Clear the Level Early and Enter the Thriller Game

Feel free to delete comments, but I hope the author will listen. I will give it a try and give it up. As the title states, especially the copy of Yelu, it is not fun at all. It is just watching the protagonist pretend to be B, but the pretending is not good. The reward of the copy is that I have forgotten it now. The whole copy is about what the protagonist did, and then the teammates said nb. The protagonist commanded the teammates to do something, and the teammates listened honestly. The protagonist is in the same plot as the multi-game player, and the background story of the dungeon is not explained clearly. It would be OK if the snowy mountain section could describe a specific atmosphere and the appearance of the monsters, but the problem is that there is no such thing. The appearance of the monsters is mentioned in one stroke, what they did is mentioned in one stroke, what they got is mentioned in one stroke, and there are no emotional ups and downs at all. The whole thing is inexplicable. I don't understand the purpose of arranging this interlude. I spend so much time writing it, and then the plot inside is meaningless and tasteless. I don't understand the meaning of putting this paragraph here at all. If you just want to strengthen the protagonist with multiple hooks, then one or two thousand words will definitely be enough. If you talk about expanding the world view, then there are only a few sentences about this aspect, which is really incomprehensible. The biggest problem now is that the plot is very boring. It was said that it will be the end of the world, but then there is nothing else. The dungeon that said it will become more difficult has not changed. The villains have a pitiful presence. They have no meaning except highlighting the waste of teammates. Moreover, the scenes where the protagonist defeats the villain or tricks the villain are not written at all, and it feels like someone who does not want to be locked up. The friendly forces value the protagonist and want him to join the round table. It makes no sense. I can't see that these friendly forces have any purpose other than atm. Others are all friendly forces who brag about the protagonist every day. It's boring. There is no plot that provides emotional value at all. Everyone and all the characters are included. The protagonist's sense of existence is very low. Reading this book is like reading an outline. It just fills up the word count with a bunch of nonsense that will be forgotten after reading it. If it continues like this, it will be really useless. Of course, if it is written by a gunman, just pretend that I didn't say anything. Anyway, I will give up after a few days of reading. You'd better change it quickly. Fewer people will read the recent update.

Advantages: The quantity is large and the content is full, and the setting is an original copy-type unlimited flow that is more in line with the public's taste, which is too friendly for people like me who don't like to watch anime very much The Goldfinger is also very open, the villain is not so brainless, and various foreshadowings also whet the appetite of readers Disadvantages: First of all, the collapse caused by the size of the Goldfinger is not big in fact. It is mainly caused by the author's lack of writing power and inability to supplement the settings, such as It is said that the protagonist's golden finger is a type similar to a simulator, and the author has actually proposed the concept of personality a long time ago, pointing out that the protagonist's golden finger cannot simulate high-level things, but the author lacks writing power, or does not dare to write, fearing that high-level butterflies will appear and destroy the protagonist's gold finger, causing things to develop out of control, so he has not dared to write. In the end, the dungeon needs to be made more difficult to see the fun. The protagonist is invincible all the way, and he can't do it without using the golden finger. The phenomenon of not being able to pass the copy In fact, if you look closely, there are some problems with the logic, but if you don't read the comments carefully, and don't read this novel with the purpose of finding logical loopholes, there is actually no big problem. Therefore, it is recommended that you stop reading this review when you read this novel, because there is nothing too poisonous If I have to say it, the protagonist is a little bit like a virgin, for example, in a large copy Working as a nanny for twenty people, pulling and pulling them all the way, even if they are questioned, they have to help these people pass the test. However, the author also wrote in the book that the purpose of the protagonist doing this thing is also a little foreshadowing, which points directly to the good and evil nature of the power of the book. Although it seems a little uncomfortable in the early stage, it is not a big problem, because the protagonist's character is decent, and the author's description of the supporting characters in this aspect does not seem too arrogant. I just clicked on the edge As for the power system of the protagonist in this book, I don't like it very much. In fact, I can understand it. Because the golden finger is opened too much, the protagonist's extraordinary system is not well reflected. I don't quite understand that the protagonist's system is an ability similar to refreshing entries. I have to add a template for the soul chef and the necromancer to this ability. This is something I am not very satisfied with Finally and finally The biggest problem of this book is that it is unfinished. There are so many foreshadowings that are not reflected in the end, which is a pity But as a novel with more than 1 million words of original copies and unlimited flow, the character of the protagonist and Goldfinger are also to my liking. I once read a similar horror infinite flow novel on Tomato. The protagonist also has a golden finger like a simulator, and also has a setting that is too high to be simulated. The author's choice is to write out this setting and add some fault tolerance to the protagonist's extraordinary ability. Although the setting of that book is disgusting to me, because it is a live broadcast of the national sports, but it is really thrilling in this aspect, and the villain variables are beyond the expectations of the simulator. For example, the pollution of high-level Cthulhu, and then the protagonist's corresponding extraordinary ability is to purify these pollutions, or the protagonist needs to find some props and merchants in the copy to temporarily strengthen his ability to fight against high-level existences. Later, there will even be multiple variables, and the protagonist has already guessed the possibility of variables before the simulation.

If I keep writing like this, I will definitely order the finished copy. It is really good to read. Will the protagonist go to the dummy copy later? I think that will be very interesting. Can the God of Death be given more of a role? Hahaha, I think he is quite cute. The patient must be able to qualify for the God of Pain. I look forward to the duel with the protagonist later. One of the most interesting novels of this kind I have read recently. Come on

Where are people? Can you tell me when it will be updated and how long it has been? If not, I will give up.

I haven't read it yet, but I ordered a chapter to review. How can I let the seedlings be read freely and bully the author and readers at the same time 😡

It's not satisfactory, the plot is almost enjoyable, the protagonist is a little bit like the Virgin, but there are no unnecessary scenes after saving people, so it's not unpleasant.

The introduction is too bad, as is the title of the book. Please change the introduction and make it more interesting. Your book will definitely have more than this score. Come on! Have more confidence in yourself. From the perspective of a ten-year-old bookworm, the progress is still obvious.

Is there always a copy behind the live broadcast settings, or is it abandoned? It's too poisonous 😅

The content of the Poisonous Virgin is so heartfelt to players who destroy the variables that destroy their own arrangements. Do you really think that the game is paradise? This is a thriller game. The kind that kills people at every turn, and the protagonist doesn't have any cheats on how to survive. The author just adjusts it however he wants, regardless of whether others can read it or not.

No matter what game, it's already in public beta, yet you still need to be invited to qualify.

It doesn't matter if you go to your mom to stream, it's still a live stream 😒. It's still acceptable alone. Live streaming plus go to your mom. . . Slipped away

My writing style is not good, but I designed this kind of set-within-a-set 😥 If I do this, I will just skip ordering.

What I want to know most is that the first dungeon settled for 16,000, 10,000 for training, and a dozen or so points were sold, leaving 3,000 at the end. Where to spend the other 3,000? Also, why doesn't the protagonist know where to refill the gun? (Chapter 42) Didn't the item introduction provide a path?

The protagonist is a bit like the Holy Mother. In the second dungeon, the protagonist has a perfect rating of C all the way. The rich second-generation semi-bastard is also a perfect rating, humorous.

The plot quality of the copy is above average, there are no disgusting poisonous points, and the book is readable.

Maybe my taste is different, I prefer the kind that even if I open a large one, there is a reasonable reason on the surface. Like this book, the author did not arrange the perfect ending of the theory at all, but just stated it directly. Take the example at the beginning. In other people's eyes, the protagonist's actions are: choose 404, then take out two eyeballs with a very clear goal, shout the name of the monster you see at first sight, and then press the eyeballs in to crack it. It's hard not to think of this kid. So even if the author doesn't write it, I will subconsciously be afraid that the protagonist will get into some cliché trouble later. Hey, it's a pity. I actually like this kind of subject matter, but my taste is not the same.

I don't want to read this book when I see it. Please, you write a suspense story. How can we show the strength of the protagonist without leaving the supporting role? You can read the Black Tinder book and find out how to write about the transformation at the end.

Chapter 200 is quite explosive. The Wealth Ghost chapter is exactly the same as the old fantasy. Apart from turning people into ghosts, I can't see any difference. Writing about ghosts just abandons the most unique essence of ghosts The previous article is very good. If anyone thinks that the author's copy is of the same quality as the fairy tale chapter, please leave a comment and I will come back to read it I'll give it up for now.

I saw it in the free reading area. I felt good about catching up on the latest chapter, so I subscribed. Personally, I prefer to watch horror games. I have not seen this before and it feels quite fresh. The protagonist is not brainless, the plot is not always slap in the face, and the content of the copy is relatively substantial and interesting. Please support me. I hope the data will be better. Come on, author.

Although the plot routine of this book is not very surprising, the story structure is good, and the protagonist is well prepared for defeating monsters and upgrading. There are no poisonous points that disgust readers, high-quality food and stable updates.

The plot starts from the puppets and it doesn't look good. It's a waste of my time💰The puppets are pretty good until now.

In the first dungeon, I don't know if I was blind. I seemed to see that the person was double-betting the protagonist and there were no survivors. But why did that person's mentality collapse when the difficulty of the dungeon increased and the protagonist tried to die? Shouldn't it be fun? The protagonist is the best-performing player. If he commits suicide, he is most likely to have no survivors, and as the difficulty increases, doesn't it increase the probability that no one will survive? Why are you still nervous that the protagonist can't pass the dungeon? I don't know if the author didn't understand the position of double betting, or if I was blind and didn't see it clearly.

I saw Chapter 282. The recent script was really ugly, good suspense, and fantasy.

What about the author? It's said to be good and not bad. I don't ask you to update it every day. At least say something every once in a while.

The castle collapsed after it came out. I even watched the castle while jumping.

... After raising it for almost a month, when I came in, I saw that the sky was falling.

To be honest, I think the writing is good, but the quality of the work does not match the number of monthly tickets. Too few people read it.

Don't cut out the books, at least stick to finishing each one. The rhythm is very good now. I believe those who are following up will like this rhythm. If you cut it too much, it will make you look older. People will dislike it at a glance. I wish the author can make money by ordering more. Come on👏

It's so damn good, I'm taking such a wide step, I really think I'm invincible in writing, I don't even have to think about it, I know it's going to end badly.

In addition, I would like to make some small suggestions, I don't know if they can help the author. In the unlimited flow dungeon novels I have read so far, the protagonist can always win by killing everyone with his golden finger. I feel a little bored after watching this too much. If the protagonist can lose once when facing a copy, but the author designs a way for him to counterattack in the future, it seems to be more interesting.