I Just Want to Be a Detective, You Want Me to Be a Rebel

I don't understand what you wrote. Ninth level, small success with the pig-killing knife, great success in the Vajra body protection technique is still the ninth level. . . It's understandable that the sword skills can only improve the combat power but not the realm, but the body protection skills don't improve the realm? ? Are you just joking around? ? Or does it mean that one needs mental skills to improve one's realm? It feels like you haven't learned anything when you write. .

I can't figure out what benefit does it do to you, the author, to press the protagonist so hard?

The Blood Drinking Knife is a sword, not a sword technique. The sword technique is the Six Art of Aohan.

The story is novel and different. Good luck to the author! 🌹🌹🌹

This writing style and conception are unrealistic.

While opening cheats for the protagonist, in order to suppress the protagonist's development, he even gave up Luo Ji.

Good guy, you can't write without the Vajra Kung Fu, right? Many books have this technique.

It feels like Pigfoot is a very loyal licking dog! All kinds of self-impressions! If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't do it. The so-called emotions that are disgusting and floating feel disgusting and funny at the same time!

Haha Introduction to the second grade

I have a rough feeling about time travel. When I first started practicing martial arts, I openly offended a huge monster for the sake of unrelated people. Modern society cannibalizes people, not to mention the martial arts society. It makes me feel sick to see this kind of thing.