
What to Do If There Are Too Many Heroines?
女主太多了怎么办
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 482k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Everyday Romance
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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97Fans
182Chapters
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Not bad, you can still watch it
I hope there can be more systems, such as sci-fi, supernatural, magical, beasts, girls, and girls. I think it's OK within ten. The recommendation vote has been given.
Do you have orthopedics? It's okay to write a little more obscurely
Heroine No. 2, Come out quickly, I want to see the Shura Field
Wrong classification, this is not a city
Brief comments and suggestions
Is it my problem or the book's? It's too slow to elicit daily routines. The first chapter could be almost entirely deleted, as the main character introduced in the second chapter is too awkward (or maybe it's just not my favorite). The male protagonist's disguise ability is still not that good, and the system doesn't even have a b-level answer to the protagonist.
The beginning was okay, but there was a spread between the male and female hosts.
My feelings about the first twenty chapters
It's too detailed and takes too much space to describe the characters. If this is just a sweet article and you put this kind of fragment after forty or fifty chapters, it would be very good. But if you spend so much space on spreading sugar in the first twenty chapters, it's a bit too procrastinating. I came here for the content of the introduction. In the end, the story I simulated for the first time was not told and I chose to integrate it into daily memories. So I shouldn't have spent a few hours just to finish it all at once. Ten chapters, from your author's perspective, you may think it's nothing, because you are from God's perspective, you know the story, it's nothing. From the reader's perspective, you sprinkled sugar for twenty chapters, and the other plots are basically nothing, just sweet. We haven't even met the other characters in your profile now. I don't know, I thought it was a single female lead story. If it were a single female lead daily sweet story, I would be so happy now, but you are not, brother.
I feel that this book is not suitable for writing about multiple heroines. There are no parallel or hidden lines. When writing the second heroine, the emotions towards the first heroine are basically interrupted. The first heroine actually hinders the emotional development of the protagonist more in terms of writing. And because of the difficulty of the second world, I feel that the emotional foundation of the second heroine is a bit shaky, and the plot and emotional design have some problems (the first heroine has already been conquered), but the daily writing is good, please work hard, author.
Reminder
Can the author speed up the progress? I'm addicted to reading it. How will I live without your novel😦
Can you write an alien heroine in the world of Cthulhu, such as Shub Nicholas?
Man, please hurry up, I want to watch Shura Field, I want to watch daily life. Just skip these dungeons and intersperse them with memories. The male protagonist is still a little more stable.
I'm sorry everyone, I didn't know what I was writing some time ago... You don't need to subscribe to this book, just think of it as my failure. I will complete the outline of the next book and then open the book. Please be merciful 😭😭😭
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If you have any ideas, please tell me directly. After I collect them, I can learn from them based on the content 😃