As Promised in Mixed Martial Arts, What Happened to the Two-Way Foil Punch?

There is some creativity, but writing skills need to be practiced. After two chapters of the story, the setting instructions started again, which reminded me of the Otaku Demon King. The idea is good, but each chapter's setting description accounts for more than 60%, making it more like a setting collection than a novel.

The ideas are good, but the plot is a bit dry. I would like to give some suggestions. First of all, the author should not write directly about settings. The last few chapters are all about settings. It has to be told by the people inside. For example, when the protagonist teaches Liu Qing the suona version of Tathagata Palm, it is no less than the weapon version. Then Liu Qing asks what the weapon version of Tathagata Palm is, and the protagonist explains it again. This is better. And it is recommended that the martial arts taught should not be the same as those in this world. For example, this world has Tathagata Palm, and the protagonist is given a weapon version. This is more controversial. Don't let the protagonist pass on a weapon version, but the world will have a weapon version. The martial arts passed down in this way are no longer exclusive. In addition, let the protagonist take advantage of the opportunity to apply for a martial arts patch. For example, the martial arts of his sect are not allowed to be used until the descendant has successfully practiced it. He can give it away as long as he has the eye. No apprenticeship required.

When the author only thinks about power, he cannot imagine a martial artist who can create things out of thin air. Wouldn't it be better to send the baby directly to others? Drive agricultural development and social progress. Create institutional creations and completely drive the development of the times

This book is written by Chunchun Studio AI

Lots of typos, characters distorted

I hope that the world view will also expand, or go to the stars, or there will be countless other worlds

In the world of martial arts, internal strength is the first priority, and fists, feet, and weapons all have great power. Now the protagonist is written like a "big muscle tyrant" who only knows how to train, and he can't even have internal strength. The fight with Lehou is also written like a fight between two blind bears. He is a master no matter what, and the fighting scenes are too drawn.

I don't have much knowledge, can anyone list the sources of martial arts in the novel?