Achievement System: I Became a God in the Extraordinary World

It was broken and was sacrificed by Brother Feng 😰

Below this post, you can think of all kinds of strange achievements. If possible, think of an ability that seems useless but is useful at critical moments. Thank you so much!

Inkblots, how many sheets of a hallucination have been written?

After reading it, I found that the writing is too messy and tedious, and the slow pace is not your style of writing. If you want to write a hallucination copy plot, concentrate on writing the hallucination copy, and if you want to write a realistic plot, concentrate on writing reality. However, you chose to write both at the same time. It's not that you can't write double lines, but it's obvious that you didn't write it well. One moment is reality and the other is hallucination. The plot connection is not done well, as if the chapters of two unrelated books were messed up and mixed together. Let's put it this way, unless the whole thing is rewritten, I feel that the messy and boring plot in the previous dozens of chapters is enough to sentence this book to death.

Can't read. The first few pictures are so confusing, I was still running for my life in the gun battle, but I fell into a coma and hallucinated. Then a woman suddenly appeared, and the protagonist believed her inexplicably. I think normally the main character should be killed in a coma and the whole book should be finished.

Judging from the introduction, it is a kind of cynicism and self-righteousness.

The writing was so messy that I thought I, a seaside person, had accidentally eaten a fungus.

In the first chapter, the protagonist is overpowered. Such an awesome achievement only gives such a rubbish effect. It is better to give a skill with a promising future than a rubbish skill like this. And there is no time-traveler achievement, and all the time-traveler achievements have been swallowed up, which is not rigorous. The protagonist is a visitor from outside the world, and either has the extraterrestrial demon achievement or the time-traveler achievement! Resurrection from the dead is an achievement, but the protagonist is not from this world. He has traveled through time, which is another achievement. I don't know if I didn't write it because I wanted to suppress the protagonist, or if I wasn't rigorous. After watching the beginning of this episode, it felt boring to suppress the protagonist like this. It was too obvious and ugly! Gone

The first ten chapters are a mess, with a hammer here and a stick here and there.

The writing is too messy, with too many things added, making people dizzy when reading it.

Take a look

Messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy. Messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy, messy.

The rhythm is not very good, and I feel that some of the complaints are too dramatic and not well integrated, which interrupts the reading experience a bit But come on, come on

The writing is not bad, but the pace is too slow and there are too many settings. It is not suitable for people who like fast food, and it is not very enjoyable. More than grain and grass

At 10:13 am on August 17, 2024, I found this book in the daily guide. The introduction of the book made me extremely interested, so I left this post.

Already cast two recommendation votes for support

It started well. The further I write, the more ink is written. How many chapters are there in this hallucination?

A fantasy world, a real world! What a time travel for 40 years. . Speechless! If you write about fantasy, write about fantasy first. . . Come out and talk about reality. And it's very watery. . .

I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. This plot is not suitable for online writing.

A novice village~~small copy~~I wrote nearly 80 chapters! Mainly because there is too much nonsense literature! Those messy abilities! No need for it!

The author's writing is very good, and it is definitely worth reading and subscribing. Recommend a book: Mental Patients Have More Happiness "Old Man in Time Travels to Scavenge and Survive by Making Bad Movies"