Immortal Mansion, Divine Treasures

Chapter 12 does not change and directly persuades him to quit and force the aura of the protagonist, right? The protagonist is a baby and has not even reached the first level. Even if someone uses a hand to block his injuries, a full blow from the second level cannot kill the protagonist?

In fact, many of the contents in this book have been practiced and experimented by the author himself (referring to Xing Gong, not Qigong and Ming Gong). Many of the contents mentioned in the article are actually the author's life experience and truly useful things. The author has gone through ups and downs in his life, with peaks and troughs. Having experienced this kind of thing a lot, he wants to learn various Xing Gong practices to protect himself, improve his character, and increase his energy. The author often laments that if he could have met some famous teachers and experts earlier, he might have been able to find out earlier how to live and what to do in the future. The author also discovered that in fact, many times in our lives, when we encounter many hardships, we just tell others about it, and others will not care. So the author wrote this book. One is to give people who are confused in life, hoping to inspire others. The other is to write some magical and interesting stories to serve as a small rest stop for everyone. The other is that the author has been treated well by society, so he also hopes that everyone will be treated well by society, so he wrote this book. He only hopes that the broad and positive meaning in it can bring some clarity to those in need. This book also contains many preliminary methods of life skills, as well as many mysteries of folk martial arts, Taoism and Buddhism. Some of them are indeed such things in reality, while others are the overly magical words of novelists. I just hope that everyone who is tired in life can take a break in this book, so this book tries to write as much violence as possible.

This book is quite good, and it can be regarded as a fairy tale. After all, the author really wants to write about spiritual practice, not about fighting monsters and upgrading in the game world. Alas, but the author inserted another system, which made me feel so frustrated, just like a pot of good soup with a grain of something. But I also understand that if you don't write like this, there will be no market, and you may not be able to write a few chapters before censoring it. This is due to the naive and exaggerated background of the Internet literary world, and it is not the fault of the author alone. Alas, it is difficult for me to see the dreamlike, romantic, brilliant, boundless and mysterious oriental classical fairy charm.

After writing dozens of chapters, the protagonist is not yet three years old. Although there are no big poisonous points in what you wrote, it has become a poisonous point because the writing is too slow and has too much plot.

I can't understand it. The author's description of the protagonist's master seems to be of a high level, but the protagonist is only 1 year old, or more than 1 year old. Wandering around? ? ? Are you still asking if you want to go see it? ? Have you forgotten your age? ? What can this do? ! If you have that time, go for a walk and wander around. It's better to spend a few years stably and practice hard, but the author writes a lot of nonsense and has a lot of psychological activities, making it the same as being the protagonist for 10 years. Also, don't always say "I want to be a real dragon in the world. How old are you?" ? ? You are only 1 year old, okay? Live the present moment well and try to lay the foundation. Anyway, I found it a bit disgusting. Regardless of the other world, the world of immortality, the fantasy world, if the meridians are still growing at any age, you can only use energy, spiritual energy, or medicine to improve the meridians, just like the author wrote that the protagonist is 10 years old. . .

Lightning protection, the old Taoist was tricked to death by a branch of the family, and countless people were killed and injured as a result, and then the master, the protagonist of the old Taoist friend, actually accepted the murderer as his apprentice? What? ? ?

You suppressed the protagonist in the first picture, which made me feel uncomfortable. Whoever is a good person writes like this now, he still has time to wait for hundreds of chapters before slapping you in the face. Nowadays, the society is so violent. If you have a grudge, you will definitely want to avenge it on the spot, let alone reading a novel.

But I feel like I haven't grasped the main line. I want to watch a simulation. You keep talking about the situation around you. The protagonist has made little progress. I don't know how strong the skills are. I only know how many monsters are used. But after reading 30 chapters, I don't know whether he is powerful or not. How does he compare with other people? It's too bland and a bit useless.

I can't stand the first chapter at the beginning. I know it is suppressed first and then promoted, but this kind of thing is really uncomfortable to read. It only discourages you from persisting.

The writing is too slow. Many plots can be compressed or even deleted. For example, there is no need to write about how to pass the test and the court policy when watching the martial arts. The protagonist is only one year old and has not even stepped into the big battle. Starting it so early will only make people feel that the author is in trouble. The setting and plot are very interesting, but it is really a pity that the rhythm is slow. I hope the author will think carefully about how to write it later. This is really important. To be honest, even if I want to continue reading, I can't stand this writing method. Don't say that the later part will be more exciting. In the current situation, it is not certain whether I can write it to the later part.