Xiuxian: I Have a Portable Immortal Mansion!

In fact, the portable space is very difficult to write. This problem is too big. If there are too many frivolous operations, the system will collapse. Step-by-step development will be like a running account. It obviously puts pressure on the protagonist's development. Zuihu wrote the Black Iron Castle in the portable space. It took three attempts to refresh the talent, and then the three transformations of the protagonist were basically and smoothly completed. At the same time, Zuihu also wrote down the routine of cleaning up points and suppressing development. Later authors cannot continue to imitate this routine.

There are many people writing about Immortal Mansion, but very few can finish it.

Is it possible to stop writing about the protagonist being dragged into the golden elixir stage game while he was practicing his qi? This seems very unpleasant, just like a young employee who has just joined the company is dragged into the competition for the chairman by shareholders It is better for you to write about some open and secret struggles between young employees who have just joined the company than to write about such a big event.

Yueli

What number do you support?

Nowadays, if you don't write about the waste stream, you won't be able to write novels about cultivating immortals, right? Mortals have never seen Tianlinggen, either four or five.

17-Year-old Xu Changqing wearing the clothes of an outer disciple.

Lin Tianhe

This book feels like it has no special features at all, and the plot connection is too hard and boring! Buying alchemy furnaces and selling elixirs is too urgent, which is inexplicable. My own strength is not enough, and I always suddenly become enemies with others. I don't know what I want to do! Apart from formulaic fantasy routines, is there nothing else to write about? I wrote it well before, but somehow I became a swordsman again? Nine of the ten books on cultivating immortality are about using swords. Even some of the moves or the explanations of kendo thinking are similar and have nothing new. Moreover, it is an Xianfu novel that is easy for thieves to eunuch. Xianfu novels are originally very homogeneous. Not only does this article not have any new ideas, it is also messy. I don't even know what to see! The author feels that you should read a few more books before writing. It is awkward and clumsy, and there are still no highlights.

Those who make alchemy and those like Ling Zhifu must also be proficient in these two professions, which complement each other, not to mention the Immortal Mansion, so as not to be controlled by others in the future.

What do you think about accepting someone else's alchemy furnace when they first meet? For example, if you have a fairy house, you can grow elixirs and slowly sell them. If you are more prudent, how can you make a profit by slowly selling hundreds of spiritual stones in a few markets? Why do you want to impose such an inexplicable plot on the protagonist?

What is this guy writing? Did you see part of it and then disappear? What's next? To tease people?

What does this mean? Old break? ! Are you lazy?

Your grandma's! Why haven't you updated it yet? ?

Oh, it's resurrected. Then I'll pull it out from the partition where I sent it.

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