
Mystery: Lady Destiny
诡秘:命运女神
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.9M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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401Chapters
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Wait, isn't it about the goddess of destiny? What does this introduction have to do with Fate?
Less physical description
There are too many descriptions of appearance. There are long paragraphs devoted to descriptions of appearance. Every character who appears has a long paragraph of description of appearance. Please be concise. There is no need to describe so much.
It's a bit tight, and the heroine rises a little too fast. Although there are people pushing it, it's understandable. After all, if the heroine is not close, people may want to prevent her from becoming the old one. It's a design, it's funny.
A little suggestion. First of all, it is best to divide the introduction into paragraphs. It is easy for readers to miss the key points if a large paragraph is piled in there. Secondly, it's best to make a cover. If it doesn't work, AI can generate one.