I Will Attack in the Form of a Yandere Girl

It's too watery. I went through a hundred chapters in the first dungeon, and it was reversed and reversed and reversed again.

Yang's books always have a unique style of writing

If I remember correctly, all the dregs absorbed by the trainee Shinigami are gone, does that mean shit and urine? Also digested

There is a single high-scoring work with more than 3 million words, and the ability to write long novels is online. You can pursue it with confidence, and you will never enter the palace

Idiot Sheep's new book is slow to download due to the starting point (sad)

It mainly focuses on exciting battles, strong plot, and strong character direction. Please feel free to read it ٩( 'ω' )و

That's almost it. Where is the yandere protagonist?

It feels a bit pity. When I first read it, I thought it was a black-robed picket in the background of 2077. As a result, I felt very uncomfortable when the protagonist was accepted as a disciple by the God of Death, Lao Jin. Taking part in the test to obtain skills became purely a cultivation novel covered with science fiction. I really couldn't stand it... The protagonist moved from the rebel class to the side of the ruling class. The original hatred was limited to a few specific people. But if you don't read the entire ruling class, is it still called cyberpunk? This is the first time I've seen this kind of character arc go backwards. Some people may say that I am nitpicking. What if the protagonist does not choose to compromise in the face of absolute strength? But I want to say that it is because in reality we have to constantly compromise with life that we want to see something different in novels. Otherwise, why would I read novels?

I feel like the title of the book has nothing to do with the content.

You are a little cake

The second volume has too many twists and turns, and it is not a very interesting plot design. There are more than a hundred chapters in total. After reading the first forty chapters, I jumped directly to the trainee Shinigami and continued reading the rest without any dyslexia The third volume of the prison, I won't talk about it at the beginning. The description of the prison atmosphere, the plot, and the logic of the behavior are, to be honest, very strange. Whether it's the scene of going to prison to save Tian'en or the description of all the people involved in the prison, it's all very strange and has the feeling of a child's whimsical thoughts. Finally, when I saw Momoka forming a band for a concert, I still couldn't hold back. Each volume feels like there is a lot of redundant text, various additional character stories; explanations of settings; and dialogues between characters. A lot of it is very idealistic writing, including the explanation of the villain who was defeated in the first round of the second volume. To sum it up, it's water after water. As well as the complexity of settings and timing of appearance. I feel that the first three volumes will be long books with various foreshadowings, including various gods and tower masters. But what is the setting of the Dead Zone? At first, I thought it was about a copy of the Dead Zone and the trainee Shinigami, similar to a strange rule-based novel. But it turned out not to be the case. In the second volume, I went to explore the mines. The Dead Zone and cyberspace are actually not the focus. This book is a hodgepodge of various settings, resulting in unclear focus. It only touches the skin without touching the core. This is true whether it is a real city in the setting; a dead zone setting; or a small society prison

Suddenly I found my name changed

You only update a few words a day. You dare to write a big plot. The part in the mine made me numb. I felt exhausted even if I didn't follow it. How can people who follow it keep up?

Lily?🙂

There are other consciousnesses in your body. This is so poisonous. You can also control your own movements.

From Chapter 30 to Chapter 100, the mission of that mine has not been completed yet. The following experimental diary contains two full chapters. I can't stand it anymore 😡

Old lamp small lamp lamp lamp lamp lamp

First of all, the author's attitude is very worthy of recognition. The updates are stable and the amount of updates every day is quite large. In the end, even if it was due to poor grades, it still gave an ending. In the light novel category, it is already better than most authors. After all, it's a bunch of lazy dogs and eunuchs In addition, the writing style is also very good, and the language quality is good, so it doesn't make people feel too naive or verbose when reading. The following are the shortcomings that I feel are lacking 1. First of all, the subject matter needs to be considered. Judging from my experience in reading books. Male video readers generally don't like abusive protagonists, especially light novel readers, and they don't like the female protagonist to be miserable. Every fight is a matter of life and death. Most of the popular light novel heroines are beautiful, strong, and light-hearted. On the contrary, female channels like to make the protagonists beautiful, strong and miserable. 2. The rhythm of this book is a big problem, and the main plot is pushed too slowly. The small chapters are too long and tiring to read. Especially in that part of the mine, the progress is so slow that it really makes you want to jump. The world view is so broad that it would take tens of millions of words to tell the story. Light novels are generally only as large as fast-travel novels. 3. I feel that there are a little too many things to sew. Including reality, copy, virtual network, academy, and different space. Used similar messy settings such as Warhammer, Black Contract, Mystery, Reincarnation Paradise, etc. The result is that it is basically a one-time setting. There is no follow-up at all. It is better to simplify it, such as mercenaries and campus plots are more conventional but pretentious and easy to use. In general, I feel that the author is very imaginative and ambitious, but he cannot control his main line. I hope I can choose a good subject next time. Don't think about sewing everything into the book.

Although it is all settled, it will be finished when I come back from school. -_-||

Md, what a great knife. Just like in 2077, Jack died. I couldn't stand it. I didn't play 2077 until I knew Jack would die. Now I'm reading the novel with the same name and plotted against me.

I haven't read this software for half a year. When I came back, I found that the book seemed to have been cut in half.

Where did the senior sister in the armor go?🙂

It was updated and it said it was finished.

I'm so embarrassed that I almost bought a three-bedroom apartment with two living rooms. I can't write normally. How fun would it be if I had to go with the Japanese style?

The starting point needs to be finished manually. I think this book still says serialized status.