My Father Hongwu, My Father Is so Kind

It's well written and inspiring. A small suggestion, although the author explains that the protagonist has become like a child due to physical effects, and the protagonist does have a humorous and amusing effect in many cases, but there are a few places where it is too brash and too casual, making it seem a bit noisy. Especially the part about going to Li Xiyan's house. Considering the early plot and the character of the protagonist, I had a feeling that the protagonist would not write about the point of view in the palace this time, and the discussion with Li about possible ideas that might change people's thoughts. But the protagonist walked away as if he was trying to avoid it. Then I really couldn't stand Li Xiyan's idea, and it was even more difficult for me to hold back that his idea was correct in some aspects. As for the part about beating up Daoyan, I thought the protagonist would pretend to be sophisticated and say something about the little monk who has greater achievements than the change of dynasty. If we want to do it, we can just do this. It would be okay to just beat Daoyan... At least it has something new. Who you are, what you want to be, what you want to do. We don't understand it clearly when we are young and even when we are old. The biggest advantage of being a time traveler is that you have a goal from the beginning, at least a big stage goal, and you have to take action around this goal. Maybe because the number of words is still small, the plot has not been developed. The book is very good and very spiritual. Apart from the books I have read recently, this book is the most spiritual. I hope the author can find the right balance between humorous writing and innovative plot. Best wishes.

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Readers, please stop collecting and reading in my face. If you have any opinions, feel free to mention them. I won't necessarily change them anyway🫡🫡🫡🫡

I've read the latest chapter, it's good, let's see how to get out of trouble

The title of this book is good, and it contrasts greatly with our understanding.

Ready to carry on the legacy of steel?

I just started reading it, it's interesting, but the punctuation errors made me suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder. Author, there is no need for an extra comma after the double quotation mark after finishing the sentence 🤭

Due to the funny nature of the protagonist, the more I watch it, the less I want to watch it.

"Even if the supply is insufficient, or there is a rainy season, insects and locusts attack together, there is no harvest due to heavy rain, and there is constant famine, and sometimes people die from lack of food, it is not death by weapons. Suppose an envoy is forced by the army and throws himself over a cliff into the fire to die in the abyss. If you watch him die in embarrassment of food and clothing, wouldn't it be better to kill himself by swimming!" ——Zhu Yuanzhang's "Third Edition of Da Gao·The Twelfth of Making Words in a Chaos"

It's not smooth to watch. To put it simply, the current content is OK, but the text is not. If the language, etc. Is not written well, it will limit the performance.

Children of the Chinese nation can also learn abcd. With the popularization of pinyin writing 😜😜😜

The main character in the small package is just not good-looking and stupid.

Lao Zhu is really too busy. He has thousands of sons and grandsons of time travellers. He is so busy every day that he collapses

What should I say? I want to keep reading, but I don't like the protagonist's funny character. It's tasteless.