My Game Library Has Become Trial of the Ancient God?

The protagonist is given too much, and there is almost no description of other characters except Wang Yifa

The subject matter is okay, but I watched half of it. There were too few descriptions of the protagonist, and it was not enjoyable. It was all about Wang Yifa. The protagonist is just a tool man who buffs Wang Yifa. It is better to say that Wang Yifa is the protagonist, the chosen one. He also programs and writes code to make games. I directly recruited Zhao Yili. I mentioned earlier that Zhao Yili is an insider with super powers, and her abilities are related to programming and the Internet. It was written as a novice, and the protagonist was taught to write code by her in a dream, which was somewhat humorous.

After reading the whole novel, I don't understand what the author wants to write. The whole novel is like a metaphor for a cave. Both sides are making fuss about the shadows on the wall. It is also not clear whether this god is the protagonist or a cat. The writing is nondescript 😥 In short, it is not highly recommended to read.

Despite its flaws, it's still quite interesting. I recommend it + give it a monthly pass to encourage it.

A producer who wants to teach players how to play the game and a new player with super powers who doesn't know the rules of the game.

You have to write that the protagonist realizes the connection between his dream and the mobile steam review, otherwise wouldn't this be a forced intelligence reduction? It doesn't matter if there is something wrong with those cats that you didn't realize before. Otherwise, it can only be the author's own self-help article.

The protagonist is so stupid. I don't know why it's not popular anymore. It's because when reading novels, you always assume the role of the protagonist. If you act like this, no one will want to take the role, so no one will read it.

After not looking at the data for a few days, I suddenly found that the data had skyrocketed, and I didn't know which recommendation had the effect. A young newcomer has no virtue and no ability, and is extremely frightened. Thank you for your opinions and suggestions. This book is indeed too fragmented. Every day I integrate the interesting ideas and inspirations from the previous day into it, and finally come up with such a strange four-part article of game + daily life + group portrait + superpower. Moreover, the writing in the four parts is not very good and lacks a lot. Since there are so many people watching, I will try to figure out a short-term main line in the next few days (the long-term main line is only a rough idea), and then open a long-term copy, fix the perspective a little more, and see the effect. That's it for now, thank you again for your appreciation.

To be honest, it's not interesting. The protagonist looks like a fool throughout the whole process. All the coincidences and connotations are completely ignored. Although I know it is the author's setting, this does not conform to the logic of human behavior.

I took some time to read through all the previous content and found many problems. First, it jumps too fast and switches perspectives too frequently. Indeed, after reading it myself, I felt that the impression was not very good. Before writing the book, I read my experience on Zhihu and said that it is best to compress the essence into the first three chapters, so I wrote in a hurry and always wanted to show everything. This will be changed later. Second, the copy is just a light click, without detailed description, and it is not interesting. At that time, I was thinking of replicating the copy, and Wang Yifa would spread it as a believer to teach others how to "play the game" incorrectly. I planned to write it in more detail later, but I inserted the Dota section in the middle, so it will be postponed later. Third, this large-scale competition is only to delineate the world structure and display many settings in this way, such as the masters of various countries, top skills, etc. I won't spend so much space writing about these later. Readers who don't like to read this, please be patient. The tentative plan is to return to the "game introduction mode" after writing the game, and then focus on writing the growth of those with ordinary abilities, and then increase the frequency and scope of dungeons. Thank you to the readers who have been following, voting, and giving rewards. Thank you for your support. If you have any questions, you can leave a comment at any time and I will read it.

It feels like the author is not writing a novel, but just pouring out the things in his mind, which is messy and disorderly.

After reading more than 10 chapters, what is revealed is that it is full of nonsense. If you ask, it is nonsense. If you ask, there are only people from one country who are human beings, and how many people can be supporting characters. People from other countries are not human beings at all and do not deserve to be supporting actors. . . Seeing that in the small days, the country was basically destroyed, and the living ones had no brains to worship the criminals who destroyed the country. No matter how bad the small days were, it was still a developed country. The citizens had compulsory education and would not be stupid to that extent. Is the author expressing that a group of educated people just don't like to live their own good lives, and they insist on living a life of being abused in various ways, not having enough to eat, and living in various senses of insecurity? . . . In addition, Xiaori is the little brother of Eagle, so Ying has no way to do anything about it, so he just lets Xiaori be like this, and Eagle will no longer suck Xiaori's blood. . . . . The white text is not suitable for old bookworms. . . .

The creativity is interesting, but the writing is terrible. The typical ideas are OK, but the author's ability is limited and he is helpless.

What can I say? Nowadays, the protagonist who knows nothing is not very popular. This theme seems to be more thoughtful. That is because no one writes it. If the writing is not good, it will pull the crotch.

How could such an interesting idea be written so boringly?

Brother, you jump from point of view too often. Changing the point of view in one chapter makes the reading experience very fragmented. It's not that you can't jump, but you have to write a point of view to almost leave it in suspense before jumping. Now it's completely random.

I watched the latest one again and felt a bit bored. Searching for immortality is very difficult. A novice will die quickly if he doesn't read the guide. On the one hand, the author wanted to write that some people can detect the market and make profits, but the actual effect gave me a feeling of overall intelligence. The protagonist is playing a game. From the perspective of the protagonist, no one is playing at all. Even though he is playing a bunch of mods and magic modifications, this is true even in competitive games. If you were making a game seriously and then someone else cheated you, the author would be angry. In fact, the protagonist didn't do anything. From the perspective of the protagonist, this has become a fight between cheaters.

It feels like a mess to me

The vision is in a mess, and thoughts come out one after another. If it is a group portrait, adjust the field of view switching carefully. One chapter can even change two horizons. No one will read it if you write it this way. But you are not a group portrait

I feel that the author wants to express a lot, but the connection is not very good. It feels like a hammer in one place and a hammer in the west. I hope the author can optimize it.

What age is it? Does anyone still like the Riddler series? Another trope where I don't know how many chapters or will never tell the protagonist that he is a god in a dimension beyond the current world. As long as the author likes it, after all, no one stipulates that writing a book is for making money or for others to read. You can also write a book when you are bored and post it on the platform, and then in the end, the banquan is not yours and you can enjoy it for yourself.

The writing is too complicated and messy, and the power system is not sorted out. Each game is just like going through the motions, just one screen. The protagonist is used as a comma and a period. The main plot is a mess, and it is completely a hammer here and a stick here and there.

The writing feels a bit dry, and it feels like the author has a lot of ideas, but is very poor at expressing them in words. It's not that I can't understand it, but it feels like a hammer hitting something here and there. I feel like jumping around while watching it, and then I don't want to read it anymore.

It's messy, it's really messy. I suggest the author sort it out. It smells like shit-smelling chocolate. I can only say it's readable.

Toxic... Forget it, wait a minute

The author group cut four books in two days, including a historical text that I am chasing. Of course not everyone goes to play games. Since the night of the 20th, I have been working until 4:30 every day, and then got up at 7:30 to go to work. I only sleep for three hours, and I feel numb every morning. So it is true that the state is a little bad. According to the plot, these days are supposed to be about sacrifice in exchange for victory, which can be regarded as a small climax. But my brain is stuck. Sometimes I can't come up with a word for a long time. This paragraph is not written well. That's it for now, I'll come back to fix it after I finish the first game.

I can't say I enjoyed it, but I finished reading it smoothly in one breath, very smooth Come on~