Who Asked Him to Make Elixirs Like This!

It's all about refining alchemy anyway, so turn the lid over.

Why not try throwing kung fu into the mix? Kung Fu Pill? Wouldn't that be enough?

To be honest, all the writing so far has been about the protagonist being tortured, and not about alchemy at all.

Liangcao has the talent of a great master, but it is impetuous. It looks very floating and lacks details. It would be nice to polish it carefully.

That quotation feels a bit abstract. I didn't even write it in the early stages and just said that the future must be something like that. It's a diary quotation that's funny but not ridiculous.

Isn't that a bit much? What kind of quotation... This feeling is not necessary, right?

This writing style is hard to describe in one sentence. It's a very good subject matter. It's like a running account and it's all narration. Come on, practice it again🤔

Originally the writing was mediocre, but in the end I had to make that bullshit Immortal Lord's Diary. One page would only appear once, and one page would sometimes appear two or three times. You do this kind of fancy stuff when the plot is dull. It's about driving people away and screening out readers.

Keep it first, then throw the eunuch into the trash 😆

The protagonist was framed from beginning to end, and after a few chapters I didn't want to read any more. The writing is the same as the main article of abuse.

That is to say, five hundred years have passed since King Demon Lord ascended. The entire world of immortal cultivation has undergone sudden changes, various natural disasters have continued, and cultivation resources have become increasingly scarce. You are the hope of the sect. The sect will use its strength to help you ascend. I hope that after you ascend, you can find a way to save the sect in the fairy world. Today you are standing on the Immortal Platform to break through the tribulation period, and colorful divine lights descend from the sky to lift you up. During the process of ascension, you watch the earth under your feet getting farther and farther away from you, and the entire world of immortality gradually appears before your eyes. Suddenly you find that the world of immortality is like a huge island suspended in the universe. There is a huge pot underneath the island, and the sky is like a huge pot lid. Just when you look at this scene and feel extremely panicked and at a loss, you have unknowingly ascended to the fairyland. At a glance, the fairy world is deserted. Just when you wanted to explore around, someone suddenly shouted from behind: "Fellow Taoist, please stay!" As soon as you turned around, you were enveloped in darkness...

To be honest, I feel that the writing is very good. After reading the novel for so long, I am still interested in this kind of fast food. The writing is very good, and I don't need to talk to others.

Why don't the protagonist go rob a tomb and train the bones of an awesome character?

The cheats are so open and have to be suppressed. Jin Dandu is the sect master, but Foundation Establishment is still an outer disciple.

There are no good people in this sect. What kind of rubbish is this? Why don't we just kill them all? I don't even want to say that the senior sister is also rubbish. I even accepted it.

The writing is very good. Although there are suspicions of abuse of the protagonist in the early stage, which makes the protagonist be coerced, the author's writing style is good and he uses various funny jokes to dilute the atmosphere of intrigue, making it not so heavy in the eyes. I hope the author will ignore too many gossips and keep writing.

I opened Wang Mozun's diary and looked it up. The four words "benevolence, justice and morality" were written crookedly on every page. I couldn't sleep anyway, so I read carefully for half the night, and then I saw the words between the words. There were two words written all over the book: "Eat people"!

It's well written and you can see that it has its own ideas. Just polish the details a little more.

Some trees will die if you keep them 😔

Really cannibalistic? Ah? Demonic flow? Kill kill kill kill?

For a fun-themed article, it is best not to be chased by the villain plot in the early stage, otherwise the article will not be enjoyable.

It's very well written, and your spiritual practice system is very similar to that of the nuclear bomb saint.

It's not an invincible cool article, nor is it an article about torturing the main character. I really don't know where I am torturing the main character. Although it is a calculation, now is the time for the protagonist to benefit. With so many resources, why should I give them to you if you don't join the game? A strong person who transforms into a god is plotting. The protagonist is still weak now, so how can he pretend to be awesome? I'm looking for death. I won't go into details about the follow-up arrangements. Please take a detour to read the Invincible Liushuang article. I see that most of the people who abuse the master are junior users. Well...

It's a spoiler, and secondly, it's written too casually and frivolously.