation for the source of supplies. The other is that it is very frustrating. He said he wanted to marry a wife but has not yet married. Also, the plot is a bit bland and not very attractive.

To be honest, at the beginning, the conflict between the two fighting was almost closed, and it was made like a big deal. It was written like this even when both sides were wrong. I feel completely uncomfortable watching this paragraph. Not only according to laws and regulations, there are many things in it that you cannot shoot if you write them like this.

It's okay. Come on, author, write more.

Can anyone recommend a novel similar to this one?

I am the eighth update

The writing is quite good, and I didn't find any bad points. Since Silly Zhu likes to take over widows, let's pass the Jia family to him, and then cut off Lou Zi's beard, and let Silly Zhu end up having no descendants and being abandoned by the Jia family. It's good.