Naruto: Achieve the Six Paths with the Golden Light Spell

After three thousand ninjas and 200 elites died, Yuan Fei had to abdicate. Uchiha and Kyuubi followed Pig's Foot. It felt like Konoha was worse than Sand Ninja Village now.

This content is a bit discouraging for Uchiha, and the division is so severe. Just one person is invincible. The story of the Third Hokage and Danzo exterminating the clan is too exaggerated. Directly from the silent genocide to the just and fair genocide by force. He also killed people randomly. It almost makes the top management of Konoha have the IQs of elementary school students.

It was the first time I saw writing a novel and I was intimidated. You can either write invincible to the end, destroy various plots, and be happy. Or just develop the flow steadily and follow the original work. Either develop the sect or reform the ninja world. Your novel must have a unique feature. When you first accepted a disciple, you thought it was a sect style, but you changed it halfway through writing. I wrote the Invincible style later, thinking that it would ruin the plot in various ways. After all, after killing so many people who were hostile to Konoha, other countries would take the opportunity to come in and completely eliminate Konoha. However, I wrote a little bit and then stopped writing it. The timeline in it has already passed two years, and ninjas from other countries are like blind people. What do you want to write about? There is no special feature at all. You are not naive enough to want to satisfy all readers' hobbies, are you? Scammers all know how to use stupid winning text messages to select target groups. Nothing can satisfy everyone. Nowadays, all walks of life select target groups. Do you want to satisfy all groups when you write a novel? This kind of thinking can only be regarded as a street author.

How should I put it? The protagonist is like a coward, weak and incompetent. The first few chapters made me poisoned to death. The protagonist is like a waste.

Good. Unlike other games in which the main character is suppressed, at the critical moment, all the forbidden arts in the Book of Sealing are suddenly proficient, and even the magical arts are awesome...

No, I can't understand it. After reading many chapters, I don't even understand who the protagonist is. Is this a group portrait novel? One moment I write this character, the other moment I write that character.

It's quite funny. Konoha lost 3,000 elites, the Uchiha clan defected, the Kage-level masters defected, and then the other big countries remained motionless. It's really funny.

Long-winded, if you want to imitate the manners of Taoist masters, you will have to imitate cats and tigers, which is poisonous.

In terms of the excitement of the plot, depression accounts for a large proportion, and the promotion time is short and timid. As for the night of genocide written in a large space in the middle, it lowered the IQs of the Third Generation and others. Moreover, all other sounds of Konoha disappeared, and the Third Generation seemed to be playing an RTS game. Wudiliu's words are always deflated. He was deflated by ordinary people's rumors before, deflated in front of Kyuubi, and then his son's apprentice was seriously injured. His "🐢get up" mentality was deflated again. When he left, he still ignored this nonsense. Sandai and you win-win, but he was still deflated. It doesn't feel good when I'm depressed, and I feel a little nauseous when I feel good. The one who won the battle seems to be walking away in despair. . Then, after killing a third of the ninjas, Konoha was supposed to go one against four. It's been almost two years, or a year and a half, and nothing has happened. You are still talking about spies here. Not long after the protagonist left home, it may even be the second day of the night of genocide. During the confrontation, the Shikoku border sent a reconnaissance team to the Konoha border to test the strength of the troops. The trial period lasted for a month at most, and after discovering that there were so few ninjas in Konoha, they immediately joined forces to start a war. Another obvious point is that many forces are hanging up, which may only appear when they target the protagonist. Everyone knows how to let the Uchiha genocide pretend to be civil strife. The third generation was so brave that he brought the ANBU roots and other ninjas from other places to destroy the Uchiha in broad daylight. First of all, even if the third generation wants to take the initiative to destroy the Uchiha, it will have to be around early morning at night. At that time, all the Uchiha in the village will be at home, and those in the garrison will be in the garrison (there will be patrolmen during the day). Secondly, the rules set by the first generation were to handle the internal affairs of the Ninja clan themselves, but you took action directly here? The original third generation was hesitant. In addition to this, there was also the loss of manpower, that is, civil strife would cause the various ninja clans in Konoha to be further divided. Secondly, the Third Generation mobilized so many troops to do this. Not to mention the ninja clan, ordinary jounin have long stopped supporting him. He would have gone to Nara, the Jonin squad leader, to convince the third generation. The entire Konoha looked like the third generation was playing a game. Except for the top jounin and possible third generation private soldiers, no one else could move. He simply declined by saying that he would not interfere in the internal affairs of the ninja clan. The same is true for military strength. Why should the Ninja clan kill people openly and openly in Konoha just because of your words? .

As mentioned in the post downstairs, the author hit a hammer and then a hammer. If the author starts to write about development in Konoha, as a newly settled ninja clan leader, he will visit each ninja clan leader to make an impression. In the process, he can interact with the main characters to create a sense of excitement. This part can be written in detail when the protagonist becomes a ninja. Establishing a sect and developing power are the same. You can accept disciples in Konoha, accept disciples in Takigakure Village, etc. If it involves reforming the ninja world, you can use a clone to expand on helping the reform of Takigakure Village. The writing is too weird now. Wouldn't the whole plot of Konoha be just a section of forbidden arts and the remaining Uchiha people, right?

The Nine Tails in Novice Village can scare away the protagonist. Is this the case in Invincible novels?

There is only a little novelty The protagonist gets married and has children. Others are pretty much the same as the original. I read the fanfic because I wanted to see a different two-dimensional version. Rather than make up for it, protect the protagonists in various original works.

If you can accept Chapter 7 that Hinata can be bullied again after being rescued by Naruto once and the Hinata family already knows that she has been bullied by a bunch of little kids, then that's fine

Your language is too watery, pure and simple, and the plot is too confusing. It's not fun and frustrating 😵

It's boring to watch Mei Terumi's death

It's outrageous that the settings are not even checked. It's outrageous enough that Xiao Li's parents died in the Nine-Tails Rebellion. Later, they said that they would just open the eighth door.

Relying on the defense, I can't watch it without thinking. It's disgusting.

First of all, the writing in the first 20 chapters is okay and not toxic, but from the description of Naruto, several people being trapped and besieged, and Kakashi. Also, what the protagonist did was too toxic. It was said earlier that the key to cultivating immortality is to have clear mind. This is the result. If not, you should at least repay kindness like the Heavenly Master. If you have hatred, you should seek revenge to the maximum extent. If you haven't finished repaying, you should wait until you grow up to take revenge. Kill some passers-by and injure a few of Sandai and others. Naruto can't take them away, but Xiao Li, Qing, his two sons and his wife should be able to take them away, otherwise the decades of cultivation will not be in vain. I think the important point is that the world of Naruto is a Japanese worldview that is different from the Chinese worldview. Moreover, the hedging of arbitrary cultivation of immortality will be very strong. But this is written in a mediocre way

The reason is that a child from the ninja school came to the door and was beaten by the protagonist's son. He came to make trouble and gave money back. It's really awesome. I said before that the Taoist would do whatever he wanted, but now he is poisoning.

Not to mention how good the writing is, there are so many typos. I came here to read for fun, not to guess the song title. No matter how good your grades are, you should be serious.

When watching Naruto fan fiction, I immediately felt bored when I saw Mouth Release.

There are very few Naruto novels where children and wives are all in one step.

It feels YY and unrealistic. If nothing else, Danzo immediately came up to trouble the protagonist when the protagonist did this.

Recommend a novel - Peerless Tang Sect: My Dragon King Simulator (formerly known as Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King Legend)

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

Ah, invincible flow is written like this (๑˙ー˙๑)

If you don't understand and pretend to understand, you are really just a Naruto Cloud reader. Look at what you wrote, it's a sheep's head and a dog's flesh. You're just using a character's name! I won't talk about other settings of the original work, but the protagonist's personality has changed directly. What is written? A mess?

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