Senior Sister, Don't Be Like This, It's an Unlucky Day.

To be honest, the data is not good. I'm afraid there won't be any recommended resources next. I am also anxious, but the author has solved it himself. Accept your own mediocrity. Data is important, but it will not be the most important. Next, work hard and finish the book resolutely. It won't end suddenly if it's not a prison. Even if there is only one last reader left. Finally, in one sentence, I would like to encourage all fellow Taoists. If this heart does not have a rock-solid ambition, how can it dare to ride the wind and travel thousands of miles!

Finished reading the latest chapter. Let me evaluate it from my personal perspective () Of course, it's just based on my personal taste () Let's talk about the advantages first: The scene description is clear, complex but not chaotic, and the narrative is calm; the daily description has occasional inspiration; the sentences are clear, with no or few typos and grammatical errors, making it very comfortable to read. It can be seen that the author's basic writing skills are very solid. Of course, the author's writing attitude is also very down-to-earth. It feels like the author takes every review very seriously. This is indeed commendable, but it is very, very tiring and difficult to persist. I wish the author can complete his transformation step by step in this book. Let's talk about the shortcomings: First of all, it's too old. I was really surprised. If I hadn't seen that this book was still being updated, I would have really suspected that I was reading a book ten years ago. The very traditional and outdated routines were really used too much in this book.... The protagonist's sect hardly provided any help to the protagonist. This was originally a good way to break away from the old routine. In the early chapters, the author also mentioned in the chapter reviews that each of the protagonist's sects had stories behind them, but now, the protagonist's sect has almost zero sense of existence, and the whole book has almost become an ancient family history of casual cultivators. Originally, the elders of the sect were worth digging into. As the main line, if it is connected with the excavation of the secrets behind the sect, it will be more compact and attractive. It's a pity that in the main line so far, the sect has never appeared as a big module... Secondly, it is too serious. The author's narrative is too calm. This book is titled as a light novel, but the whole book is not a light novel at all. There are too few warm daily stories, and it's too tiring to read. I thought that by clicking in, I could see the daily struggle between the male protagonist and his senior sister, but what I saw was the male protagonist's various schemes. Yes, this is the main plot, but why don't you add the senior sister to it! This way you can make jokes while you're on the road, so you can relax and unwind, right? Writing like this, there are waves of ups and downs, and it is really tiring to read. In addition, there is one more thing: besides conceiving the complex overall situation, please conceive some ridiculous storylines. Like when Mu Qing bumped into his senior brother and turned into a senior sister, it could have been written as a very relaxed episode, but it was brushed off... Or like when the senior sister left a letter and left without saying goodbye to chase the protagonist. What happened after returning to the sect? Not even written... But even the most serious Xianxia will always be interspersed with moments of humor... Again: the supporting roles are too thin - even the protagonist. As mentioned in the first point: too old routines have turned many supporting characters into tool men, and the image of the protagonist has also begun to become thin. Such a protagonist has no memory points, and the entire book will be affected. A few sentences in the copywriting introduction created a vivid heroine, but it was hidden in the snow, and all the characters appeared were puppets in the hands of the author. ——If it were me, I would add my senior sister to the protagonist group after she kicks in the door in the middle of the night, and then add Mu Qing to the protagonist group after he enters the immortal sect. In this way, there will be a senior sister who is straightforward but has her own little thoughts, a protagonist who has to be tight at all times but is actually a restless element at heart, and a young junior brother who is innocent and innocent, but is unexpectedly good at women to form a trio. What kind of sparks these three people will create makes me tremble just thinking about it. But the author chose to spread out. The senior sister retreated behind the scenes and only occasionally mentioned a few words; Mu Qing simply handed it over... This is simply a waste of resources... Finally, there is a lack of depth Continuing with the point, this is an inevitable consequence of the weak supporting role. In successful books, every seemingly insignificant supporting character has a story behind it. Their actions are not the needs of tool people, but reasonable choices based on their past experiences. The author occasionally uses one or two sentences to establish a supporting character, but what is the story behind this supporting character? What have you experienced? Don't know at all. Although it has flesh and bones, it is still two-dimensional. So does the protagonist. He wants to become stronger, why? The reason behind it? What does he do these things for? Without these, the protagonist is just a tool for the plot in the hands of the author. To put it bluntly, in the future, the protagonist will have to overcome the inner demon tribulation, and I don't even know what he will do. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion... I am very optimistic about the author, but I really don't think highly of this book... Although it is only more than seventy chapters now, I feel that the tone of this book has basically been set, and it is difficult for me to imagine how the author will make changes in the future. But judging from the author's serious attitude towards writing, I'm sure that this can be certified platinum () After all, if it is not supervising, it is foreseeable that this book will be difficult in the later stage. If I finally finish this book, the process of overcoming all these difficulties will be a treasure that will last my entire writing career. Let me write this for now. If one day the author really succeeds in overcoming the tribulation and comes back to dig my grave ()

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Qidian's new book issue mainly focuses on follow-up reading. It takes 2 minutes to read the latest chapter. Fellow Taoists, if you have time, you can collect it and read it. If you have votes, you can also vote for them. If you have no votes for the time being, you can also add more comments in the article, or just leave a comment. Don't let the author go all the way alone.

According to the beginning of the introduction, the author should have followed Xuebai throughout the whole process But somehow he went astray in the middle, resulting in the selling point not being so obvious. This should be the reason why the outline was not done well. However, it is commendable that the author has always maintained his original mentality and did not mess up the plot or fool the readers. He gradually got better from about sixty to seventy chapters, and the more he wrote, the more flavorful he was. Up to the current chapter, I feel that it is at the level of food and grass If there are new friends, you can try to follow it. According to the author's current trend, it will only get better and better in the future

Reflect on it from time to time and disclose problems in the writing process of this book. It's like writing a book and taking notes. If other fellow Taoists find problems, they can discuss them together, as long as they are reasonable. If they are just scolding, then they are not welcome. 🙅

The plot is a bit stiff, the characters' characteristics are not well expressed, the transitions are a bit strange, and the writing is average. The senior sister should be the heroine, but she drives the plot like a tool, and the pig's feet are also passive and the plot is the same. Summary: watchable, but average

Author, you should write more astringent stories

Dear readers, adopted fathers and mothers, it is a good time to collect and read it today. If you have a monthly pass or something, that would be great too.

I really like the author's writing style. Come on! Looking forward to becoming a great god soon😃

The author's fairy tales have a light touch of fairy and chivalry, and the current length of the novel has a more human touch. (I don't know if the author did this intentionally) The overall plot is quite smooth, but in Qinghe County, there is always a feeling that the explanation is not complete. I don't know if it is an illusion. Starting from the Earth Spirit Sect, the plot starts to get interesting, and it also involves some big secrets. If I guess correctly, there should be a plot involving a battle with the demon in the follow-up. As the title says, overall it's okay, and it can be seen that it's getting more and more exciting. I hope it won't be a eunuch. ps: I have a question, what is the relationship between the content of the book and the title?

It's quite difficult. Most of the chapters in the middle take the senior sister out of the public eye and indeed deviate from the theme. By the time I discovered it, it was already too late, so this book has been on the market (and may continue to be on the market in the future 🤐). But the author did not give up. After some chapters of foreshadowing, he finally brought the senior sister back, and of course, he also brought Mu Qing with him. After all, with Mu Qing here, I believe that the life of cultivating immortals will not be boring. I also hope that all fellow Taoists will like it and support it. 😁

The newcomer has just arrived. The good and bad luck of the day written in the introduction seems to be similar to the weird calendar. I came here to read it in detail.

The core is still the old-fashioned fantasy novel template, and even has a structure of fighting and breaking.