The Unrivaled Tang Sect: I'm a Village Chief in Douluo

You are writing a flow of summoning players, so the focus is on the players, and the players' laughter is the main point. However, there is basically no interaction in the following chapters, and even the figures are missing. There are only 5 players at the beginning, so it seems that there is no problem whether there are players or not.

I think it's better to hide behind the scenes. You seem a bit too arrogant.

Many authors today do not have character descriptions, environment descriptions, and psychological descriptions. How do they do this? It makes me so uncomfortable!

The book reviews said that the players of this book are in the order-good camp. However, in reality, the player camp is generally chaos-evil. Because it is a game, the players have no sense of morality at all. This is just like the classic Japanese RPG game. Entering a villager's house is like rummaging through boxes and cabinets. , If you want to write well and have a lot of work to do, most players do all kinds of tricks, such as speed pass bugs, teasing NPCs, and doing the opposite if the NPC says it. The most typical ones are Stanley's Prophecy from abroad, and Ashe from China.

The essence of Jiang Nannan's character lies in the back door. Jiang Nannan who has not been breasted by Xu Sanshi is incomplete, just like Bibi Dong who has not been in the secret room.

I think it would be better if you just delete the players directly. Player streams basically don't discuss reality, especially when you have an official version. Your novel has strayed from the theme. Player streams focus on the cooperation between players, trap stream, summon stream, Gou Dao stream. Various ideas are endless. Now it has 160,000 people and the plot is nearly half, but it is basically the protagonist plus the original character. As for the players, they are like NPCs and have no sense of existence compared to the protagonist group.

It is better to write about Zhang Lexuan, Meng Hongchen and Xiaoxiao than to write about Jiang Nannan. When writing about Xiaoxiao, the one with more imagination is the Human Emperor.

I feel that the players you wrote have too much sense of order and lack some chaos. It would be interesting if you added some elements of sitting and forgetting

The Xuantian Treasure Records in your auction are all incomplete. How can I say they are original? Some of the original things are in the eyes of Binghuo Liangyi, and the Tanghulu will not leave the original ones.

Really, ex as always, Snake is worthy of being a shit Nike