Fu Qin Emperor Industry

In fact, I think this kind of historical text that translates classical Chinese into vernacular, adds a little bit of the author's conception, and has a bit of historical research is quite interesting. Unfortunately, not many people have read it now. Maybe it's because you, the author, don't have enough plot. I followed it from next door. I hope the author will update more 😍🌹

I was wondering if anyone else is reading this book?

I kind of want to start a new book, but I'm afraid I won't be able to sign it like this one 😢😢

After reading thirty chapters, I should be able to comment on it. The most important problem with this book now is that there is no protagonist, which leads to no connection between the plots. If the author wants to write about the plot switching between multiple forces or the development of an entire force, he can refer to the later treatment method of my book "The Emperor of Nanchen". Specifically, you need to establish a protagonist, and then let other people and things you want to write about connect with the protagonist. For example, the author can re-open a book about Fu Jian, using Fu Jian's perspective at the beginning, and then let readers get to know other Fu family members through his memories or conversations. Then, Fu Qin's opponents are introduced through the conversations of other Fu family members. At this time, it is cut to the perspective of the opponent's forces, and finally it is cut back to the protagonist Fu Jian to start the next round of changes in the situation, so that readers can continue reading. The author still has merits, and the information he checked is good. If you haven't signed a contract yet, use the ideas of this book and the method I mentioned to start a new book. It should be easy to sign a contract. Come on.

The first one is the former Qin's unification of the north The second one is the map of Tuyuhun at that time The third one is the Eastern Jin Dynasty The fourth one is the former Qin and the former Yan's confrontation period The fifth one is the macro map The sixth one is the map of the former Qiuchi Kingdom

I've only listened to a few chapters, and I'll talk about a few points. The first is that the people around Zhu Tiao are either Fu or Yao. This is the root of the problem. One of the reasons why Fu Jian uses surrender is to dilute the established group of ministers. There are not many people with reckless backgrounds who know how to govern the country. If they keep occupying the court, the country will not be governed well. The second is the part about Wang Meng thanking the pig's trotters and becoming Zhang Bin. It's not that Wang Meng has no chance to be Zhang Bin. He wanted to be an official and had several opportunities, but Fu Jian's understanding of governing the country is consistent with his philosophy. Third, people in that era did not have so many racial concepts at all. They only had clan concepts and cultural habits. The core reason why all the northern dynasties immediately copied the Khan culture when they conquered the world is that nomadic culture could not govern the country at all, nor could it maintain long-term stability. The reason why only the Tang Dynasty could be grand and grand was because the first groups at the time of the founding of the country all combined the characteristics of Khan and nomadic culture. They did not have the self-righteous contempt chain of the pure Han court, and could treat others as equals. In Chinese history, if a country wants to develop, it must continue to integrate and learn. As long as it sticks to it, it will be a dead end.

Coming all the way from fq, I hope the author will work hard! ! !

The author has updated. His writing is quite good. Come on＾0＾~

If Fu Jian had been a little more guarded against people, it would not have resulted in the death of tens of millions of people in the future, nor would it have made the humanity behind him so miserable. If Fu Jian unified the world, it would definitely make the world more dazzling

The core reason for the failure of the former Qin Dynasty was that the foundation was unstable and the internal ethnic groups and various large and small forces were not completely dispersed. Wang Meng killed many royal families during his lifetime so that his reforms could be completed. If he is given another ten years, he should be able to break up the forces of various groups. Only with cultural influence can it be possible to achieve unification. In fact, the country has no centripetal force.

I'll just cut it if I've accumulated enough experience, or maybe control the length (it's just a hobby and treat it like I didn't say it), think more about the beginning, and try to write in. Writing it down like this is not an option. Perseverance is commendable🙏🙏

I read this book for half an hour and chatted casually. Please don't criticize me, the author, I'm sorry (it can be seen from the content that the author should be more rigorous at ordinary times) 1. After reading this period of history, it is the period of Wuhu Chaos in China. Not many friends know about this historical period, and the audience is too small 2. The title and text make me feel like I am reading the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. , But the writing style has not caught up. It really looks like classical Chinese translated into vernacular, and feels like "history books and humanities" 3. There are very few classical history writings (the way they were written 15 years ago). The works at the top of the history section are either from the Song and Ming dynasties, with a strong sense of substitution for beginners; or they are systems, various plug-ins, and fast-paced 4. The contents of the book The story starts from the top, but the highlight of this period should be the change in the suffering at the bottom. The biggest problem when writing about the top is that there is no sense of substitution. For the Han people, this period of history is relatively depressing, and life at the bottom is miserable. If you start from the bottom, focus on depicting the suffering of the two-legged sheep state of the Han people in the North at that time, and participate in some major events from the perspective of the protagonist. Supplemented by some novel ideas, the whole golden finger comes out, and it can still be popular with some additions From the Warring States to the Republic of China, historical novels are famous, blocked, and various branches. I have basically read them all. I am an old bookworm, and I also want to give some suggestions. "Is the new trend of the writing genre➕a sense of substitution of historical events➕changes in historical events" the main point of enjoyment. This book already has more than 300 chapters. Even if it is revised now, new readers will not be able to handle the first 300 chapters. Let's start a new book by borrowing money, or use the first 300 chapters to explain the plot in one chapter, and then temporarily change the protagonist to a smaller one, or continue writing as before and use it as a practice.

It's so straightforward, but there's no character point of view. There seems to be no description of the scene or expression of emotions. It's too dry.

My horse teeth, the author has laid the foundation for fifty chapters! At first I thought you were narrating history. In fact, there is no need for so many.

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This book has not been successfully signed for several times. To be honest, the author is a little disappointed, so I ask all readers to vote for recommendations and comment more. This will also encourage the author 😭😭

There are really too few people writing about the Qin Dynasty. I can't vote for it with the monthly vote. Dear book friends, why don't you give me your recommendation vote?

It's really a pity for Fu Jian. This man is one of the rare benevolent people among all emperors. Under his cooperation with Wang Meng, the north has gradually become a prosperous state.