The Path to Enlightenment Begins with Immortality

The writing is good, but you are a new author, so there is a big problem. The level of improvement is too slow. This is not enough fun, and it will be difficult to retain people in the first dozens of chapters. Master, old authors can do this because they have fixed fans who can survive the early stage, but you don't. Moreover, your updates are not very fast, so you have to delete some unnecessary things and speed up your cultivation level. If you conflict with anyone, readers will want to see them slap you in the face.

There are a lot of problems, the most important thing is the lack of a sense of narration... The protagonist can understand the history of cultivating immortality by flipping through a book at random. I can only say that it was written too hastily. However, this book also has an advantage. The protagonist is indeed quite stable and does not deliberately cause trouble.

If you want to write about the recovery of spiritual energy, then you should write about fighting for the first step. It's like a mystery drama. Don't you feel super weird?

Please continue to read, readers, your pursuit of reading is the motivation for my writing, thank you (^◡^)✎

Oh, I know why I feel unhappy! The protagonist lacks desire and a strong desire to show what he wants. This is not written. Because of his longevity, he can take his time in everything, so his personality is introverted. His introverted personality does not have strong pursuits and big excitement from the outside world. Actions will be conservative, and experiences and writing will be bland. But most of the people who read online novels nowadays pursue something that is not ordinary, which means that the original intention of the characters is opposite to the needs of the online novel. So unhappy. In the final analysis, this article lacks youthfulness. There is no expression of unwillingness to live up to the Yellow River There is no goal of moving forward There is no excitement of the weak defeating the strong There is no determination of the young man to change the world So it feels uncomfortable to watch. That is, it does not provide emotional value to readers.

There are still fewer crises and confrontations. The main protagonist has no desire to advance the plot. . There are even fewer chapters. If you can follow three chapters a day, the traffic will be much better

Well written. But I still give you a suggestion. I want to read cool articles!!! I want to feel good!!!

Dear readers, please leave traces of your handsomeness

This is a well-written book, and if you keep writing, you can expect to get a masterpiece. Come on

It's okay, the plot progresses a bit slowly. In the fast food era, it is difficult to attract people 🙂