Douluo: the Beginning Gives Tang San and Huo Yuhao a Life Template

Have you seen the latest Douji anime? I found it with my quick swipe, Tang San said he was looking for the soul of Electrolux in all the worlds. ? ? ? It really makes me laugh to death. He is worthy of it. Now he dares to talk about anything in the world.

Whenever I thought Douluo was dead, you could always give me a new life.

In Huo Yuhao's words, Tang San's orphan started and was adopted by Old Jack at the beginning. Then Jack awakened his martial spirit and was silenced by Haotian. He took revenge.

Hurry up, hurry up, I can't wait to see Poseidon deal with Tang San in the Valley of Questioning. This fanfic is the best I've read recently 😍😍 Look at my three unique skills of Tang Wu Thinking about dancing fists, my thoughts are like a fountain! Never forget the dancing hammer! ! Three dancing palms, life after life! ! Wu'er, Wu'er, Wu'er! Withering in the brilliance, the golden road! The blazing fire in the extreme cold, the hammer of the Emperor of Heaven! The mantra in nothingness, the storm of the soul! Dancing alone in the frost, the colorful dress of light!

Selling dog meat over sheep's heads is not abusing the Communist Party at all, it is still following the Communist Party. The protagonist is not a dog, but she is almost like a nanny.

Everyone is cheating. Tang San is already level 30 when he is only ten years old. You are such a big cheat as the protagonist. Your soul ring life span is much longer than that of a normal person. Your first soul ring is Five Thousand Years Qingluan, and you have thousands of shadow clones to create multiple clones to train non-stop. Tang San is even afraid of the intensity of training. When you look at the level of ten and thirty, good guy, your level is bound to Tang San, right?

I have just read a few chapters, and I personally think that the biggest flaw of this book is that the protagonist has too much presence, which makes the book feel like selling someone else's meat.

Let Tang San experience Huo Yuhao's pain, Huo Yuhao's suffering, it's so interesting, author, please write better, don't be fooled

The female protagonist gets all the benefits, but Tang San accepts all the suffering. It's really a double standard.

Tang San's suffering should be given to the protagonist as much as possible. I haven't seen Dou Er, but Huo Yuhao's nickname is Huo Gua. There must be a lot of benefits. Don't take advantage of him.

The plots are a bit different. Huo Yuhao suffered from being tortured by his stepmother, almost beaten to death by his senior sister, absorbing the second martial spirit gout, being cheated by Xuanzi, being reduced by Orange, being beaten to death by his father-in-law, etc. The plot of your suffering is a bit sparse.

The pressure levels are too harsh

Let a third person come up with a plot to solve the evil fire

It's ugly, the protagonist is Tang San's🐶

6. When I saw the new pattern, my eyes darkened.

The biggest flaw of this book is that the protagonist's presence is too high, and he is also related to Xiao Wu, which is seriously inconsistent with the title. I really don't see anything like Huo Yuhao. Putting aside his own benefits, he has found a lot of trouble for himself. The situation is so chaotic now. The advantage of the time traveler is the plot. Now the plot has completely changed. You are also in contact with Xiao Wu. You are afraid that the sea god will not notice you. Why don't you wait until you are invincible at the age of 17? If there is no plot, then don't write about the protagonist. Can't you just watch from behind? If you write like this again, I'm always wondering whether Qiankun Wenqinggu is persecuting Tang San or the protagonist?

To be honest, it's quite a level-up. I got my first soul ring at the age of 6, absorbed the soul bone and practiced for two months to reach level 23, which is level 23 at 6 and a half years old. As a result, I reached level 29 at the age of 12, one level a year, 6

The combination of Naruto and Douluo elements is too poor. Chakra and soul power are forcibly separated. If you don't have a soul ring, you can use various ninjutsu. To upgrade, you have to get a soul ring. Various settings are both necessary and necessary. Pure stitching monster

Why doesn't the protagonist have the template of "Su Ming"? Seeking magic

It's so poisonous. He has a Titled Douluo at the beginning and his combat power is deflated. He still has to sew chakra and soul power to become a suture monster. The nine-tailed chakra has already reached the Titled Douluo level and his soul power has to absorb the soul ring to break through. He gave the Huo Gua template to Tang San, but Tang Sanguang got it. The good thing is that I haven't seen any suffering. You are so lonely as a template. You have been working as a nanny next to Tang San Xiaowu and even the progress of your cultivation is the same. You sucked the five-thousand-year Green Luan soul ring and the second ring of the ten-thousand-year thunder beast into a dog, right? What you write is as disgusting as shit🤢

My writing skills are so poor that I forget the previous part after writing, and the plot is off topic.

It's not fun to be a nanny if you have a lower level. You will kill this book by yourself.

It feels like there is no one left. If you want to write about the protagonist being awesome, just write about the protagonist's good points, or you can also write about Tang San's Passion. What you write is about Tang San's benefits, and the protagonist is aggrieved. Is your Huo Yuhao template funny? Huo Yuhao's suffering is not given to Tang San at all. The plot has been very dull recently. I have no desire to watch it anymore. You should make some plot about Tang San being toyed with. I feel like it has ruined such a good idea.

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