Who Allowed This Disaster Star to Be a Traveler!

It's outrageous. I hadn't signed the contract when I clicked on it. When I read it for 10 minutes and was ready to invest, I actually signed the contract.

The setting is pretty good but a bit messy, especially at the beginning. The first one should be called Dungeon World? Until the leader is fine, then the plot becomes chaotic. A substitute line is introduced, and then the substitute talks about the extraordinaryness of the protagonist, and then it should dig a few pits in the plot? Feeling? It felt very confusing. When I read Chapter 8, I started jumping to the second world in Chapter 14. But I haven't watched it yet, but I thought that if the second world was as messy as the first world, I would jump to the end of the second world. In this case, I would lose the desire to watch.

I sincerely ask all readers to spend some time every day to read the latest chapters. Every time you read, you will give me more confidence to write. Thank you ^ω^

The author's writing style is okay, but I don't know why it makes my head hurt to read it. I think the protagonist is a, uh, flexible ordinary person? He is just a bit split between soul and body. Physically, he is completely an ordinary person. He runs away immediately when he sees a monster and will feel nauseated and vomited when he sees bloody scenes. But his personality is quite out-of-the-box. He is obviously scared to death but still likes to play and explore. He is so vomiting after being greatly stimulated, but then he makes some small talk like a normal person. He has strong adaptability. The problem is that his mood is not stable and he is always surprised. Then the inspiration is relatively high, and I often see pictures of the future or other things. In conclusion, the waste body weighed him down! Comments, food and grass!

My head hurt after watching it. The themes and settings are quite good, but the narrative is too confusing. The novice dungeon settings are not fully introduced. Suddenly the guide is not brought in properly, and the guide is changed midway into the fantasy world. Suddenly there is a person with the same essence, a big conspiracy, and the boss battle dungeon suddenly collapses. This is my first dungeon. I haven't introduced all the basic settings and I can't understand the plot at all.

That is, if there is any problem or something is not well written, please comment. When I saw it, I went to revise the article. I was scared to stand alone.

The author's writing is very good, and it is definitely worth reading and subscribing. Recommend a book to kill decisively, sharply and happily, "Old man picks up rags in time and lives by making bad movies"

Chaos. Unclear expression, confusing perspective and worldview

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

The road is long and long, I will search up and down, and encourage each other😁

Many of the people I invested in have died.

The author's friend here is in Hainan. He has been out of contact for several days due to the typhoon. He just got in touch today and cannot contact him for the time being. Please wait for a few days 😢