Becoming a Legend in a Low-Martial World

In my opinion, the best examples of this type of novel are Wenpiaogong's *Half-Heroic Tale* and *The Main God Space*, both set in a magical world. One involves the sacrifice of millions of lives to develop a demonic sword, while the other takes place in the Song Dynasty, where the protagonist, having traveled to the *Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils*, tempts Emperor Huizong with the promise of…

Trying to create an original story but ending up writing two worlds at once seems like taking too big a step. Moreover, the two worlds are essentially the same, irrelevant to the protagonist. So why write two worlds simultaneously? Furthermore, the process of exploring the world's background is largely omitted.

Having read the author's two original works, I feel that the author's ability to construct a world is weak, and the character and plot development is also weak. Although the author wants to break out of the fanfiction framework, there is an intentional or unintentional tendency to gravitate towards Gu Long's style, including in the language. However, it lacks the soul of Gu Long's storytelling.

Speechless. A reincarnator suddenly appeared. I have a physiological reaction to seeing a reincarnator. Sorry, I'm leaving.

Well, what people want to read is an invincible story. The title and synopsis give that impression. That was the initial target audience. But, you know? First, there's a martial arts world. Then there's a blood and qi world. The differences aren't that great, you know? There's no complementarity, you know? And then the really annoying thing happens. You even level up in the martial arts world.

What kind of garbage have you written from chapter 100 to 140? Do you really not want readers?

I couldn't bear to watch the part where they saved the little girl.

It seems to be falling apart a bit too quickly. This kind of story actually had a lot of potential; it's like surviving a chaotic world of demons and martial arts while cultivating immortality. The characters shouldn't have been too complicated from the start, and the martial arts as well. Honestly, the constantly appearing characters seem to require a lot of background connections to integrate.

The author wrote such wonderful female characters from several worlds, but there was absolutely no progress in the story. By the way, is the protagonist a eunuch, or is he some kind of ruthless cultivator? Otherwise, why bother writing all this ambiguous stuff? What's the point?

Speechless. It was clearly stated at the beginning that *Two Realms Mountain* was a Jin Yong/Gu Long martial arts novel, but the author wrote it as an original work. 😒I want to complain.