Unemployed, Then Applied for a Job as a Magical Girl

The opening concept is okay, and the initial world view is also okay. However, the more you write later, the less and less it becomes. The rhythm is confusing, the logic is missing, the purpose is unclear, it is confusing at times, it is forced to sublimate, and the characters are seriously stereotyped and stereotyped. Overall review: inferior.

I couldn't stand it when I saw Chapter 163. Although the word Longzhou District appeared in the front, I felt something was wrong. Sure enough, after the problem of Longzhou District was solved, people from other districts later came to get sick, and the strength of a few random people was far stronger than the total strength of the protagonist group, making the protagonist develop like a clown for so long. Finally, there is something special about all magical girls being written for you as they were born.

Magical girl, dark reality version, but a big purge! Revenge is awesome!

Dumplings, dumplings, dumplings, dumplings, dumplings, in summary, it is better than a brainless white text. For example, the joyful comedy in the early stage conflicts with the dark tone of the story. The length is too short, the plot is too busy, and the story setting is also poor. For example, why does the wizard have this ability, and where does the power come from? All the characters are more facial-shaped, even like clones. In the whole story, there is only one protagonist who is a formulaic villain who kills everyone in the game, and his girlfriend assists. Most of the other servants are defeated at the speed of light, conquered, treated like dogs, returned to their own lives, and then rescued. They are dead-set. I thought that the psychic communication function in the middle was used to perfect the characters, but in the end it just pushed the plot, and it was still a crazy push. In the later stage, the crazy killing and speed-running, the key is not as satisfying as Xiaobai's novel, which gives you a hundred times the reward, and it also loses the most important character creation of the magical girl novel. Many named characters are like disposable cups, thrown away after use, thin and weak. The final comment is that it is just unsatisfactory. Expanding and improving many plots and character descriptions would make the story richer, just like the difference between "my mother took me to the hospital with a fever" and "my mother carried me to the hospital with a fever in the middle of the night in the heavy rain." I hope that the author will not be so anxious to expand the setting in the next book, improve the characters and world view, balance the funny and serious content, and better handle the transition between the two. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion and is for reference only. Finally, I wish the author a happy new year٩(๑^o^๑)۶

Summary: Am I the human form of Nexus? Transformation: I am the Magical Girl Onishi King The high-rise buildings seem a bit too urban For a blue and clean world

Let me go, you created a magical girl universe

"Magical Girls: Avengers": The oppressed magical girls around the world, stand up and unite to purify this world that has become hopelessly corrupt! "Magical Girl: Civil War": This is the first civil war between magical girls in human history. It is a war between the new world magical girls who represent love and justice, and the corrupted magical girls who represent the interests of the old world families. This war will determine the future destiny of mankind. Will it usher in a glorious new era or fall into a hopeless abyss? Let us stay tuned! "Magical Girl: Endgame": The final boss finally appears, and he will reveal the final truth about Disaster and Magical Girl. Will this world end? Or will there be a new life?

In other novels, it is the world that needs to be saved, but in this novel, it is those magical girls who live in numbness, lose their humanity, and become tools. In other novels, "It's not me, it's the world that's wrong" is a second-rate line, but in this world, it's an extremely cruel fact. Come on, Commander Hui Li! Lead all the numb magical girls to stand up, resist this dirty world, and make the world return to the way it once was, full of love and hope! 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

I heard that magical girls over 30 years old have an unending curse, and the author always writes that they don't know where to go 🙂

Hey, I have a plan. Since they say that I have surrendered to the enemy, wouldn't I be sorry for their feelings if I don't surrender? To directly surrender to the enemy secretly, to become one with the disaster, and then find a way to sneak attack the magical girl to extract the token by force or accept her as a dog, and directly behead a human being, don't you want rights? Then just hold on to your rights and drown. If human beings don't have leadership, resistance is a joke. Then restrain ordinary disasters from affecting ordinary people. Who will support you? As for the high-level officials who want to escape? If you directly check the direction of the supplies, I don't believe you don't eat or drink. Even if you are really lying motionless, isn't it the same as sending it? Then there is world domination. Playing with someone else on their territory is the stupidest thing. The most effective thing is to just flip the table and hit him on the head with the chessboard 😏😏😏

We need to find a magic lady to show the rulers here the dangers of the magic world.

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Join the Magical Girl Universe together.

This book is also known as "Black Robe Picket: Magical Girl", "Nexus: The Witch Girl", "Capital's Guide to Industrializing Magical Girls to Make Money"

First it keeps making me sick, and finally it gives me something that is not historical and makes me feel happy. What cyber training?

The quality of these chapters is very high, and they are full of satire. There is nothing that cannot be written about the mental state of a ten-year-old state-owned enterprise 😁😁😁

This magical girl token of yours is really strangling generations to come.

Are there no normal people at the top? 🤔

I came here to take a look at the recommendation of Kanshuyuan. It turned out that only the front was passable, but the back was a battle after a battle. Doesn't the author understand what relaxation means? Are magical girl-themed books mainly about fighting scenes? Then you might as well watch Boruto

Impressions after reading "The Unemployment Demon" After reading the latest chapter, there are some things that I feel uneasy about. I hope the author will bear with me. The first impression this book gives me is that it is a good story, a true story, and a story that I can keep reading. After reading so many magical girl novels, I can see through the plots of these novels at a glance. They are nothing more than the strong person returning to teach the younger generation, and the strong person returning to train the younger generation. Except for the protagonist, all men are evil in nature, while women all have their own difficulties, must be tolerated, and are oppressed. What about "The Unemployment Demon"? It shows the tip of the iceberg of real women without any hesitation, which makes people's eyes bright. But why does it feel like it's about to end? I can summarize it in the following 3 points: (1) Lack of real cool points. In the beginning, the recruitment of women looked down upon others. Here, Luo Li should be the main character, and a slap-in-the-face script like the return of the Dragon King, the evil portrayal of the recruitment of women was not done well. Luo Li gained the power of a magical girl, but could not gain true freedom. To put it bluntly, he was still a dog. Xu Yongyan's death should not have been done by Xu Yongyang, but by Luo Li himself, to give people emotional satisfaction, instead of showing her evil and beautifying it, but it was self-defeating. (2) Lack of mutual bonds. Everything in the world is turbulent, all for the benefit of coming, and all for the benefit of the going. The relationship between the protagonist and others is all based on interests. Although this is more realistic, it lacks emotional value and makes readers impatient to read on. I hope to create a positive image that has a righteous relationship with the protagonist. (3) The misanthropy of men is serious. Yes, you heard it right. It is unbelievable that in "The Unemployed Demon" there are almost no positive men except Luo Li, and almost all men appear in negative roles. There is really no need to make a female character whose father is a gambler, a domestic abuser, a cheater, and a psychopath. There are really too many tastings, can you get some slightly more positive male characters? Generally speaking, wouldn't it be better to create male images like Yao Lao in "Dou Po" and Feng Jiuge in "The Great Love Immortal"? "The Unemployment Demon" is already showing bad signs, and it's not too late to change course now. Since portraying real women is the author's specialty, why not do it one at a time and show their selfishness and arrogance. Draw more positive male images. Keep up the good work

Now the plot has been rushing all the way in the direction of upgrading and changing maps... Magical girls should obviously develop in the direction of twisting and turning... Ex-girlfriend Feng Aotian, the direction of the magical girl gang fight is gone Now there is almost no suspense in the direction of the plot.

Currently, it has the best senses among the magical girl series, come on

The person who started making the figurines has no successors. The mastermind of this matter has been beaten to death by me.

After reading Chapter 157, I can't stand it anymore. To be honest, the best part is the uncharged first part. The corruption of the superiors and the control of magical girls are good contradictions, which is enough to whet the appetite at the beginning. It's just that the solution is a bit too simple and crude, and the complex problems that were originally thought-provoking are directly simplified, and a lot of the fun of reading is lost. The killing was too decisive and even happened one by one in the east and in the west. . Well, it's really not acceptable to adapt to the theme of magical girls. It may be because the enemies are not portrayed enough, which makes people think, hey, there is probably no need to wipe them out so cruelly. Many people are innocent and everyone is just a worker (the most important thing is that the image of a worker is clearly portrayed in the front). The transition to the later stage is to fight monsters and upgrade, but it is a completely straightforward way to fight monsters. There is basically no pressure on the protagonist group, and there is no crisis. You can skip a few chapters without missing any key information. Others write about upgrading and constantly introduce new features, new skills, and improved abilities to deal with stronger enemies. The enemies also have online IQs to find ways to deal with the protagonist group. The combat writing is also very average. If you just look at monster fights and upgrades, there are better choices. I still wrote it too hastily. I was anxious at the beginning and even more anxious after that.

Weirdo: Gua! Emperor! Save my teeth!

It can only be said that it is a rubbish officialdom in the decadent worldview unique to Qidian. It squeezes everyone every day, but the male protagonist just can't destroy them and just plays house every day.

As title

Although it is not very magical girl, but more like an urban cultivator, the writing is still quite readable. This may be the reason why I did not pursue it. I will pick it up next.

The further back, the better it looks! At first I thought it was just an ordinary slow-paced official fighting essay, The rhythm immediately picked up in less than 100,000 words, and I was fully fired up.

Realistic magic, well deserved reward.