Becoming a Legend in a Low-Martial World

For this type of novel, I think the best ones are Wen Chao Gong's Half-Xia Biography, and the Master God's Space in the Magical World. One of these two novels used the lives of millions of people to develop the magic sword, and the other one reached the highest level of Tian Long Ba Bu, entered the Song Dynasty, tempted Song Huizong with immortality, and used 700,000 lives to develop 13 different sunflower books. Novels like this use time and human lives to spread martial arts and deduce martial arts

If you want to create original results and write about two worlds at once, is it too much a step to take? Moreover, there is no essential difference between the two worlds, and they are as irrelevant to the protagonist, so why write about two worlds at the same time? Moreover, the process of exploring the background of the world is basically omitted. The protagonist has basically figured out the two worlds, but the reader is confused and confused. What is the purpose of jumping back and forth between the worlds? Now there are two worlds, one here and the other. Even if I ask Gu Long to write it, I still can't understand it.

After reading the author's two original books, I feel that the author's ability to build a world is very weak, and the shaping of characters and plots is also very weak. Although the author wants to break out of the fan framework, he will move closer to Gu Long intentionally or unintentionally, including the language and writing. But he doesn't have Gu Long's story-telling soul. The plot was awkwardly written. The plot of "Testing the Sword of the World" was very cliched and could not become an attractive scene. It is the biggest monster among the little monsters, and it has no explosive points for readers who have read more than ten thousand volumes. Without the construction of the entire world background, the rendering and control of characters, plots, conflicts, and rhythm, the writing is very crude. If you just keep killing monsters and messing around, the stickiness to readers will be very low. After watching two games, you will throw it away because you know how you will write later. The reason why writing fan fiction is easy is because the world background, characters, and plot are all very classic and very charming. They are all ready-made. As long as the readers are modified in places that they are not satisfied with, there will be a strong resonance. But for originality, the stories you tell are unimaginative and unattractive, just like tasteless food, and it would be a pity to abandon them because there are too many stories of the same type to end. The reason I write so many words is because of the fanfic written by the author, which I quite like. But after the author created the original work, after reading the current fifteen chapters of the new book, I felt that it was ordinary and uninspiring, so I was a little worried.

I was speechless. A reincarnation person popped out. I had a physiological reaction when I saw the reincarnation person. Sorry, I withdrew.

How to say it? What everyone wants to read is your invincible article. The title and introduction of this book make everyone feel this way. This is the audience that first came. But right? The first martial arts world. There is also a world of flesh and blood. There's not much difference, you know, there's no complementarity, you know! Then came the more fucked up part. You have also upgraded in the world of martial arts. Then the protagonist fights both worlds very badly. It's not that you're feeling aggrieved, but you're not saying that you're invincible in any world either. It just doesn't feel that cool. The summary is that there is no feeling.

What did you write from Chapter 100 to Chapter 140? You really don't want readers, right?

I couldn't stand the part where I saved the little girl.

It seems to be falling apart quickly. In fact, this kind of writing is quite original, similar to cultivating immortals in the chaotic world of demons and martial arts. The characters should not be too complicated at the beginning, and the martial arts are also the same. To be honest, the characters that keep popping up seem to need a lot of background linkage to integrate, but now the writing is getting more and more complex, and the two worlds, low martial arts can not be simpler, do you have to have a large group of settings?

The author wrote so well about the women of several worlds, but in the end there was no progress. As for whether the protagonist is a eunuch, or a cultivator who is ruthless, why don't you write these ambiguous plots? What's the point?

I'm speechless. I obviously started by saying that Two Realms Mountain is a martial arts novel of the ancient Jin Dynasty, but the author ended up writing it as an original one. 😒I want to complain