Zhe Tian: the End of This Pinnacle of Quasi-Emperor Realm Is Approaching.

The setting is very novel, and the fragments of traveling through time and space and the lives of the strongest men in different eras are eye-catching. I like to read the Qing Emperor chapter the most. It is indeed a system fic that is very thin, but the author is too slow to update.

If you don't write about the main character feeling aggrieved, you will feel uncomfortable all over. I want to suppress my fighting power and prolong the time, but I am not good enough, so I can only write in frustration. You should practice more quickly. Are you still writing "Zhetian Tongwen"? In addition to your content being Zhetian, are you related to Zhetian? You should write ghost stories

Zhe Tian's combat power level is ridiculous. As an immortal, no matter how much suppression you have, you won't be beaten repeatedly by the Stone Emperor 😅

What a mess, the quasi-immortal king beat up the Stone Emperor and let people run away. Isn't this pure cjb? Those who don't know better would think you're fighting a human being like Wolong or Fengchu!

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates.

Brother, the Nine-Leaf Sword Grass used the Grass-Character Sword Art to kill the Immortal King at the quasi-immortal king level. You jb, a real immortal in the later stage, cannot kill the Supreme with the Grass-Character Sword Art. What the hell are you writing?

Cover the sky and write about feelings? A bargain. Originally it was OK to write it before. You don't have the writing style to express any emotion. I guess I have never been in love.

If you were an ordinary clone, it would be fine if you didn't diminish the main character's true nature and introduced it with less writing. Your origin is added to your head and your clones are added. Doesn't this make you full of surprises? The last chapter is also a bit of a surprise. Although it's not the classic plot of being raped after drinking drugs, what if you insist on writing a close-up of a lesbian? Can't you just take it all away? You also specifically wrote that Qinglian knew it was a pornographic material but didn't warn her. Why did Qinglian also like watching lesbians?

No, this avatar, that avatar, I don't have to pretend to be hard every day, I really can't stand it anymore

Summon Shennong, I know you are here

If you forcefully suppress the protagonist, right, your cultivation will be completely ruined.

All I want to say about this book is that the pure version of the book covers the sky. To tell a joke, the power of the quasi-immortal king cannot even kill a supreme being in an instant. Don't tell me that it is not related to the immortal calamity. 666 Is really abstract. 🤭🤭🤭

Brother author, take a look at what you wrote in these chapters? What's going on in the plot? We have spent money on it, so why don't we do this? If it doesn't work, let's just cut it off and rewrite it.

How should I put it? Forget about suppressing your cultivation. The more you write, the more nonsense you get. If you travel through time and do things randomly like this, it will become more and more difficult to write in the future, and it will be difficult not to jump.

Are True Immortals and Great Emperors on the same level? You write True Immortals so poorly that you can't win steadily against the Great Emperor. Are you the weakest True Immortal in history?

I've read more than a hundred chapters now, and I can't understand the battle. Is the protagonist so good at fighting? It's so amazing to fight a Supreme Being who cut himself off with a knife, and he was seriously injured. Moreover, the supreme level of the Supreme Being who cut himself off with a knife seems to have returned to the state he was in when he was a great emperor! He's almost like a fairy in the mortal world. Didn't it take nine lives to reverse the world of the Red Dust Immortal? Also, it's a bit unclear how the Supreme, who cut himself off, traveled through the timeline.

If you don't write about your feelings, nothing will happen.

I'm speechless. I almost ordered it all. It's so dangerous. From chapter 80 onwards, the writing becomes more and more confusing, and the main line is not clear. Especially the part about women is too embarrassing and too naive. The empress is also ambiguous and the wording is a bit wrong. Many words like "boyfriend" are too dramatic and put too much pressure on the protagonist. The various branch lines are also a bit underwritten and too messy. If you haven't corrected it after reading the current word count, I will just abandon it.

With the power of the True Immortal's Dzogchen, the Stone Emperor who cut himself in the head can't survive for a second, haha

Goodbye, I don't want to watch anymore, I can't stand it anymore...

What is written at the back? There are clones and this and that,

It's so outrageous. He went directly from Quasi-Immortal Emperor to Kuaiji Dao.

It sucks, there's not even an ending

Advise those behind. I've seen 200 pictures at most, so don't read any more after that, it's too bad. And it's a mess. And it's extremely poisonous.

What did the author think? Are the next few pictures the ending? Ridiculous! I've read so many fanfics, but none of the endings are as outrageous as yours. Directly unfinished.

The foreshadowing done earlier is not filling in at all. I have finished reading the novel and Qingdi has not come back yet.

It's been taken off the shelves, bye👋🏻bye

The ending is so strange, could it be more perfect? I also want to see the Empress and the others get married.

The author has been waiting for so long. Isn't the driver's license ready yet? Can you start writing again😭😭😭

Author, Chapter 242 should be back to ancient times. Where did Immortal Gu come from Tianyuan?