Sir, Please Open Your Eyes

The author's setting of suspense in the plot between Song and Xiaoyu is too stiff and makes people uncomfortable to watch. Song's manipulation of Xiaoyu is written directly, and it is not solved quickly, but is no longer mentioned. Coupled with the touching update speed, the biggest problem is that the protagonist pays no attention to Xiaoyu's movements in Chang'an, even when the school banquet begins. There is no concern expressed at all, and a lot of attention is paid to Gu, giving people a feeling of liking the new and hating the old, which is seriously inconsistent with the close relationship between the protagonist and Xiaoyu mentioned above. It is simply a forced intelligence reduction for the sake of the plot. In the process, Song's inner activities are constantly described. Maybe the author is showing Song's hypocrisy, but it seems to be whitewashing. Moreover, there is no intersection between the two in the narrative process of Song and Su's double search, which consumes the reader's patience too much. Moreover, the intensity of the conflict in Song's line must be overshadowed by the so-called study banquet. First, the study banquet has too much foreshadowing, but the intensity is not high. Second, the foreshadowing of the plot of the senior brother is not as clear and intense as Xiaoyu's.

It has a bit of a literary flavor, the previous conflict is a bit too obvious, and the male and female protagonists also develop a bit too fast. In summary, this is definitely not a new author, because the opening routine is a bit old, but overall, there is still a certain level of writing, so which father-in-law went out to buy it?

I started reading novels in the third grade of elementary school, and I have been reading them for almost 30 years now. I feel like I can write pretty well. Why are most of the comments section criticizing? Big cheers for the author.

Gu Yi

The author is truly platinum-worthy, keep up the good work!

Good writing, but it's a pity that you have to use your brain to read it, alas

Come on, I like the author's writing style and narrative rhythm, and wish you better things!

At this point, it's time to start the daily guide?

The style is very good, the writing style does not make people feel impetuous, it is beautiful and I love to read it. Please do your best, author 😡

Extraterrestrial demon? Or reincarnate and rebuild 😰

Has this book been discontinued?

I came across this book by accident. Although the plot and setting are a bit cliche, the writing is really good, which shows that the author is quite attentive. It is not easy to create a hit online article. It requires both strength and good luck. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Many heroines abandon