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Right: character appearance, character psychology, character skills, skill appearance, skill abilities, prop appearance, prop abilities, many repeated descriptions

There is no need to prepare magic potions, and no need to act. Why don't you go to the sea and massacre pirates? Is there such a thing as a month ago?

The writing was okay. What I liked most was that it was basically a showdown from the beginning. What I hated the most was that it didn't interfere with the plot throughout the whole process and just followed the protagonist as a dog-licker.

Author, your recent writing has been too difficult. People write exciting articles that are first suppressed and then refreshed, giving emotional value to the readers. It is commonly known as hitting a big stick first and then giving sweet dates. But you give sweet dates first and then be suppressed. Every time you are promoted, someone stronger than the protagonist will appear to abuse the protagonist. This is a tm, it is an abusive article. The mother goddess tortured her as soon as she took control of Yuanbao? And it's not his real body, he's just a dual-path angel, and where is the protagonist? Yuanbao + two uniquenesses + 3 archangels of Path 1 and several representatives of the essence, can the Mother Goddess come in with so much power as the initial barrier? And can you beat the protagonist? What configuration does the protagonist have? What I wrote in the front is okay, a little bit poisonous, but what's the fighting power behind it? I don't know how to write about politics. You've already cheated. Why don't you just use a panel and write about the beauty of intensity? What are you planning? The general situation and strength are with you, and the children have been plotted. Without the true god and old strength, you still have to compete in the peak competition... I will watch for a few more days. If this is the case, I will see you again. I am here to read Shuangwen, not to eat stones 😅

After seeing the latest chapter, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist must be a loser! It is so easy to be abused. The three pathways are Hand of Order, Miracle Master, and Conqueror. He is the agent of the Kingdom of Disorder and Origin Castle. He was manipulated by a dual-path Sequence Archangel 😅. I have never seen such a waste. He was arranged to death. I originally thought there would be some back-up plan, but it turned out to be a mistake.

I can't write about politics, but I can't write about emotions well. I can't write a good novel about fighting ability, and I can't even think about suppressing the protagonist until death. He is tortured by an opponent who is far inferior to him. Just finish the book and stop writing.

Chapter 4 is the showdown with Klein. To be honest, there is a showdown plot in only one book about pretending to be a descendant of a time traveler that can be read. The others, including this one, are terrible. I am suffering from stupidity.

If the protagonist continues to act like such a waste, he will have no choice but to quit. He can't even see it in his head. He is an idiot. He is a waste who is not even half as good as Xiao Ke 😅

The conversation between the protagonist and Klein is so awkward, it doesn't look like the way two time travelers get along after a showdown 🙂

Why does the author think that Adam will come to trouble the protagonist, or will he come directly in person? ? ? No, a lunatic like Amon wouldn't dare to trouble Xiao Ke for fear of falling over. Adam doesn't care about anything. You are completely OOC. . . Adam doesn't care who becomes the Black Emperor at all, he just needs a Black Emperor.

After reading ten chapters, I have no desire to continue reading. It's a mess. I don't want to say how well it should be written, but can you be more serious about your character dialogue and description? Is this what a capable god should say?

It felt like there was a bit less plot and too many explanation words. . .

It's just that the level setting is a bit uncomfortable. Level 80 can be said to be the full level of Sequence 2 or Sequence 1. It's too troublesome to correspond. Can't we have 79 and 80? Or 80 and 81. Sometimes I have to search to see what sequence the level corresponds to. It's so uncomfortable.

This old man from the Psychological Alchemy Society is trying to take advantage of him. If you don't kill him, why don't you keep him for the New Year?

Although it is a fanfic, it is written like Duo Wear. The dialogue between the characters is too taken for granted and feels like they are talking to themselves. .

And let that Duke Negan dance there?

You can't watch it until you see Miss Justice as the heroine! Looking for a wife from the audience channel?

The protagonist is one of the curly baboons released by Klein in Source Castle, and the plot takes place after Klein falls asleep. Everyone who is interested is welcome to take a look!

Don't do more sequences. After a little calculation, three sequences are six. If you are promoted to the main sequence, you will already be a demigod. When you are three demigods, you will be a true god.

Is self-sourcing a specialty of this circle?

Spend 1.86, Stop loss in time 😒