Immortality: Starting from Chaoshai Loose Cultivation

The author's Chinese language is not very good, identification completed

In the assessment of technicians in the country, they are generally entry, proficiency, proficiency, small success, great success, and finally perfection, and the realm will be confused. I am also convinced by this author. Generally, it is you who are proficient in this industry or skill, and you will achieve success. Why is it that when you get to the author, you have achieved small success, and then you are proficient. Isn't this a step backward? I can only run away without looking at it.

Everyone knows how to seduce beans in the mortal world, so there is no need to write about it again (the main thing is not very)

I hate the system the most, the panels and other fairy tales.

After ten golden chapters, it's like being poisoned. There's so much nonsense.

So is it to awaken to Suhui or to seize the body?

There is no need to separate the writing too much. The original text seems a bit stuck. It would be better if it is smoother and smoother.

I don't read any comments that don't exceed 80%.

Is it dangerous to go out after 5 levels of Qi training? I really don't know what you mean? Character creation with a cold face

Is the author suitable for writing martial arts, historical novels, or immortality novels?