The System Came Two Years Early and I Became a God!

When I saw the chapter where the author wrote "It hurts, it hurts too much", since the author wanted to complain, I would simply complain about it. The interesting/enjoyable points of this book are actually: humans (weak), enemies (strong), and protagonists (very strong). Human beings fight desperately, then wait for the protagonist to come to the rescue, and then the protagonist pretends to be cool. As long as the author can grasp the timing well, this routine can be written to the end. But looking at it now, the author is a bit broken. Now it becomes: human (weak), enemy (very strong), protagonist (super strong). What problem does this cause? That is, humans could originally fight with enemies, but now humans will die if they are touched by enemies. The protagonist can only get rid of the enemies before humans and enemies fight. 1. First of all, the sense of tension is lost. Your protagonist is basically written as invincible, so the sense of tension can only be provided by others. Previously, reader: The supporting character cannot be defeated and is about to die. When will you arrive as the protagonist? Protagonist: makes a brilliant debut and makes a comeback from adversity. Reader: Shuangshuangshuang Now, the protagonist: There is a crisis here, and it will be seconds; there is a crisis there, and it will be seconds. The world is at peace. Reader: The world is at peace, I see nm. 2. The contrast is lost and the sense of enjoyment plummets. Author, guess why Legend, which has very boring game content, became so popular, and why Legend is an online game. Your current book is equivalent to a stand-alone legend. One person can automatically find paths and fight monsters. Who can read it? It seems that the author did not write an outline and did not recognize the selling point of his book. Then, I skipped reading when I saw the search for herbal medicine. However, no matter it was the chapter title or the preview page, there was no chapter that made me interested in stopping and reading. I'll look through it again, and if I'm not interested, I should probably give it up.

The protagonist's strength can't keep up. He can't beat this one, and he can't beat that one. Why should he be called an advance or a savior?

What are these chapters about? The protagonist is also a future savior. In these chapters, he looks like a salesman of Indian sacred oil. You want steel, why not use Wuwang? Why don't you look for Zhengfu? Don't tell me to keep it a secret, right? Brother, how do you keep these things you bought a secret? Or don't want to owe a favor? But if you buy from this "uncle", you don't owe a favor? In addition, brother, whether you should say it or not, there is no need to hide some good things. Just like your boxing book, it shouldn't be a big problem to spread it out, right? Another example is those steel formulas. Even if nothing can be produced, it is still a research idea, right? On the one hand, he said that he didn't want to work so hard in the future, but on the other hand, he hid everything. What was the fuss about?

Author, I don't know if you have an outline for writing this book. Regardless of whether you have an outline or not, if you continue to write like this, at least I personally will not be able to stand it. Now the protagonist gives me the feeling that he is playing a canned game from Ubisoft, constantly accepting and clearing tasks. You could say that the protagonist is lazy, he is always doing things. You may say that he is diligent, but he just follows the system without any ideas of his own. No matter what stage you reach, what you do will always be the same. It feels a little fresh at the beginning, but later it will be like being in jail. So far, the one I feel the most about is the time when the protagonist kills earthworms. Because it was his own action, and there was no inexplicable pretense. After all, he was not strong at that time, and he still felt a little exciting. When I got to the end, it was seconds after seconds, and it was seconds after a monster appeared. Anyway, I didn't feel great, I just felt wet.

The introduction and the beginning only appeared in 2026. Now it's almost level 3 everywhere in the first year.

If you have money, a golden finger, and a big brain, you will soon become a god. Put out more rat poison and cockroach poison in each city. How easy it is. You can also hire people to do it. The little adds up. A city can give you a dozen or so. How many across the country. There are also villages and towns. Wow. I can't imagine.

Do you know why it falls so hard? Because the plot is too lame. The most powerful people in the world are all level one, and the protagonist is level 5. The combat power collapsed drastically. The protagonist becomes the nanny. No one else can solve anything, it all depends on the protagonist. Then when a monster appears, the protagonist will kill him, and there is basically no climax. Moreover, will the protagonist rely on the protagonist to kill monsters everywhere in the future to defend the world? Are you too busy to come here?

Are all enemies idiots? Do you want to write them so brainlessly?

After it was put on the shelf, it felt like everything could be fought with the protagonist, and the coolness of the numerical values ​​​​created before was instantly gone...

Even if you are cheating, you are still playing house. If you are not cheating, why don't you just become the master of Sanhe?

If the rest of Chapter 136 is written this way, I won't read it, and you'll have finished earning the few dollars I have.

None of the supporting characters written in the early days have disappeared. In the later period, some new characters are always written out of the blue, or even appear directly. There is no characterization at all. It must be said that it is a cool article, but at least don't forget the old characters. The 5th and 6th levels written in the early days (such as Lele, Li Shaojie, Lu Ji, and the nursing home twins) have disappeared. Recently, even Dahuang and Huzi have not been seen, so it is better not to write them in the first place 😒

Or just send an eunuch announcement directly. We are not that stingy. What bothers us the most is that one chapter is updated inexplicably every ten days and a half. It is really annoying 🤫

Why don't you go to the breeding farm to kill them?

The previous writing was quite good, but now the more I read it, the more it looks like a studio writing, like writing a running account.

If this system appears at the right time, it is estimated that many hosts will need to be replaced!

It looks great in the early stages, but then it starts to get a little boring.

I don't want to watch it anymore.

I didn't think this book was free when it was free, but I realized it was short when I paid for it. In addition, the review threshold for having a book friend value before being put on the shelves is really to be criticized.

It was okay before Chapter 150, but everything after that was quite boring.

It reminds me that my investment failed 😭😭😭😭. The reason is that the author has not updated for 7 days. I plan to bring a small whip to the author to ask what happened... 😜😜😜

The more I look at it, the less interesting it becomes, so I quit, I quit.

Alas, the author's name is really correct. It's really difficult for him to write pictures 🤫

Fortunately, I didn't vote for the monthly vote. I'm a eunuch.

I don't necessarily comment if I think it's good. There are a lot of trolls who say things with bad intentions. Be careful. I often clear out my bookshelf. There are always people logging into my account which is annoying. I don't want people to read the books I read. I don't know what to do with them, but I always forget them and can't find them back.

Monthly Pass

Has the author updated it yet? I'm still waiting