What! Is My Town Group Gone?

No wonder it didn't become popular. Someone else came to create a small town and wrote it from four perspectives. The water god is alive. Can you remove the water?

In fact, the creativity is pretty good, and the writing style is also okay. It's a pity that it's cut off like this.

Although I haven't read it, judging from the introduction, the so-called Forbidden Magic Mage doesn't even have skills such as mind control, charm, and hypnosis, so there must be a contract, right? People in this world just gather around this village and sign contracts. I still don't understand the meaning of this kind of novel. If there is a system, just treat me as if I didn't say anything.

I didn't like the part where the orc fucked the aunt. He fucked her and then let the heroine and the sisters go. This is illogical and no matter how you explain it, it's all pale and feeble. There are many plots like this, where the heroine is caught, what happened to the other two, and in the end the hero saves the beauty, and the heroine survives... No matter how powerful the hero is, if he is not strong enough to isolate himself from danger at the beginning, then at best he will just get revenge. Hong Kong movies have done a good job in this regard.

The details of traveling to another world were not handled well. For example, I haven't seen any special plants, so I feel like the writing is pretty good. Is it a different world? But then a crow that the protagonist knows is flying... Well, I agree that there are crows in other worlds. Then the sun rises from the east as usual... I won't say how long a day is on the timeline. Can the work and rest times be the same? Okay, let me explain myself again. This world has the same time as the earth, the same climate, and the sun rises in the east and sets in the west (well, maybe the sun really revolves around the world). But what makes me live in Bengbu is that the language spoken in the other world is actually English... Since you are writing a Western fantasy, it is set in English, right...

To write this, you must first understand the difference between reality and otherworlds. In otherworldly worlds, as long as it is not too outrageous, you can make a balanced transition. The other party does not know what methods you have. A town has been transformed with too many weapons of mass destruction. Cars have been modified with blades. Who can withstand the use of large trucks as heavy cavalry? Drones can be used as real-time monitoring and photography. There are many heads that can be copied in different places according to the needs of the battlefield, or large-scale explosives, and cars can be modified into the kind of equipment that spirals with iron blocks flying around. That kind of merry-go-round has no car and an engine installed on it.

A rare group-traveling novel about another world