The Martial Talisman Comes to the Door: Starting from the Great Sun Vajra

Are the puppet master and weapon trainer in the introduction the same thing?

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Why haven't you completed it yet? You obviously have enough mana.

The plot is too retarded. It takes 2.3 Years to solve all kinds of problems when the protagonist leaves a battlefield that has lasted for hundreds of years. I just finished playing in my homeland, which has not been invaded for thousands of years, but the protagonist's hometown was invaded. What the hell is this? You really don't use your brain to arrange the plot.

The plot is too slow. I feel that during the three months on the battlefield, the author wrote at least hundreds of pages.

The writing is unexpectedly good, food and accommodation are included, don't use poison, it will get angry.

Isn't the cultivation too fast? The timeline in the book is just over a month old, from Xiao Bai to the late stage of Qi training, to the running horse realm, and the foundation is about to be established.

There was a crisis at the beginning, the protagonist was about to enter the battlefield, but after 300,000 words, he was still rambling. It felt like the main plot would never come, so I gave up...

What have you written recently? Give it to others when they ask for it?

This book is quite exciting. It was just a little delayed in the early stages. It feels like the author compiled an outline later. The early outline was quite messy, with too many branch lines overshadowing the main line. But after adjusting the outline, the writing became more and more exciting. However, when I caught up with the latest chapter, I felt that the author might have to cut it off, because he wrote about the extreme west city very briefly, and just touched on it in one stroke, and was eager to open another map. Maybe the results are not ideal!

Just based on this introduction, I'm going to click in and take a look. I don't read comments Chapter 20 Post-Evaluation

It's rare. Nowadays, there are very few novels in which the protagonist has a secondary profession. I think back in the past, it was necessary for the protagonist to have an alchemy profession.

It's a very good book. The writing is very good. It's not trivial. It's also humorous. It's affirmed by bookworms who have been reading it for decades. Come on.

The protagonist is like a barrel of explosives, blowing up wherever he goes.

The author is very powerful, but he insists on talking about spring, summer, autumn and winter talents, and fox and wolf strength levels. It gives me a headache to read.

I'm almost finished watching it. I almost missed it when I read the comments before. So far, the writing is sophisticated, the pace is appropriate, and the map transitions and plot settings are average to above average. Maybe those black people in the comment area have never eaten fine bran?

The prostitutes never say bad things😁

I'm rambling here and there. I haven't entered the battlefield yet. The progress is too slow and I can't watch it.

I've read dozens of chapters, but I can still read it, but the pace is too slow, and some places are confusing with settings. I'm still hanging around in the village after 50 chapters 😅. As I continue reading, the story remains the same.

The author's writing skills are very good, really good.

The protagonist gives people the impression that he has well-developed limbs and a simple mind.

I recommend the books "Infinite Horror: The Infinite Road of Mortals" and "Infinite Arcade Paradise", which are very good-looking. Although the book has just been published, the content is innovative and creates a new wheelchair enhancement. You can collect it first and then harvest it when it is full.

Is the author updating a chapter every 11 days now?