Douluo: the Peerless Tang Sect's Sharingan Intercepts Hu Tianmeng

It can be seen that the author really hates the character Huo Yuhao, but there is no need to deny it completely. Of course, the character Huo Yuhao is not as innocent as some people say, so I will just talk about my understanding of Huo Yuhao's several transformations. Many people in the comment area said that he was a child who lacked love in the early stage, but in fact, this is not the point. When we look at a character's personality, we can look at the plot arrangement. What Gong Changxunnu wanted to embody in the early stage was not the lack of love and pity. Huo Yuhao had an extremely low self-esteem in the early stage, and even when it came to dignity, his acting style was very extreme and even a little reckless. Most people can't stand Wang Dong's rules. There's nothing to say. He didn't choose to argue with words but used his strength to slap the face of an opponent whose soul power was ten levels higher than his. It was almost a choice to give up the roommate relationship completely. In the article, Wang Dong was even frightened by his words and eyes that he said "I'll kill you with a knife" (Shameful Young Master). But what is the reader experience like? After being bullied, I resisted and got slapped in the face. It was so cool! This is the effect Gong Changxu Nu hopes to achieve, and she even intensifies it later on. Wu Feng questions his strength and verbally insults him. He can directly kill him, but Wu Feng's behavior is indeed disgusting, and readers will only find this bitch's evil retribution and slap in the face plot very satisfying. Not to mention Dai Huabin, this character appeared to portray Huo Yuhao's hatred of the Dai family. It can be seen that Gong Changxunnu wanted to highlight that Huo Yuhao's early portrayal was such an inferior and extreme character. In addition, the lack of love and a series of connotations used to neutralize the above extreme issues. A soft and gentle heart is what helps shape this character. This was also Huo Yuhao's gimmick when he first came out in Dou 2. There was nothing wrong with this portrayal. It was even a good character design at the time, and it was attractive enough to watch. It is also a sequel, and it comes with the accumulation of fans. The plot relies on the gimmick and readers will naturally be happy. But what happens after that? Ever since Huo Yuhao obtained the Ultimate Martial Spirit, his character design has begun to change, and the way the plot is shaped has also been different. Everyone knows that your Martial Spirit is awesome and you are a genius. Who dares to mess with you except Dai Huabin, a brat like this? In this case, Huo Yuhao's psychological state should be appropriately changed. He already has talents and achievements that are enough to look down on his peers (he is a second-level soul mentor, and he got full marks in the exam twice, and even everyone in the class convinced him). He can start to be confident, but at this time, he needs a new stage to let him show off. Then there are several competitions and showing off in front of others, and the subsequent games also make the plot tightly connected, but how can Guangyang do it? Gong Changxu's daughter would naturally find a way to suppress it first, so the strongest five-ring evil soul master appeared in the middle episode, and asked Huo Yuhao to lead a group of old, weak, sick and disabled to compete with freshmen to show off. During this period, those fools plotted and instigated more than a dozen Let's not mention the murder of a 19-year-old child. At this time, the object of Huo Yuhao's anger gradually changed from an initial issue involving dignity to a position of hostility and I will kill you (also due to Shrek's upbringing and nationality). Up to this point in the plot, it can be said that there was almost no problem with the perception of the character Huo Yuhao at the time. We can see a complete transformation of the character from low self-esteem to self-confidence. However, the problem is that after the transformation, Huo Yuhao is still as comfortable to watch as before (yes, a large part of Huo Yuhao's popularity is because of his extreme self-esteem in the early stage). The pitiful child who is humble but lacks love makes people feel comfortable. He is not the so-called casual invincible who hangs out everywhere, but he insults me and bites off a piece of your flesh even if he dies. This is the reason why many people liked him in the early days. There were many discussions in the comment areas of some websites in the early days. Do you think a character like Huo Yuhao is very handsome?) During the exchange student period, it was obvious that Gong Changxunv began to try to introduce more things, maybe even things that were not in the previous outline, because some of the settings were too casual and perfunctory. Huo Yuhao's changes in this period were even more obvious. You can see him provoking students from the Sun and Moon Empire, stealing various things as a spy, and he began to calculate They start to judge others based on the position of the country or the academy, regardless of whether this is a so-called school (I really don't like the setting of the academy in Douluo. It's like a reserve army. They have to fight and die for the country and the academy when they are only teenagers. This is more like a clan or sect, rather than a place to teach and educate people). But this didn't affect the viewing experience too much. After all, Huo Yuhao was awesome and no one would think anything of it. It wasn't until Wang Dong appeared again. If I remember correctly, this was the beginning of the book's decline in reading. Electrolux disappeared because of a stupid reason like not enough monthly tickets. Electrolux gave Huo Yuhao several mechanical deities from the time he appeared to the time he left. Outside of certain situations, Electrolux is positioned like a pure tool, and even his words of enlightenment are stupid. To be honest, there was no sign that Electrolux could be resurrected before. Except for the time when he was watching the life and carving the knife, he didn't pay attention to it and didn't tell Huo Yuhao what to do to revive him. Yao Lao at least said at the beginning that he would recast his body with alien fire. What about Electrolux? Fragments of divine consciousness, not even a complete soul. Do we need to gather fragments of divine consciousness together? He may not even know how to resurrect himself. The creation of this character is incomplete, at least in the book Peerless Tang Sect. Just like that, a lot of people were scolding her. It may have been during this time that Yuhao of the Tang Sect decided to leave. I won't analyze the subsequent plot in detail. It was obvious that Gong Changxu's daughter changed the outline because of this incident, and Huo Yuhao developed into dog training. Various PUAs, and many of the things he did became more and more disgusting. I saw someone comparing Huo Yuhao with Dou Yi's Tang San in the comment area. I think it's unfair. Dou Yi's Tang San doesn't have much of a problem. After reading the whole article, you'll just wonder why this man is so happy and can be famous for everything he does. This is a double standard problem that some early online articles have, while Dou Yi's Huo You can clearly see that there is a big problem with the portrayal of Yuhao. Not to mention the dog training and a bunch of irresponsible crazy operations later, the fact that he cheated in the game was not that glorious. It's just that everyone felt that the first time they were bombed by the evil soul master, and the second time they fought against the evil soul master and the enemy country, so they can be forgiven. Tang San was really scolded by Dou Er. His series of disgusting operations can even make readers conspiratorially think that he controlled the growth of the Son of Destiny to seize Destiny. Overall, would you say Huo Yuhao has a great and upright image? No, he was extreme in the early stage, was trained as a dog in the later stage, and was irresponsible in the later stage, but why do so many people still like him? Because the cruelty towards Tang San turned into love for Huo Yuhao, everyone began to imagine a Huo Yuhao who was not influenced by Tang San, a Huo Yuhao who had a low self-esteem and a fragile heart like the early stage but a soft heart that lacked love and could be redeemed. It was as simple as that (Tang Sect Yuhao's experience of being treated like a dog after he blew so many gold coins, I even saw that the name Huo Yuhao was full of pity, so naturally I couldn't hate it).

Currently, 70% of the Douluo II fan fiction is about Huo Yuhao being reincarnated into Huo Yuhao, 15% is about Huo Yuhao becoming the heroine after his gender change, 10% is about Huo Yuhao's brother and nanny, and 5% is other things. How much the current fan authors like Huo Yuhao! ! ! As the remaining 5%, you, the author, must stand up! !

It is said that Huo Yuhao cannot compete with Tang San. When Tang San massacred the city, he could find a sentiment that hurt Tianhe, similar to "I am also a soldier." Waiting for Dugu Bo to finish the massacre, he would pretend to be compassionate. Let alone what Tang Shenwang thought, he at least achieved the face project When Huo Yuhao detonated the ninth-level soul missile to blow up Mingdu, he was not willing to do any face project at all. Don't say that it can't be taken out, there is a demiplane of the undead, why can't he take it out Tang Shenwang promised Spicy Rabbit Head not to kill soul beasts, and then I found a reason to kill all evil soul beasts, which is at least a face-saving project Huo Yuhao promised the Snow Emperor and Ice Emperor to protect the far north, but as a result, the far north also perished quickly. As the founder of the Spirit Transferring Tower, it was difficult to leave an order for all those who use the souls of the Spirit Transferring Tower not to take the initiative to attack the far north soul beasts? All he could think about was the synthetic monsters, and he was eagerly chasing them to the God Realm And the way he behaved towards his teacher, you think Tang San and Xiao Yan could even say that Yu Xiaogang was missing in the God Realm, but Huo Yuhao was really unworthy of comparing with Tang Buddha in this aspect, he had no idea of ​​condensing Electrolux's spiritual thoughts. In the legend of the divine world, all he could think about was how to break through the chastity lock that Tang Buddha had placed on the synthetic monsters.

Let me first say that Huo Yuhao's situation in this book will not be too good As for the reasons, first, the protagonist and Huo Yuhao's own camps are destined to be hostile. As for why Huo Yuhao is not brought over, that involves the second issue. Excluding the two forces of Shrek and Tang Clan, all those who invest in Huo Yuhao and those who invest in Tang San will receive the same treatment. Xing Luo Emperor Xu Jiawei invested in Huo Yuhao and sent out ice jade scorpion soul bones that were more than 70,000 years old, comparable to ordinary 100,000-year-old soul bones. When the Star Luo Empire was in danger, Huo Yuhao represented them and killed the Star Luo Empire. Finally, at the time of Dou San At that time, Xu Xiaoyan should be the descendant of the Xu family's martial soul who mutated. If they hadn't taken advantage of Tang Wulin's wave of dividends and became a force in Donghai City, their family would not even be considered a third-rate force. In this situation, they could basically compete with Ning Fengzhi in Douyili. Electrolux and Mr. Mu never forgot to help Huo Yuhao. As for Electrolux, Huo Yuhao said he wanted to resurrect him, but turned around and forgot. The Dragon Pill that Mr. Mu took out could allow their family to pass it on for a long time, and there are always strong people in charge. In the end, Beibei only got a Tianlong Horse that was more than 30,000 years old, and it was still the seventh, eighth or even ninth spirit ring. Unless the third young master of the Tang family forcibly strengthened Beibei, the spirit ring ratio would be a big hurdle even for ordinary Super Douluo, let alone the inheritance of future generations. Huo Yuhao took all the benefits, but got nothing in the end. The treatment of these two people was comparable to Dugu Bo in Dou Yi. In addition, there is the Poison Immortality. Because the original top sect in the mainland gave the inherited secret method in the main body to Huo Yuhao, Dousanli's main body martial spirit became Shrek's exclusive, and the sect was left alone. In summary, Huo Yuhao occasionally repays his kindness with drops of water, because it belongs to Tang San's power, and Tang San cannot suffer. Therefore, Tang Sect and Shrek from Tang San's power can lean on Huo Yuhao to suck blood. This is essentially because Tang San's protagonist aura suppresses Huo Yuhao's protagonist aura. It does not mean that Huo Yuhao himself is a person who knows how to repay kindness. In terms of repaying kindness, he and Tang San are equal. In addition, he is the one who gives priority to killing civilians. A big explosion in Mingdu just allowed Ye Xishui, a soul that even Extreme Douluo couldn't get, to get. Regarding Huo Yuhao's situation, I think there is a saying that suits him well: 'Poor people must be hateful, and hateful people must suffer sadly. ' So in my book, Huo Yuhao's situation will not be too good, or even a bit miserable.

Does the heroine have Xuanzi? If not, I won't watch it.

Support the abuse of Dai Gou, support whoever helped Dai Gou have a good ending. The Noumenon Sect gave him the secret method and later the Noumenon Sect became a second-rate sect. Electrolux originally said that he would try his best to resurrect him, but then he forgot, Beibei took out his pants for him. Mu En gave him all the dragon pills that could stably cultivate an Ultimate Douluo. Later, Beibei, the unjust one, only had a handful of 30,000-year-old souls as eighty-nine soul rings. Xu Jiawei gave him a soul bone that was comparable to a hundred thousand years old. Later, he still cheated him. To sum up, his character is lustful, greedy, cowardly, vicious, ungrateful, he considers his thieves as his father, and he is an unfaithful, unjust, unkind and unfilial shameless person who is turning the tide of history.

A younger sibling appears suddenly? What did the author think? There was no foreshadowing. He even said that he was an orphan.

Others are okay, but the protagonist always likes to carry other people's coffins to his own home to cry. Huo Yuhao kills hundreds of thousands of innocent people at every turn. This is how I understand it. Are you planning to become a god without injury? If you are in that situation, will Mingdu be blown up? In the end, if you still step down, it will still make no difference. You can't use your brain. The purpose of your training is actually to be a high-level cannon fodder for Mingdu who will not die easily? War is evil, but you can't stand on a city built from the ruins of war to sympathize with the suffering of the enemy country. What's wrong with Huo Yuhao fighting for Xingluo for Xingluo? Why should he sympathize with the enemy's people? Especially when one second he was yelling at me and beating me so hard that I was hurt all over, and the next second he was beaten in pain, and then he sued me to apologize and repent, and the court also ruled like this. Is this outrageous? ? ? ? ?

A time traveler, in the beginning, crushed Huo Yuhao, the son of luck. Still doing so much nonsense. It is simply embarrassing to the time traveler. Pure dissuasion. Give Huo Yuhao such a serious protagonist aura. Do you know what an extraterrestrial demon is? It turns out that there is a Tang Buddha and Shrek on his head. You still need to go out of your way to give Huo Yuhao such a strong protagonist halo. The original novel didn't have such a strong protagonist halo. Taught by the Buddha to live and die

The protagonist's B square is not good. I always thought that the protagonist was a chess player, but it turned out that the protagonist's performance was always bad. Tang San didn't play a single piece, so the protagonist had to recruit foreign aid (the protagonist's younger brother and sister appeared inexplicably). The chess game that Tang San arranged casually could not be broken by the protagonist himself. Tang San kept hanging up, the protagonist kept winning, Shrek kept losing, but Shrek was always there.

I'm really convinced. If Tianmeng Bingsi is really that powerful and can create soul skills and martial arts at will, then why did he only know how to sleep before? Creation requires the accumulation of insights and ideas. Tianmeng simply obtained the Ice Essence of Ten Thousand Years and kept eating and sleeping for millions of years. Where did it come from?

At present, there are two biggest poisonous points in this book. One is the younger brother and sister who are tool men, and the other is the protagonist helping his younger brother to seize the genius. Although it is said that the end justifies the means, I can only say that those who are willing to read this type of fan fiction will naturally accept it, but I cannot accept it and bid farewell. The overall upgrade process is pretty good.

What I wrote above is really good, but it's really difficult to airborne your younger brothers and sisters... There's no foreshadowing at all.

MD, after reading eight chapters, it was written with rubbish and a lot of obscenity. Why the hell are you writing a novel and ripping out so much of the original work? Just mention it a little bit, then what are you doing if you know astronomy from above and geography from the bottom up, and know everything about ancient and modern times at home and abroad?

The Sharingan is all Mijia game elements. Do you have nothing else? Tang San also didn't pay attention to Douluo's situation at all.

The protagonist is an extraterrestrial demon. The aura of intelligence reduction of the original protagonist is so powerful. Just outrageous. Writing Dou 2 does not restrict the Buddha. He can flip the table at any time. And the protagonist is walking on thin ice. Destruction is useless. He's too disciplined. Therefore, destroying this incompetent person is no match for a villain like Buddha. He is obviously stronger than Buddha. There's nothing you can do against him. Buddha kept making little moves but couldn't catch his pigtails. Still want to fight for power and gain. Wishful thinking. Moreover, Buddha has many minions in Douluo Star. It's enough for the protagonist to grind slowly. So you don't have to make it difficult for the protagonist. If the protagonist is bullied. It's like walking on thin ice. That's almost the same as the main text of abuse.

You don't even need to explain the controversial points in this book. I just took one look at your rubbish writing and I knew that this book was rubbish.

I've been watching Douluo for many years. When I first watched it, Douluo hadn't even been scolded yet. I also understood Tang San clearly. In fact, he was a "good guy" under feudalism. His mentality was indeed good.

Lots of obscenities, dual protagonists, strong and weak, and comments about scolding people. The writing is better than the book.

The first is the soul ring: Sharingan part: 1, psychological suggestion 2, simulation 3, mental detection, mental sharing, mental interference, soul impact 4, re-engraving 5, element control, chaos 6, fantasy sea dream, karma demon 7, Martial Spirit True Form 8, Soul Transformation, Devil's Yin Body 9, Evil Emperor's, Halo of Thorns, Light of Time and Space Second Martial Spirit 1, Ice Jade Scorpion Tail, Ice Emperor's Wrath 2, From Titan Snow Demon King, Ice Emperor's Power, Ice Demon Cannon 3, From Ice and Fire Eyes, Ice Dragon King Taming Soul, Black Ice Dragon Soaring, Black Ice Dragon Breath, Nine Dragons Black Ice, Absolute Zero 4, from the Ten Fierce Beasts Zi Ji, Death and Decay, Demon Field 5, from Ice Bear King Xiaobai, Meteor of Ice, Ice Bear Blizzard 6, Emperor Hantian, Pride of the Ice and Snow Emperor 7, Martial Soul True Body 8, 9, from the Demon King who has evolved for millions of years, I really didn't think about this, because after absorbing this soul ring, it is already coming to an end The last is the soul bone The forehead is the same as Huo Yuhao The head, the Demon King, the soul skills, someone can tell me to use them The torso, the soul bone of the Mountain Dragon King is increased Add affinity to the earth attribute, soul skills: Gravity Protection, Mountain Dragon Control Left hand palm: Freeze Ray, Ice Explosion Technique Right hand palm: Ice Jade Scorpion Pincers, Ice Emperor's Grip (because the attached soul bone can be fused, the right hand palm is fused with the Snow Emperor's right palm bone, adding the Emperor Sword and Emperor Palm) Left hand Arm: Ice Emperor Body Protector, Ice Puppet Right arm: Ice Jade Emperor Power, Ice Emperor Pierce Left leg, Ice Bear King Xiaobai, Ice Bear Power, Ice Fury Right leg, Titan Snow Demon King, Titan Destroyer, Titan Snow Magic ………… Left eye kaleidoscope, understands all technology br>The right eye kaleidoscope creates technology that can be understood, but the created things need to be maintained with the same force to exist. The creation based on the entity does not require the maintenance of pupil power Reincarnation Eye, just refer to Pain's Six Paths When the left eye and right eye kaleidoscope is awakened, the martial soul fusion skill Susanoo can be used Sharingan's self-created field, the psychological suggestion field understood from the psychological suggestion of the first soul skill. When the protagonist is around, one's own four energy increases by 100%, and fear automatically dissipates The Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion (mutated into the Ice Jade Emperor Dragon after the fourth soul ring) field, the realm of eternal freezing, can be transformed into an enhanced version of the eternal freezing impact. (The original soul bone skill of Huo Yuhao, but when Huo Yuhao was in the fifth ring, he used it and was restrained by Wu Ming's first and second soul skills of seven rings. Therefore, the protagonist did not want this soul skill. It is a field of his own perception, and can evolve like Douluo Yi's God of Death field) Equipment: Skyfire Holy Judgment, made from the soul core and remains of the Fire Dragon King Star of Eden, made from beads from the head of the million-year-old deep sea demon whale king

Before scolding others, first pay attention to the behavior of your protagonist, whether he is doing human things, and it is troublesome to read the original work. Don't read it out of context, only read what you want to see, stare at a person with a very limited perspective, all kinds of conjectures and criticisms, it is not necessarily better than Tang San, it is really the theorem, fan fiction If you can't write a better protagonist than Tang San, if you don't understand it, you can leave it to the AI. Let the AI analyze the whole text for you. Let the AI analyze the whole text objectively and see if what you say is right. This is objective and fair enough. It's okay to criticize Huo Yuhao, but you have to criticize it in the right place. You can only think about the results, instead of imagining some things that are there or not.

The previous chapters were okay. Chapter 42 suddenly has multiple younger siblings. It's completely unnecessary.

Pure cesspool, it's hard for the author to write so much 💩

Your writing and plot are completely messed up.

How do you put it? Seeing you talking about Huo Yuhao in a serious manner makes me feel a little funny You said it is impossible that the original author of Douluo Continent was thinking with his butt when he wrote the book, not as much as you thought.

Where did Dou Er get the soul guidance vehicle and communication soul guidance device?

Can the author get back to me? Let me check which chapter says that the 400,000-year-old torso bone of the Ice King is a bit too young, so I have to choose the torso bone of the Mountain Dragon King.

Recommend the book, Douluo: The Miracle of the Peerless Tang Sect: The Brilliant Lord, click on the profile picture to see it, and I wish the author will become more and more popular. (Can be deleted)

It feels like it ended a bit suddenly. In fact, there are still some things that can be expanded upon!

It's been a long time since I finished it, and I'm looking forward to the new book now. Have you considered reading a Dou San fanfic? Tang Wulin is much better than Huo Yuhao. There's no reason to abuse this guy. The protagonist can develop normally.