Zhutian: I Have Many Inventory

The writing of "Journey to the West" and "The Great Wilderness" is too bad. The homogenization is too serious. The "Primordial Age" fandom is all about high-level talk. There are no good works, and it looks a bit dramatic, which is very embarrassing.

It is said that it is the heavens, but the result is that it is stuck in the Beggar Monk Trilogy, and Journey to the West is another replica of the Monk and Taoist Trilogy. It's all Dongxuan, where is your point of competition? Zhutianliu, the worlds in your profile have long been poorly written.

The image of the protagonist has not been established. This problem was already there in Yitian. As a result, it became more serious in the one-person roll. What on earth do you, the protagonist, want to do? Become stronger? Then what? Yitianjuan at least has a "family" and a master who makes the protagonist look like a human being. But when a person doesn't even have these, what does the protagonist want to do? The light becomes stronger? Author, you'd better not forget what is the most important thing about Zhutianwen. It's not just to watch you, the protagonist, become stronger and then do nothing. What's the plot of the original novel, the protagonist is here, and so on. Then why don't I read the original novel and come to read the novel? In order to become stronger, you kill people at all costs, whether the plot collapses, you don't like the tragedy of the original work and want to change it, or you just want to have fun. You, the protagonist, need to be active. Only when there is change and conflict can it be dramatic and interesting. Why do some people like to criticize novels with female protagonists? Because some people's emotional dramas are really poorly written, so why do others criticize them for writing stories that don't have a heroine? Just because there is a novel author who is not good at writing about love does not mean that he can write about family, friendship, brotherhood, friendship between teachers and students. Maybe if there is no heroine and he writes about pure boiled water for a long time, it is better to write more vases with heroines who can only be erotic. Therefore, as an author, you have to think carefully about how you want to write. At least the protagonist must be active and find something to do. There must be a description of the protagonist's personality, otherwise what will you let readers see?

Development direction: The first type, the super god system, treats the inventory as a dark plane, using technological or fantasy healing equipment (magical tools), quantum supercomputing or deduction magic tools, technological or fantasy attack props, water drops or defensive treasures (Defense), sophons (similar to sacred atoms), algorithms (Sha Niu algorithm data of Magic Phone), etc... The best way is to equip them all with magical weapons that grow with their own growth, so that frequent updates are not needed. The second type is to pick up the corpses of strong people, search for their memories, borrow their talents, incredible understanding, etc., Integrate the strengths of hundreds of schools of thought, and create a technique suitable for you. The third method is to equip the octopus gene to the item bar. The octopus has the ability to edit its own genes. It can first fuse the genes of other organisms in the item bar to see what changes have been made, and then work backwards to determine the feasible plan for gene fusion. In the later stage, it is possible to achieve a hundred thousand times life gene level.

It's quite strange. The protagonist becomes Xiantian, and then the Yuan Kingdom also has Xiantian. The original work states that Yang Dingtian is invincible except for Zhang Sanfeng. The only ones close to Yang Dingtian are Kong Jian and Sandu. The second-level Qiankun Yang Xiao is no weaker than Xuan Ming Yi Lao and belongs to the top of the world. The fourth-level Yang Dingtian is only weaker than Zhang Sanfeng. It is clear at a glance that the Yuan needle is clear. Yuan has not surpassed Yang Dingtian level, while Guangmingding Zhang Wuji has surpassed Yang Dingtian.

Goldfinger is quite fascinating, but among the worlds I went to, I could only read one Dou Po, and the others were all torn apart. I haven't read the book, so I'll give you an introduction.

Overall, this book is of average quality Most of the worlds selected are worlds that have been poorly written. The only highlight is the author's settings for Goldfinger. But it may be that the author is afraid of not being able to grasp the protagonist's cheating strength. The Golden Finger is a lot weaker than what is written in the introduction. It is half as good as it is and makes people uncomfortable. It's really not good in a track with serious involution like Zhutian Muliu. The setting of Golden Finger has been decided, so I still hope that the author can choose some less bad ones in the next world choices, such as some anime and TV series that are also popular in the industry.

By the way, why does it have to be Iron Man? Wouldn't it be okay to go to those big temples and steal a big bronze bell? This thing will not be strictly guarded. It can be stuffed directly into the inventory. No one will suspect you without being seen.

Seeing that the protagonist wants to exchange Xie Xun's whereabouts for black jade intermittent cream, I think this guy is quite interesting. However, the subsequent plot has entered the routine of every Yitian world. It feels like I have an obsessive-compulsive disorder and I have to go through all the NPCs or plots. And the protagonist's heart is even darker than Zhang Wuji's. Those who don't know may think you are using the villain system. Overall, I recommend reading it. I hope the author can write new tricks.

Fighting to break the world is not interesting. The protagonists in the previous worlds are all using their own inventory, and the imagination seems quite interesting. However, in fighting to break the world, it has embarked on the traditional upgrade fantasy flow. The core is to find different fires to analyze the rules, which is a bit boring.

The golden finger is too vague, but the world of Yitian is better. You can practice martial arts quickly, and you can also come up with fantastic ideas such as stone and molten iron. The world of one person begins to be chaotic, and you can do all kinds of exercises. 1.0 1.7 And the like are getting more and more confusing, and there is not much plot content. Most of them are merging skills and so on. When the protagonist's personality starts to conflict, it depends on the author. You ask the readers how to treat Xiao Yan. Kill them all the way, or have a good relationship with Xiao Yan. The reason why readers think you lick Xiao Yan is Because you made an unnecessary move and wrote about grabbing Xiao Yan's opportunity and intending to compensate him. There is no need to write it out. You directly exchanged the Green Lotus Fire for the Bone Spirit Cold Fire and the Golden Emperor's Burning Sky Flame. This is enough. It is a normal transaction behavior. However, the author has superfluous and unnecessary writing about the psychological activities of the protagonist who wants to compensate Xiao Yan. Weren't Zhang Wuji and Zhang Chulan handled the situation very well before? Without the Nine Yang Divine Skill, Zhang Wuji was directly reduced to a small supporting role with few roles. Zhang Chulan had no intention of contacting him from the beginning. Why did he want to compensate Xiao Yan when he came here? Just because Xiao Yan is also a time traveler? You didn't explicitly write about licking, but the protagonist's behavior gives people the feeling of licking.

Is it a eunuch? Is this not updated?

Reading the introduction reminds me of a super package for reading books

What is the main plot? It feels like the protagonist becomes a chicken head and then goes to another world to be a phoenix tail. Just don't care about Yitian World?

I saw in the title that there is a second-rate realm, and second-rate is not a realm, it is level! Similar to the test scores above the first level! It is a range of strength! When did being second-rate and first-rate become a state?😡

Is there a Shen Nong 😰

Go to cover the sky, put the fragments of the fairy weapon in the inventory, and become invincible in the restricted area.

I have never seen it before, and I look at it indifferently. Even though there are still chapters I bought that I haven't read yet, forget it. Goodbye

If you can put a wisp of Xiantian Yiqi into the item inventory, you can infer the technique to advance to the realm of Xiantian Yiqi. The innate Qi, the innate Five Tai, the origin of all things in the universe, can evolve all things with the innate Qi.

Write carefully! ! No more water? ! ! ! !

This author, this protagonist, and this novel are the complete collection of Tuojudu. May the author LLLII/IIL/QJS/···

After reading Chapter 23, the 100th birthday plot ends, and then directly transitions to the protagonist going down the mountain. During this period, the protagonist has no explanation for the previous unpredictable plot? It doesn't matter what Zhang Sanfeng has in mind. Even if you say he thinks the protagonist awakens Su Hui, I agree, but the protagonist doesn't even explain the patch? If people don't say it, it will be over? It's so sloppy! Has anyone seen the back? I can't wait to see if there is a patch later, otherwise it will be really poisonous.

I have conceived this idea before, for example, putting an iron block in the frame of the head protection. In reality, it is the iron head skill.

I have seen something similar to this setting, but it was about the Republic of China period.

This book is a rare piece of pure Taoist literature. The protagonist has been pursuing the path forward, and he can also treat some so-called treasures and the protagonist of the plot reasonably. Although the writing of Fighting to Break the World is too good, and the dialogue is not at the level of a master, for me, this book is already a rare good book in the vast sea of ​​books.

There is a problem. Directly exposing Xie Xun's location during Yitian Zhang Sanfeng's 100th birthday is very problematic. In fact, the protagonist can make arrangements in advance and expose it secretly, such as getting a name that no one knows about and exposing it in advance in the form of prophecy. Predicting Zhang Cuishan's return in advance, and then revealing the location of Binghuo Island in private, should not be exposed in public. You must know that in the author's plot, Yu Daiyan is the guarantee, and the protagonist only knows the location of Binghuo Island. If it is exposed in public, who cares about Yu Daiyan? It's like you want to borrow hundreds of thousands from your uncle, but your uncle didn't want to, and your father was the guarantee, so he finally got the loan. Then you break the contract the next moment, saying that your uncle's money is dirty money and you don't plan to pay it back. Whose face do you think you are losing? Who do you think will repay this debt in the end? It is your father who is the guarantor. If your father wants face, he has to pay it back. If he can't afford it, he will pay it with his life. Do you understand? His appearance and face completely disgraced the protagonist In addition, in the original work, Wudang did not know where Xie Xun was at all. With Zhang Cuishan's personality, even if the Wudang Seven Heroes asked, he would not tell. Therefore, in the original work, only Zhang Wuji knew after the death of Zhang Cuishan and his wife. Zhang Wuji's bumpy fate was also because he carried this secret. In your case, Zhang Cuishan directly revealed it after meeting Yu Daiyan. Is this Zhang Cuishan? The twisted original work is not so twisted either.