Pirate: Call Me Magneto

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out out of the factory, just go to the factory to make screws. After a few days of training at the beginning, you can be 50-50 equal to the navy vice admiral who can do two colors and domineering in your own department, and the deserter king is not as bad as you. Also, the conversation with the Vice Admiral of the Navy Headquarters was so embarrassing that I had to leave the three rooms and one hall. The dignified Vice Admiral of the Navy Headquarters actually asked a newcomer for his nickname. Moreover, there was no systematic description of the process of the protagonist becoming stronger. Even the fruit development was quite abstract. Even if you go to a future technological kingdom to systematically learn knowledge. Knowledge, and then turned into a lot of skills, I also recognized it, but if you just learn the brainless exercise of the Deserter King, and then roughly develop the fruit a few times, without being domineering, you can be 50-50 equal to the Vice Admiral of the Navy Headquarters. If Kidd's fruit in the original book was really so awesome, he would have reached the top of the Yonko when he first challenged the red-haired one.

Ducici is a fruit, but he is not a crazy guy 😏

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The comment section is full of double standards. Oda cheats the character and destroys his combat power: Good! Big tail, no need to say more! The fan author cheats the character: it is illogical, the combat power is broken, and it is rubbish!

The magnetic fruit has its own lightning on its surface⚡️

Why has no one written about Huo Banxian? After eating the fruit, he awakens his innate voodoo body, which passively reflects all damage and is 100% indefensible against real damage. You know how I have lived these ten years, do you know? Do you know how much I suffered in order to develop this indestructible body? The world's greatest swordsman slashed me and he died. There was no joy in fighting. Even dogs wouldn't eat this straw fruit 🤓

The writing is the same as the movie version of Luffy Previous post: The magnetic fruit can control a cannonball, but it can only go as far as two hundred meters before losing control Next post: Defeat the Vice Admiral Previous post: The electromagnetic push coin developed with great concentration can be as powerful as a bullet Next post : Defeat the Shichibukai natural-type rustling fruit user Previous post: The electromagnetic push can only discharge 10,000 volts, which is one thousandth of the power of Enero's normal attack Next post: Defeat Enero, the God of Sky Island Did it go through your mind when you wrote it? If the protagonist is weak, he should develop first. You don't mean to say harsh things while also having no strength, but you also forcefully write about him defeating powerful enemies It gives me the feeling that you are desperately suppressing the growth of the protagonist, and on the other hand, you are afraid that the protagonist will not have a strong record.

You are not crazy, so what do you write? Magnetic Field Novel.

Did you develop the Magneto Fruit into Magneto? At least we need to turn on a magnetic field to rotate, right?

It is reasonable for a Lanjiao to fly across the whole group into the dead sea without even meeting the Lieutenant General. It's difficult to control more than a dozen cannonballs, but you can still make the lieutenant general vomit blood? A mole can chop a few hundred meters of Neptune like a melon in a windless zone, and a 300-million-meter-high Luffy on top can be chopped like vegetables. At least find out what you are writing a book about?

Magneto is really not that good, but Qing Xiaobing is a bit more awesome. In a world like Pirates where the average person has a superhuman body, he is a bit unable to do anything.

The description of the battle is too lame, and the description of the fight with the lieutenant general is not as strong as that of Young and Dangerous.

I can't stand it anymore. After finishing high school physics, you should be able to understand the concept of kinetic energy of an object. When I beat the lieutenant general and when I tested my ability, I acted like the author didn't even understand Newton's three laws. The function of the magnetic field is to allow you to shoot bullets that are continuously accelerated and strengthened by the magnetic field. This is equivalent to the fact that every time the bullet flies a certain distance in the magnetic field, it is accelerated by the explosion of gunpowder while still in the gun. Even Hokage Kishimoto knows that the power is greater after speeding up (Raikage goes to Tsunade to treat poison and fight with Tsunade)

It's not as good as the original work, which completely reproduces Luffy's route.

After reading a few chapters, I was very disappointed. I just went to sea and could fight against the two-color Haki Lieutenant General of the armored animal type. I did this right from the beginning. How could I say that I was weaker than him and could kill all the sailors in front of him? Can you withstand the full blow of the armed Haki? It's so speechless.

Why did you write Kidd to walk around and fly? The original novel is a love story. The protagonist doesn't have much growth.

It's so embarrassing that I'm still playing house...

The protagonist is indeed not very smart, so he picks the navy at the beginning just to increase the bounty?

It feels like I'm writing a fanfic without watching the anime. Shichibukai Laosha would rather go to Impel Down for further studies than be conquered. There's no original work at all.

Magneto in the comics can even use magnetic fields to strengthen his body and become immortal or even basically immortal.

The author's writing is very good and definitely worth reading and subscribing to. I recommend a book that is decisive in killing, clever and joyful. "An old man in time travels to pick up rags and makes a living by making bad movies", which is hilarious...

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

You could add some words for the sounds made during fighting, such as bang, bang, etc.

By the way, can a magnetic field control Hailou Stone?

To control the magnetic field, you must know that everything in the world has a magnetic field, and you will know how strong this ability is. Humans and animals cannot do without the magnetic field. What do you think will happen if this person's magnetic field is taken away?

I just want to say one thing, electromagnetic force ≠ magnet. I won't go into more details. I can't finish it. Starting planet-level combat power, just watch the physics video explanation. If human beings can possess this thing, they will be a pseudo-creator! Except for gravity and the microscopic realm smaller than the nucleus of an atom, everything is controlled by this thing, ranging from transforming matter to dragging the planet and sun and transforming the universe. To put it simply, light and electricity are all electromagnetic waves, and everything has electromagnetic force.