Reborn with My Wives

Someone also mentioned in the chapter review, I think it makes sense. The three female protagonists are okay, but the male protagonist needs more work. I don't see any masculine charm that can make the three female protagonists fall in love so wholeheartedly.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you read the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously formed, and the voices of praise became louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both inside and outside. When you are twenty, the bookworm's memories have a place for you. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates. So, don't stop... Update update update update!

I hope there won't be too many Shura Fields in the follow-up, which will make me tired. I'll make it more comfortable by watching more Fatang.

I personally have a wide range of reading tastes, mainly history, fantasy, fairy tales, cities, games, and light novels. I have also read a few other books. I read more physical books, and I only read electronic versions of non-physical books. Most of them are finished books first, so there are not many books that I really follow. My tastes are always changing. In the past few months, I have read I have read a lot of historical novels, so I decided to look at something urban and relaxed. I found that there are so many urban themes nowadays, such as harems and Shura fields, which are very popular. However, I personally feel that this kind of subject matter is not easy to write, or it is very difficult to write well. After all, this is a modern setting. No matter how powerful and wealthy the protagonist is, he does not have to have a bunch of female protagonists. The rules require that the female protagonists are all people with normal IQs and normal views on emotions. If they don't act like a stallion, it will be difficult to write. In the ancient setting, multiple outstanding female protagonists can be accepted naturally. In the modern setting, how to progress and end has become difficult and interesting. The better the heroine is written, the more entangled everyone will be, so some Among the books that attract readers with this subject matter, the subsequent progress is really messed up, or in other words, there are almost no good progress. (I personally have read the most popular book, and I also think the best-written book is the one by Youchu Xiaoyuer.) However, even the author's new book seems not to reach that level. So instead of insisting on doing that Shura field and getting tired of watching multiple female protagonists repeatedly jumping around and making thunder, and stallions pushing and pushing each other, I think it is better to live a harmonious life like this one. (Dog Head) Keep reading, so please give it a try, the author. The plot unfolds later, of course, for you to write for the readers to watch. I can only make some small suggestions. Here are some suggestions. First of all, urban themes have career lines and emotional lines running in parallel. The proportions are different. Without a career line, it is definitely impossible. Then the male protagonist's love talent Where does the money come from, but in a novel where everyone likes to read the emotional drama of the female protagonist, it is definitely not appropriate to have too many career lines. I am afraid that if the male protagonist is engaged in career, the heroine's plot will be reduced (this one does not look like it at the moment, but I have seen a lot of this kind of thing, so I would like to remind the author) And then the relationship In terms of storyline, I agree with the previous protagonist's idea. If you live a new life, what is lacking in the relationship between each wife, you can make up for it by adding some memories that you didn't have in the previous life. There must be many unresolved problems after completing the HE in the previous life. There is no need to go straight to it and then sleep with each other. Why worry if you have a relationship foundation? Try to write this kind of plot as naturally as possible to make it enjoyable. Otherwise, what will you watch after you get involved? Do you look at tricks and techniques? I'm afraid that the plot will be written too quickly and there will be nothing left to write. They are all here for sweet stories, not for Liu Bei. Of course, you will definitely like a proper intimate plot 🙂 It's just the starting point... The author can decide it himself. If it doesn't work, you can post an extra story in the group Well Finally, daily sweetness and warmth are actually not easy to write about (like the Hemiao book, I didn't have much expectations after seeing the ID card). On the one hand, the author needs to find more warm and interesting daily stories, and on the other hand, he needs to add as many categories as possible to the back. Things that look like goals (for example, how will four people get along after going to college? After all, three of them are in school and one is in the company, and Xiaobai is not an art student yet. If he and Yiyi Chengluo are not in the same school, how old should they be when they get married, what should they do with the wedding, etc.), I I can only cite these examples with limited imagination, so the author needs to give full play to them. These things should be mentioned to give readers something to look forward to. Only by imagining an interesting life in the future will they be interested in reading on. Now I feel that there is a little less to look forward to in the back, so please give more encouragement to the author. Of course, I am a bad reader of novels. Everything I say is for the pleasure of reading, and it may not be accurate. The author can just read it, if not, just read it for fun. Anyway, quality comes first, quantity is supplemented. If the author writes seriously, there will definitely be a group of readers who like this genre to follow (readers draw cakes). Anyway, just think about the story and code words, the author is great

One thing to say, I was originally attracted by the title, but now I am attracted by the setting. It feels like reading the book "I Really Didn't Want to Be a Savior". In the early stage, it was an ordinary female protagonist novel, but it turned out to be straight science fiction. Now I am attracted by this setting. I don't know what the author will do next, but Jiang Xiaoyue cannot be a supporting role. She should also be one, because she has been reincarnated for so many years, all alone. She is the loneliest, pity, and the one who deserves to be saved.

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It was so sweet that I rolled around in bed. Can we just have a single female protagonist? Is it okay with Bai Yu? 😭

Jiang Wenyue returned to the eighth life and endured the tearing pain of eight superimposed memories, which got worse each time. When I was a child, I promised that I would protect you for the rest of my life. So I will try my best to help you pursue other girls in every life. Looking at you and them in the eighth life, you are doing everything you can to have fun. I've been thinking and researching to find the ending you want. I will still be with you in the last life, pushing you to recover the three girls, admonishing you the rules summarized in the eighth life, and eliminating worries about money for you. Burn until the oil dries up and the lamp goes out, you and the three of them will be fulfilled, and your soul will be gone after reincarnation. For you, thousands of times.

Don't hide your identity for too long, otherwise you will get bored easily.

It's really good. This feeling of having a harem for two weeks makes up for regrets, makes memories sweeter, and truly becomes a harem of pure love 😍

After reading today's update, I feel relieved when I see the author getting scolded. Next time, it's best to write this kind of plot in one go. Otherwise, you will be scolded badly. However, it is really difficult to advance the plot if you don't write like this. All three wives are back. The next step is to live a sweet life or advance your career. Use your career to support research on the secrets of rebirth. But the author is not omnipotent. Writing about career is obviously a shortcoming. Writing about scientific research is either incomprehensible or difficult for readers. Understand that arranging a death can not only strengthen the determination to study the secrets of reincarnation, but also start a new plot in the next life. It can add hundreds of thousands of words at once. But I don't know how to define the secret of rebirth in the end. Is it idealism or scientific explanation? Or is it future time and space travel? I found that the male and female protagonists strayed from the timeline and affected the development of the world, so they launched a destruction. But in the end, it was found that this did not help but led to rebirth. With more and more people, the space-time line becomes more chaotic. The person behind the scenes has changed from the maintainer of order to the black-hand BOSS. The alliance of reborn people joins forces to fight the BOSS. Or there is no behind-the-scenes. It is just a correction of the world. The world fluctuation will cause accidents to the people around him. Jiang and the hero's childhood sweethearts were supposed to be reunited, but she was reborn and moved away, which caused the hero and Yiyi to be together, so the theoretical people around Jiang and the hero were wiped out. Then Yiyi was in pain. The rebirth wanted to tie up the male protagonist, but the male protagonist found three people. They completely destroyed the timeline during the happy reunion, leading to the destruction of the whole family. The male protagonist in the third life first created the happy reunion, but because he came into contact with Jiang and corrected part of the world line, the three women around him were all wiped out. After so many rebirths, with the vague memories of multiple lives, everyone discovered the rules of rebirth together, and finally had a real happy ending together and circumvented the rules. The above is just after reading today's content, it is really hard to talk to myself.

I am familiar with the author, but I feel different when I read the article. This book is much better than the previous one. I feel like it was written by two people. Among the books I have read this year, this is the second book that has made such a big improvement. The harem is not easy to write and deal with. Generally, it is either a god, a system, a Shura field, or a wisdom. Otherwise, it would be difficult to bring together a relatively reasonable large family. The whimsical rebirth of the couple in the book perfectly avoids the parts that may cause bad plots such as the Shura field in the early stage. Some of the writing is very good, but the encounter between one or several girls is not handled well. It feels like there is no sense of substitution. Now you can publish it directly Sugar can be said to be more reasonable than ordinary rebirth stories and multi-person rebirths. It even becomes reasonable to collect a few more in this life. After all, the three wives in the previous life have been reconciled. It can be said that it opens up unlimited possibilities. Moreover, the career line can be developed through the collective wisdom of multi-person rebirth mom-and-pop shops. It is much more reasonable for a single person to be reborn and strengthen his memory. It is much more reasonable for a diaosi from the previous life to become the chosen one in this life. Of course, if it is just a comprehensive review, there must be more experienced people in the rebirth stories than this excellent harem story. But for the progress of the author, he has put a lot of thought into it. There should be more publicity for the rising stars.

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? How come this book is written like this? It only took me 6 hours to read it all. The author quickly updated it. It's very well written.

This book really touched me and gave me a big blow. It mainly made me recall my first love. Alas, I will give you a monthly pass. Come on, the author. Don't be a eunuch. I will definitely order all of it. After raising it for a few months, I came back.

It's not enough. It's enough. Two more chapters. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

The book is very nice, but the author writes too little every day. Can't he write 20,000 a day?

In fact, I feel pretty good when I write it now, but I always feel that if I separate the part about chasing Yiyi before being reborn, it would be good to develop it into Xiaotian's daily novel later. After all, it's not very comfortable to see a knife coming out of nowhere. But of course the current plot is also very good. I just want to give you a suggestion to keep as a reference for the next book. It is not recommended to write multiple reincarnations as complicated as this. Sometimes it is enough to write a longer one at a time.

It's a bit similar to the time loop book I read before, but you are he

I miss you so much, the whole new group

It seems that the surname Xiao does not exist in reality, it should be Xiao

It was a bit hard to read Chapter 90 of Jiang Wenyue, whose character is still a genius girl and a rising star in academia. I looked at the date you wrote, and I searched again. If you say that this character did not refer to Jiang Ping, I won't believe it. Main=6😜

Does the author have any other books? When will the new book be released?

I subscribed to more than 20 chapters, and I skipped to read it. I don't know what to say, but I didn't quite like it. I'll wait until the update is finished to explain what's going on. I'll come back and read it again if I have the chance.

Lin Yiyi knows that the person who added her on WeChat is the male protagonist. Doesn't that mean that both parties tacitly know that the other party is reborn? If the male protagonist is not reborn, he will not join Lin Yiyi for no reason. Then Lin Yiyi knows that the male protagonist is reborn, and feels that the male protagonist will not come to her if she does not take the initiative. Does she think the male protagonist is so unkind and unjust?

Why can't I see the author's previous books?

Very nice 😭😭😭, thank you author 😭😭😭

I have finished reading and there is nothing to read. How many books does the author recommend?

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁