Magical Girls Can't Be Arrested

Don't think of the magical girl as a setting. Her duty is to protect others, but she ends up treating people like Zhang Xianzhong every day. No matter how violent Xian Xinshi is, his transformation in front of the mall is to save the children. The dilemma and struggle caused by the contrast between being a hero who once saved the world and his current identity is the flavor of this article And I don't know when the monster's strength will increase. A few more monsters that can't be dealt with will ensure that the Magic Bureau will seek help from magical girls as soon as possible. Or become a unique, relevant third party in the story or something like that

Can you keep writing? If there is no magical girl, Wadaxi 😭

This author is the best at writing books among cosplayers, and the best at cosplay among writers. Personally, I feel that the work is no worse than Off-duty Demon, and the author is more fragrant and softer than Witch Punk. Update soon, I wish you a good signing and a great success.

Of course it's in magical girl form

The overall quality is excellent, the writing is concise and the story line is clear. First of all, this book depicts mid-life crisis and family relationships very delicately. It is one of the few books that describes the interaction between husband and wife and father and son without awkwardness. I am really curious about whether the protagonist will get divorced and how he will deal with family relationships. In addition, the world view is also very interesting. The common setting of magical girls is very interesting when placed in the adult world view. However, the opening was really depressing, and the three consecutive chapters of tragic reality were too suffocating. I felt that the content of the magical girl could be started with a flashback.

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I don't know if the author is a real eunuch or a fake eunuch, but it's been almost a month, so let's just assume it's a eunuch. In fact, by the end of the first volume, the entire general world view has been set. It is a world of magical girl vigilantes. It can even be said that the career of magical girls has come to an end. A post-demon world This world no longer needs magical girls. Magical girls have even turned around and become the source of harming world peace. This is the undertone of this unique world. The author writes very well, and gives a reasonable enough explanation for the strength and motivation of the Magic Bureau, and why the magical girl is wanted. In the entire first volume, no one is wrong. Whether it is the Demon Bureau working hard for peace in the post-demon world, or the magical girl who is trying to fight monsters and save citizens while being wanted, their backgrounds are not clearly black and white, but a passive confrontation between the two sides. The concept of the whole work is very good. It breaks away from the cute world view of a certain salt. It can be seen that the author wants to create a new style of magical girl literature, which is sharper and heavier The protagonist has no magic kingdom and familiars, and is still facing the risk of losing control. He is also responsible for the education of his children, the entanglement with his ex-wife, and is a frustrated middle-aged man. Unlike other magical uncle stories that have been reduced to background settings, the author did not put great effort into describing the fantasy magical girl chapter. Instead, he devoted his writing to the heavy middle-aged people, and a unique, gray magical world unfolded. This is also what attracts me the most. The first volume of this book writes about this gray world very well. As the author said in his acceptance speech, "I wanted to describe a world where magical girls are no longer needed." He did it. But in the second volume, for some reason, the author had some problems with the world he wrote about. That is, the Magic Bureau became clowning and stigmatized. This is reflected in the sharp increase in the sugar level of the character of Captain Dragon. At the same time, many new settings were added, and the importance of magical girls in the worldview began to be elevated. This was contrary to the world he envisioned in which magical girls were not needed. So a conflict arises. Since both the Magic Bureau and the Magical Girl are forced to do so, how can they resolve their feud? The answer is to solve the risk factor of losing control. It cannot be said that there is no promotion in the second volume, it can only be said that the promotion is limited, but the entire position of the Magic Bureau has completely collapsed. The Magic Bureau can do almost nothing, but it is the biggest source of danger for the protagonist in the first volume. As many people said, if the protagonist explodes the sky star, the entire Magic Bureau can only wait to die... It's full of contradictions, just as abstract as if you were fully prepared to hunt tigers in the primeval forest, but when you go out, you realize that the tiger you want to hunt is just a big orange from your neighbor's house. Perhaps too many readers complained that magical girls were too frustrating, which inevitably affected the author's creation, so the author began to enhance the sense of pleasure, but he used too much force. The war between gangs, the poor response of the Magic Bureau during the jellyfish crisis, and the rigid system are all in sharp contrast with the strong government shown in the first volume. The setting is that the master is in charge of supernatural powers across the country, but it is shown that he cannot even catch ordinary magicians and killers, and he cannot investigate whether there are people raising monsters in his own jurisdiction. The reader feels that it is really good to leave the world to the Magic Bureau? At the same time, it is also far from the world imagined by the author. From here, it has already deviated from the author's imagination. The author realized the problem, began to advance the plot, changed his thinking, began to reduce the appearance of the Magic Bureau, and began to describe Lao Fu's family life. However, at this point in time, the author's real family had trouble, so the story was full of the flavor of a plot runaway, and in the end they affected each other, and naturally the book could not be written Of course, we are not the author's family. Maybe there is something wrong. Maybe the author realizes that the story he wrote has deviated too far and is hopeless. It is possible to choose to find reasons for the eunuch, but this does not hinder the excellence of the story in the first volume. I also hope that the author can ignore the outside world. Interference, I know what kind of story I want to create. After all, I am the first reader of my own work. Readers of Qidian are actually very tolerant. How can I be forgiven by so many readers after I have been off work for a year? I hope the author can pick it up again and finish writing this story after finishing the chores.

The task force that investigated the String Heart Stone was too casual. Perhaps the author wanted to express that magical girls are soft and waxy, but in fact, what readers saw was that all the stranded people were nuclear bomb-level monsters. String Heart Stone was said by other magical girls in unison. An extremely powerful existence is even a super nuclear bomb with a yield exceeding the standard, but Cui Jiaming's investigation of the case was too casual and easy. He just relied on the kindness and softness of the magical girl to find someone who would have immeasurable consequences if he exploded. It is possible that the relevant personnel exert pressure at will, which is not in line with the style of the agency system. Even if such a monster is investigated, he must do it secretly and try not to do anything exciting. To give a simple example, she is like a patrol inspector. The personnel went to the nuclear bomb base to inspect the nuclear bomb, and then hit the nuclear bomb with a hammer. Even though everyone knew that it was almost impossible for the nuclear bomb to be detonated in this way, but this behavior was reported, she should not be able to work as a nuclear bomb inspector in her life.

Link who chose the appearance of Zhang Grodd should be quite receptive...

I understand clearly that playing in the resurrection match is a must-have for starting magical girls. 🙂