Game of Thrones: the Horse King's Struggle

Personal opinion: My opinion is that the protagonist is completely an indigenous horse king who has read the script and reopened it, rather than a person who traveled through time and became a horse king. Therefore, there is no pleasure of operating through technology, tactics or institutional advantages like time-traveling fan fiction.

There are too many things that we take for granted, and the protagonist is helpless. Some of the key reasons are very funny. He is unwilling to kill Long Ma and her brother because he is worried about being stigmatized as a regicide and hindering his rule? Brother, the protagonist is a nomad. What is the difference between him and the savages in the eyes of the Seven Kingdoms? Don't others object to him if he doesn't have this name? This thing has no effect on the protagonist, and you, a barbarian, take over the world without using force and play political games with those nobles. Can you ever play them?

The entry point is good, but the introduction is not good. The horse king does not need to be the king of Westeros, he only needs to be the man of the (dragon mother) king!

After reading more than ten chapters, the male protagonist is brave, but his IQ is worrying. He still thinks about riding across the Seven Kingdoms to defeat the Night King every day. The male protagonist's ability and ambition are not very consistent.

The King of Horses is suitable for conquering by force, not for conspiracy, just like playing games. Since you have chosen a barbarian, don't play conspiracy like the Seven Kingdoms.

It's easy to die without special abilities

Very well written! There is no golden finger, and the time traveler does not have world-shattering wisdom, nor does it come with rockets or all kinds of messy words for traveling through other worlds. All behaviors are consistent with an ordinary time traveler and also consistent with a nomad king! Slow-heating type, not suitable for brainless reading😜😜

You can't sit on the Iron Throne without magic in Game of Thrones. How can you stop someone from shadow assassinating him?

To be honest, it's a bit disgusting. The first few chapters are barely readable, but after chapters 1 to 17, it becomes a bit disgusting. He was obviously a time traveler, but he had no knowledge at all, and he saw Long Ma being stabbed. He went to charge again, causing heavy losses to his men. I can't stand this anymore, it's disgusting.

The protagonist knows the plot and doesn't send anyone to protect his wife. He only leaves a double agent for the other party. It's vicious enough.

It's not enjoyable at all, the author is enjoying himself. Expected to be cold

Doesn't King Ma have a ready-made example? Genghis Khan's magical experience, just replaced the golden blood with dragon blood, magical conquest and 🌿!

King Ma is suitable for Genghis Khan style🤭🤭🤭

The protagonist sleeps with his beloved in order to win over his subordinates, and then lets them be together again. You are invincible.

The author must have read the book. Don't you know what the poisonous point is? The most taboo thing is to be plotted by someone. You all know that these two people have found the king, but you can just chase them out so easily? If you write the protagonist, be smarter and lead people to chase him, but slow down and use him as a bait. The team will also mobilize and quickly detour. Go for a side attack. Or provide prompt support.

The Dothraki cavalry doesn't even wear leather armor, so it's hard to imagine what combat effectiveness it has.

For those who are introduced to poison every day, give the author a guide. To be honest, there is a problem with the opening chapter. The main purpose of the first chapter is to confirm the writing style of the entire novel. The author writes about the trial and execution of the Dothraki. This idea is actually very good. It can be compared with the plot of Ned Stark beheading and escaping from the Night's Watch. But author, look at what you have written and the story of Ice and Fire. Article, what are they writing? What are you talking about? You ruined a good idea as soon as you started... My suggestion is to cut it off, don't shudder. If you want to write a Ice and Fire fanfic, I suggest you copy the original novel by hand and then disassemble it sentence by sentence to learn. This kind of hard craft is more useful than reading a hundred novels. Don't waste your time.

Come on! I have long wanted a novel with the main characters of Horse King and Dragon Mother 🤭

The Juggesnai people marched westward, captured the holy city, and carried out massacres. The Dothraki horse king put on armor, defeated the ancient enemies, and avenged the Doshikali. How pleasing to the ear.

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The writing is very vivid, but the excitement is a bit low, and the plot progress is too slow. Of course, it may be because the plot can continue and not break down quickly. In general, the plot and writing are good, suitable for those who like in-depth reading.

Game of Thrones is a typical foreign western fantasy. There may be some NB God of Creation in the background, but the fights between mortals below are always hand-to-hand combat with knives. A world like Game of Thrones is very non-supernatural and close to reality. There is not that big a gap in combat power between people. Sword gods fight without swords. Ordinary people with swords may die. With armor and without armor, there are two different concepts. With the same equipment, if you can win one against one, you are a good player. If you can win one against two, you are a master. If you can win against three, you are a super master. If you can beat four against five, you have to be a monster like Dawn Sword God and Magic Mountain.

Not bad, I hope I can write something more epic later 🙂

It feels so interesting to bring a real dragon. It's the first time I see a real dragon, not a Valyrian dragon. It feels so interesting. If you like it, help push it down. Don't cut it. I want to see how round the back is 😁

Found a cheating book, Black Blood and Kingship, not bad🤫