Ron's Adventure in the Universe

The protagonist is simply an enhanced version of a native of the motherland. Both in terms of strength and temperament, he is worse than the so-called natives of the motherland. Because he is invincible at the beginning and does not recognize the environment of time travel, he has no scruples about doing whatever he wants. Although he has done some good deeds, he mostly focuses on evil deeds and destruction. The so-called fun is just using his own strength to suppress a group of ants. There is nothing to watch. He is more like a villain than the Bone King.

Compared with the Naruto part, I feel that the Justice League part is okay, and the image of the fun person is not suddenly interrupted. The sudden deus ex machina at the end of Naruto is terrible.

I don't know which book I copied. I didn't copy it. I also wrote a lot of poisonous points.

So chaotic and psychotic - the protagonist's actions are illogical.

Looks like Rogal Dorn is in the heavens

When writing about time-travel series of American comics, I write about American comics... American dramas, there are so many American dramas, but I have to write about Naruto, Dragon Ball, One Punch Man... Are there pirates in the back? 😅 You have to know that we clicked here to watch American comics and TV series, so we hope that there are more plots about Meiman and American TV series... Even if you don't want to write other American TV series... Isn't the DC parallel universe still lacking? Zombie Universe... Or something If I want to watch Japanese time travel comics, there are many apps like Qidian, not to mention some people don't like to read them at all... We come to American comics just to see the plot of American comics... Even if it's Evil Force, The Walking Dead, Zombie Nation, Hell God Detective, Constantine, Cabin on Wheels, Cthulhu, Star Wars, Warhammer 40K, Cyberpunk 2077, Red Dead Redemption, Star Trek, The Orville, The Twilight Saga, Doomsday, I Am Legend, and even The Three-Body Problem with European and American backgrounds, etc. You can suppress the protagonist's ability because of traveling through time and space. , Participated in changing some plots... There are so many good American dramas... Rather than, Japanese comics, Japanese comics, Japanese comics, Japanese comics... It doesn't mean that the author's writing is not good, I feel it is good... But Japanese comics are really tired of aesthetics... 🙄[fn=6 1]🙄🙄Forget it, I won't read it anyway 🙄🙄🙄 I won't listen after reading it 😅 Goodbye👋, another novel that once made me stay up late to read 🙏

Is the author a potential perverted murderer? Write about a demon and have fun doing it

After fighting for a long time, destroying the protagonist for a long time and not killing anyone, they are stupid and useless.

The writing is too bad. Let's not talk about the plot details. These words and the behavior of the protagonist are completely like a loser. In other words, he is the face of ordinary people who gain power as written in the book.

The ending of the Naruto part is anticlimactic, very boring, and it's a happy ending again

No one knows how to write about fun, and they create a rival You really have no one left.

Invincible at the beginning and then pretending to be awesome all the way, slipping away

The writing is very messy, the plot is also very messy, and the actions of the protagonist and Goldfinger are very confusing.

Playing cards is not

It's too strong😭, it doesn't look good, it's gone😓

Stop writing about Japanese comics with an American comic background... It's too inconsistent...

Dragon Ball is almost enough. I beg you, please don't write about Naruto and Pirates. 😥 I'm tired of it.

It's fun to read. This kind of book usually collapses in the end. I want to see when it will collapse 🙂

What a self-praising article.

Why is the protagonist Ron? When I see this name, I think of the Chicken Leg God of War.

What the hell are you writing about the last few chapters? The preface doesn't match the subtitles. It was probably written by AI. It makes me think I'm reading a pirated version. If you can't continue writing, don't write it.

There are so many typos, it's so uncomfortable to watch

What Japanese comics are you writing? Not everyone has watched Naruto. Writing that thing is a test of your writing skills. Do you think your writing skills are good? There are so many American TV series, isn't it delicious? As long as the people of the motherland have seen the black-robed pickets, you don't need to elaborate on the setting. Everyone knows what's going on. You write Japanese comics, what is it? It's not so perfect! The main character in a book can be a villain or a virgin. It doesn't matter. Reading books is just for fun. For example, if you don't write about female celebrities in domestic entertainment articles, don't you deserve to be thrown into the street? In All Heavens and All Worlds, isn't it that the protagonist goes to various worlds to show his holiness or survive the dungeon? Both of these writing methods are fine. What Japanese comics are you talking about? If you throw yourself into the street, you deserve it! !