Knights of the Round Table at Hogwarts

If a modern person travels through time and becomes a child, will he become a willful and selfish naughty child? He also punched Dumbledore. I feel like the character is a bit unclear. Is there anything to add later?

The protagonist is a real person. He clearly knew that his sister was going to a magical world and yet he casually beat up the teacher who guided her. He wanted to go but he couldn't and refused to let his sister go. He also beat his sister's guide in a strange world. What's the difference between the real-life younger brother who tore up his sister's admission letter from Tsinghua and Peking University when he failed to get into a key university? Just because Dumbledore had such a good temper, he wouldn't do anything to Lily even if he was beaten. If he met a professor with the character of Lockhart Umbridge, and under the background of Voldemort's rise, Lily, who was born in a Muggle family, offended the only guide, and she didn't know whether she would be able to make it to Hogwarts intact... After beating her, she did not take any measures to protect her sister, so she surrendered.

The writing is interesting, but the foreplay is too long and too watery. Not counting the origin and description in the middle of the first chapter, the protagonist does not really appear until the seventh chapter. If the theme is not interesting, my patience will be exhausted when you write it like this 😅

I have an indescribable feeling, it's weird

For example, your sister was admitted to Tsinghua University, and someone from the admissions office came to your door. You, a naughty kid, insisted on making a fuss and went. If you were not allowed to go, you told your sister not to go either, and you were beaten by the admissions office teacher. What kind of reincarnation of a debt collector is this? While saying how much he loved his sister, he was so deceptive, and then he acted like Lao Deng owed him.

This is not a time travel by modern people, but a naughty child in Lily's family. This naughty child became an excellent Knight of the Round Table and a bad wizard through the teachings of Merlin in the Arthurian era. Here I want to change that Merlin's abilities should not be shared. This is also the reason why the book collapsed. According to Merlin's story, the source of magic is the blood of magical creatures in human blood, or through the possession of high-level magical gods such as the Banshee in the Lake. Demons, that is to say, there was still a way to enchant Muggles in Merlin's era. Just make up a plot to let the protagonist get some weak magic attributes, add some high magic resistance given by King Arthur, and at most add a few ultimate moves given by Merlin. This is a good character design. After returning home, he found that Lily died, leaving Harry and Petunia's family in a mess. Then he brought back a certain monster to give Dudley the same weak magic attributes, and then repaired it. Family ties, including Snape, can be used as the main line, and Tonks can be used as a love line. He can enter Hogwarts as a close combat professor, fight Voldemort according to his age, and support Lockhart to play as Prime Minister. The highlight is to save family ties. Fight Voldemort as a clearance game, and Lockhart can be a copy. The goblin rebellion you want to write can be put at the end to supplement Voldemort's strength after his current collapse. The obvious one depends on what you write. The fairy copy swelled and crushed the unexplored main plot. In fact, I wanted to change it in a hurry. I deleted the beginning of the fairy rebellion and let the protagonist be stopped on the island, so that I can return to the main plot. The fanfic is copied from the original book and no one will read it. But it has gone too far. This is your current situation. You must understand the reason why readers click on your book among so many similar books. If you don't understand this, the result will not be different even if you cut off and restart the game.

The sentences in this book are a bit like the underworld when used to describe it.

High emotional intelligence: The author's translation software is powerful Low emotional intelligence: The author's sentence fragments are described as if they were described in the underworld.

Cheshire's power shines in the world

I feel that this protagonist is very fake, even if he is fake, it is true.

I read more than ten chapters and felt sick for a whole day.

Your three golden chapters are shit, pure defense. If it weren't for your good thinking, I would delete the book and leave.

The description is good, but there are a lot of typos, missing words, and wrong punctuation.

It's a complete mess. Are you a foreigner? You can't speak clearly.

The aboriginal protagonist licks King Arthur and can't let go of family ties. Harry Potter is already acting like this, and he is told not to hate Dursley. Fuck, it's up to Harry whether he hates it or not. Even if Harry doesn't hate it, it's not your turn to say it. This main character is so disgusting.

I invested in 10 new books and bought them all, and even gave them the title of Street Fighter. The author must work hard.

It turned out to be a eunuch, but luckily there was no charge.

The front is too long, 😔 smelly, long, and too stained

I quite like the setting of the protagonist. The author's writing style and novel ideas are rare. Although the sudden change of the plot to goblins and Grindelwald is quite abrupt, it doesn't affect my enjoyment. But I really don't know what it means to cut it like this. How can you cut it if others cut it? With this mentality, even if you open a new book, the data will not be good. It's better to go to campus to teach plots and restore family relationships as readers in the comment area said. In this way, the traditional plots taught by professors plus your novel settings can lower the data? The main problem now is that your plot is too "divine". I don't know whether the author Wen Qing is suffering from illness or because he has confidence in himself. In short, he has not grasped the development of the plot, causing readers to watch in a fog. If you turn back the plot and write about the professorial style with a wide audience, and spice it up with family affection and warmth, this book will definitely be a hit. There is still time to continue writing. The protagonist was supposed to send the snake back to Brazil, but suddenly he used Grindelwald's skin to stir up trouble in Europe. It would be better to release the real Grindelwald and make a series of deals to stir up troubles in the world and attract attention (such as destroying the goblins, so that they don't have the energy to pay attention to Harry). The protagonist should hurry up and complete the snake branch, and then send Harry to school. Writing professorial style honestly caters to the public.

Dumbledore, the most rubbish person in the entire Harry Potter world

I am super, it turns out to be you! I beg you to finish the book without it being unfinished.

Did the author write it in English first and then translate it into Chinese? It is recommended to use chatgpt to polish it. There are too many grammatical errors and it is difficult to read smoothly.

Although it feels a bit strange, I will follow up and ask, what is the Cadogan Noble Phantasm?

Today's daily guide recommends this novel, click in and take a look, oh, it's already a eunuch. I don't know what this introduction is about🤔🤔

After reading it as a whole, I feel that the author is quite ambitious.