Gao Wu: Starting from Awakening the Origin of Thunder and Lightning

No brother, I feel that the woman in Chapter 18 is really a failure, there is no sign at all, and what kind of woman does Gao Wu want to do, women will only affect the speed of drawing the sword, self-improvement, infinite strength is true love❤️

Not as good as a man-girl, a succubus, whose gender has changed.

I can only say that this kind of slow-burning book is not suitable for new authors.

It's 100,000 words, and I have something to say. In the early stage, I was too embarrassed to ask for anything. Now that the protagonist has stood up, I boldly ask all readers to collect it and read it. Read it to the last chapter every day 🙏 The author has written 100,000 words, and it has not been recommended even once. It is really difficult. The author is writing a book for the first time and lacks experience. He failed to keep up with the mainstream of online literature in time. There were some ordinary people in front of him, but his strength improved quickly and he caught up. I can guarantee that even though I am a newbie, this book will not be too confusing. The author bows down here, not writing well and thanking everyone for your support🙏🙏🙏

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't help but ask, has the whole province given up, and only those who have passed the federal education institutions can cross provinces, while the others are waiting to die?

The book is still immature and green, so poor grades are inevitable.

Let's talk about the advantages first, otherwise I will be here to find fault and persuade you to quit. There are no old-fashioned routines, such as parents who have died but a sister has a house; there are also relatives who are in school who have to support themselves, and the grievances and hatreds between the cheeky start and the school belle... (Additional: The parents are indeed dead, but there is no sister, but there is a genius neighbor sister) The first shortcoming is that the progress is very slow. To put it in detail, the cheating speed is too slow. After so many chapters, the physical quality has been improved, and there is a guy who sucks electricity for unknown purposes. The second is that the plot advancement is very stiff. Yin Yue moves in for no apparent reason. At least he should be the Riddler to scare the protagonist. It is true that he will stay for money... If the protagonist is prepared, is he prepared? Such as defense. After the fight in the arena, he was kidnapped and then sent back. It was quite strange here. I guessed it was an ambush, but it was too harsh. There is also an inexplicable attempt to grab the life crystal. According to the author's description, he risked his life to grab it, right? Didn't the protagonist risk his life to grab resources just to advance in the first year when he still has two years to prepare? Third, there are some minor issues with the details. In Chapter 28, what was bought? It was said that because the protagonist is a bereaved family member, he could buy it. Then the protagonist's reaction was that his eyes lit up? 🤔 (It is recommended to change it to: complex eyes) The following are personal suggestions: 1. Add some early tricks. For example, the protagonist can use basic attacks to bring paralysis effects. If he is attacked by a sneak attack after coming out of the arena, he can use this and that girl's limit to exchange one, and then be picked up by another person, and then send the protagonist back. There are also things like storing electricity/releasing the electricity stored in the body. This can be used without it, but it cannot be left out. It is equivalent to a trump card and is used for deterrence. It makes sense that the protagonist can leave Silver Moon for 💰. Going to grab the life crystal later would be considered reckless with a way out, so I wrote that he was rescued by someone when he was preparing to discharge, instead of rushing in and being rescued like now. 2. For the later stages of the story, I think we should add some talent or luck to the protagonist, or if it doesn't feel good in the early stage, we should make it more funny, so that the protagonist can live a fuller life, and the rice noodles will be lower, so that readers will have the desire to continue reading in the early stage. (For example, when the protagonist absorbs electricity, his hair will stand up because he cannot fully absorb it. He usually puts some hairspray on it to make an afro to cover it up; when he fights, he pretends to be numb but actually discharges electricity) The above is purely a personal opinion, and has no intention of guiding or forcing the author to change the outline. I just want to read better novels and discuss them based on my own understanding.

The normal plot of this book is okay and considered good. For example, the protagonist's fight and training process cannot be said to be excellent, but at least it is not a big problem. But the plot of meeting a woman starts to disgust me, so just skip them. There is no need to watch it. After watching it, I will feel nothing but discomfort.

I thought it was called Awakening Phone Book! ! ! !

Even though my hometown was flooded, I couldn't watch it. You flooded the entire coast and I can still be happy!

At least there is something in this Gaowu book. I won't say whether it's good or not. It's not like others who all copied it from the same model.

Originally I thought it was about mastering thunder and lightning, but now you are a training accelerator. So why are you using lightning one after another? Why don't you just increase your training experience and increase your special attributes?

Again, if you don't promote your initial status, write it a little higher. It's too difficult for ordinary people to be streamed. Please read and support it.

It's only been three updates since it was released, and I've lost all desire to subscribe 😅

I hope the author balances the attributes, there is no strongest attribute, and uses various opportunities to get the attributes to their strongest form.

There are only two or three on the shelves, so I'm not in the mood to subscribe.

Well written, he has the qualifications to become a god

I would like to ask the author how much the initial order is, and can he insist on writing 500,000 words?