Douluo Dalu: Editing the Dialogue Makes Everyone Go Crazy
斗罗：修改对白，全员发癫
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- Completed
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- 543k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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261Chapters
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Everyone, come and listen to me. I'll just say this: Chapter 20 is on the shelves.
This is already the number of times Douluo's narration has been modified.
It's okay. Although the plot is childish and not worthy of scrutiny, and the characters are not in line with the original work, it is really funny. Also, I think Dugu Bo and Dugu Yan didn't handle it well. It would be better to leave a fairy grass for Dugu Yan, and then give Dugu the method of forcing poison into the soul bone. Bo, after all the fairy grass has been cut, I gave a solution that treats the symptoms rather than the root cause. It feels very unauthentic. In the end, it is a bit short, but there is nothing I can do about it. This kind of plug-in is not easy to control the rhythm. It is commonly said that the plug-in is too big. And the author does not seem to be good at writing daily life, so it is very short.
I hope the author can stick to it and finish it. I think Dou Er's use of this system is also good.
This book is very well written, but there is another book that I can still read - Douluo Peerless: Life Simulator
It's funny, it's quite funny, and it would be nice to write it down later.
Douluo Continent👍👍👍
The plot is good
The plot is very confusing and the writing is very clear. The author should be a junior high school or high school student, and there is a small chance that he is just a freshman. But you can still dance and watch when you flip it up. This book is more suitable for publication in a certain magazine.
The system gives the time traveler a chance to travel through Sword Douluo, and gives him a month or three months to prepare. When the time is up, he will be transported there. There is no need to give a gold finger, so that there is some challenge. Otherwise, if you are ready, and you still have to give a gold finger, it is equivalent to living a perfect life on vacation. Unless you are going to Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, Mortal Cultivation of Immortality without a gold finger, it is really difficult.
Recommend a new book - Peerless Tang Sect: I Simulate the Legend of the Dragon King